Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Armentitron, May 8, 2013.
Done in biro pen.
You bold mother-trucker.
Not bad at all. Lots of little details and good proportions.
If I may give some advice? Perhaps you could consider to vary your line widths, in order to make sections more easily identifiable to the eye when you're working with so many small parts to make larger composite parts or have complex parts on top of one another. If you use slightly thicker lines (can be as much as half a line thicker) as outlines for for instance major sections like arms, torso, etc. then it's easier for the eye to group parts into one of these limb sections and you can also use this to suggest depth (things in front of other things).
So basically, distinguish between detail and I guess the more "defining" lines.
One other point of critique, about the pose: it kinda feels like the lower leg on our left hand side is slightly twisted at the knee joint. Possibly due to the perspective you wanted to give his foot. Perhaps it would feel more natural if you twisted the ankle with respect to the lower leg, than the lower leg with respect to the upper leg? (Or each to a smaller degree in rotating steps?). Not sure if you wanted to ground him or have the foot in the air, but I think the toes could be more horizontal for that effect too. You've drawn joints there: use them!
Overall good work though!
Nice. Absolutely loving the level of detail.
Coincidently, I'm doing a custom of this guy from FOC Bruticus/Ruination.
While a random necrothread I'm glad in this case. This is really cool and I'm a complete whore for game designs.
That's a wicked Defensor.
He was injured in a motorcycle accident.
Pretty cool concept. Would be nice to see individual member bot and alt modes.
Here you go.
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