A while ago i started on "Brawls big day out" just for fun, but it wasnt really supposed to be a series, so I decided to begin a new one.

This comic is supposed to be partially fun and partially serious business, the story doesnt begin until next episode though I believe.... I have fun reading the comics on this forum and I hope some of you guys will also like mine.

Feedback is much appreciated, It's pretty hard to know if an episode is funny/exciting/good when you've seen it so many times  

 

  not bad of a start.

 

Y0u eat the cookie!!

ROFL!! awe that's good stuff. Brings us some more now!

 

 

Great start so far!!

 

Not bad at all   I could so feel Grimlock's anger here, especially in the "cookie" scene. Likin' how you handle the character  

The part about Scorponok reminded me of Space Quest 5...

 

Yay! A smart Grimlock!   I love the "cookie" scenes.  

 

  Well done!!!   on the cookie part! can't wait for more!

 

I loved Brawl's Big Day Out, and this is great too!

 

Thanks for all the puns, hopefully I can hold your attention until the $#%$ hits the fan....(the story gets going) and of course keep it fun to read

I am happy you liked both  

I'm hopin' I can create sum fun characters, and I hope I can avoid having cliche characters as key characters...... 

 

i liked it!  

 

 

Hey, I don't blame him. Scorpy doesn't want to be tracked!

 

Ha brilliant you eat the cookies silly scoropy!

 

I was originally planning on releasing the next bit about now, but I haven't got everything right yet.

Not completely sure about the serious/funny, story/character building, you know.. balancing issues....

Anyhow.. I'll get to the point, I made this short bit for a "make a comic" thing on another forum, and I used a scrapped idea for transdudes...(the characters are dumped indefinitely becuz they weren't special in any way...)

so here it is...




feel free to comment

 

Lol thats histerical give it to him cliffjumper!

 

 
Just read your strips so far and they're fantastic. Grimlock is especially chuckleworthy (No no no you EAT the cookie!)
Bring on more!

 

  that was a very funny update.

Really nice work with the camera  

 

Go Cliffjumper!  

Thanx, It takes up quite some time actually

Thank you, ask and you shall receive

Oh, and before I forget.. I have a question for you guys:
With the Transdudes episodes I don't bother to make it look like a comic page and stuff, but with "The Exchange" short strip I did. Now the reason I don't do this with Transdudes is because I spend time getting crispy shots and sometimes I think cramming it together in a "page" takes away the nice detail in some shots. However, the comic page thing does give a nice effect and feel to it... soo... I'm just curious if you guys think I made the wrong decision not adding the comic page stuff to this strip...

And again, much feedback = win, so go ahead and give me your 2 cents 

 

This Grimlock's really hard to put one's finger on   He's bot dam smart and a no-good-thug  

And not to mention Scorponok...