Yet Another Shinki Comic

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by SFGMaster, Mar 16, 2008.

  1. Deviant Anomaly

    Deviant Anomaly Obsotted Fangirl

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    Good advice there. I recently started doing that for my comic and the shots have been much better. :) 

    Reflector walking off mad at being replaced. :lol 
     
  2. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Heh heh.
    I can't help but think that the local police might have a "file" on Reflector...
     
  3. Brawlastator

    Brawlastator it is our life - jon bovi

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    You could say the pun was udderly horrible.
     
  4. SFGMaster

    SFGMaster Owns a Juvisy

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    Um... I guess I could, but I'm not gonna. ;)  You bumped this all the way from last week just to say that? XD
    Oh well, I was ready to bump it myself anyway. I'm taking a shot at a more serious story now, hopefully it'll go over well.

    Episode 6: Seed

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    I hope Arnval's stand doesn't detract from things too much. I decided a while back I'd leave the super-cool special effects to the masters like Chaos Incarnate, Polenicus, Coolhand, et al. I'm just telling a story with toys. I mean, even if I tried to edit out the stand, they're still standing on a TiVo. :lol 
     
  5. puppylove

    puppylove mini ops caretaker

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    i don't mind the stand at all! great opening for a more serious storyline! :thumb 
     
  6. Chaos Incarnate

    Chaos Incarnate Not just a name.

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    That's a great start! Keep it up, and don't concern yourself with effects. Story comes first, and everything else is icing.
     
  7. ShadowDragon

    ShadowDragon R to the D to the D yo.

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    Yep, story > effects. Now we just need to get Michael Bay to understand that.
     
  8. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    I didn't even notice the Tivo till you mentioned it!! great story or good laughs, who cares about the rest. And your story is off and running. Rickety Prime, cool.
     
  9. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    :lolol 
    I just LOVE the way that they're loading that Shinki onto Prime's trailer WITH A JCB BUCKET!

    Exactly. End of the day, effects are nice eye candy but it's the STORY that matters. Good jokes and/or good story are what keep me reading a strip and this one's looking good so far. :thumbs2: 
     
  10. SFGMaster

    SFGMaster Owns a Juvisy

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    Umm... would it be bad if I admitted that I have no idea what that means? :eek:  I just thought he looked like he turned into some kind of front-loader thing. H'ray for unintentional humor! :lol 

    Thanks everyone for the positive reinforcements! I'll try to keep 'em coming at a somewhat-regular pace so that the cliffhangers don't 'hang' for too long. :) 
     
  11. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Uwa? This comic has taken a serious turn?

    But a nice start, and I agree with the everyone else here that substance > eye-candy.

    Juvisy makes such a great damsel in distress.
     
  12. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    I nevy your Galaxy Force Starscream.

    He's one of my biggest grails.
     
  13. SFGMaster

    SFGMaster Owns a Juvisy

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    You ain't seen nothin' yet. :wink:  The funny isn't gone for good or anything, though, I just came up with a story I wanted to try to tell too.

    Anyway, sorry this took so long. There were some personal issues. I won't say what the bad news was, but the good news was "at least I didn't die." (Heck, the way things are going, maybe that's the bad news.) But y'all don't need to worry about that, I don't suppose...

    So enough of that! On with the show!

    Episode 7: Loss

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    So... all you people that were complaining a while back that the Shinkis never lose in these comics? I hope you're happy now. :ev: 
     
  14. Greyryder

    Greyryder Kitbashed

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    Ship the pieces off to Shame's comic. More Shinki stew.
     
  15. SFGMaster

    SFGMaster Owns a Juvisy

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    Nah, this one's well done already. Silverbolt only uses fresh ingredients. :D 
     
  16. Falldown

    Falldown Well-Known Member

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    :eek:  Wow. Didn't expect that. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
     
  17. Deviant Anomaly

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    I'd say being blasted into a hundred pieces is far more than just losing. :lol 
     
  18. Chaos Incarnate

    Chaos Incarnate Not just a name.

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    Oh, you know Shinkis, they just bounce right back.

    Uh......maybe.
     
  19. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Silverbolt will be watching for the delivery truck. :D 
     
  20. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Yowch. o_O