2D Artwork: WFC/FOC Defensor

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Armentitron, May 8, 2013.

  1. Armentitron

    Armentitron Well-Known Member

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    Done in biro pen.

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  2. BLOODRAGED189

    BLOODRAGED189 In it for the engineering

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    That's sick!
     
  3. 12bulkhead

    12bulkhead Artist

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    You bold mother-trucker.
     
  4. Quintesson #1

    Quintesson #1 Eater of Fuzzy Stuff

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    Not bad at all. Lots of little details and good proportions. :) 


    If I may give some advice? Perhaps you could consider to vary your line widths, in order to make sections more easily identifiable to the eye when you're working with so many small parts to make larger composite parts or have complex parts on top of one another. If you use slightly thicker lines (can be as much as half a line thicker) as outlines for for instance major sections like arms, torso, etc. then it's easier for the eye to group parts into one of these limb sections and you can also use this to suggest depth (things in front of other things). :) 

    So basically, distinguish between detail and I guess the more "defining" lines. :) 

    One other point of critique, about the pose: it kinda feels like the lower leg on our left hand side is slightly twisted at the knee joint. Possibly due to the perspective you wanted to give his foot. Perhaps it would feel more natural if you twisted the ankle with respect to the lower leg, than the lower leg with respect to the upper leg? (Or each to a smaller degree in rotating steps?). Not sure if you wanted to ground him or have the foot in the air, but I think the toes could be more horizontal for that effect too. :)  You've drawn joints there: use them! ;) 

    Overall good work though!
     
  5. RobotKnight95

    RobotKnight95 Unamused and Insane

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    Nice. Absolutely loving the level of detail. :D 
    Coincidently, I'm doing a custom of this guy from FOC Bruticus/Ruination.
     
  6. Rexidus

    Rexidus Autobot

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    While a random necrothread I'm glad in this case. This is really cool and I'm a complete whore for game designs.
     
  7. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    That's a wicked Defensor.
     
  8. Armentitron

    Armentitron Well-Known Member

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    He was injured in a motorcycle accident.
     
  9. TheShockwave48

    TheShockwave48 Kinda sorta artist

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    Interesting design!
     
  10. Acid Wing

    Acid Wing Senior Alien TF Member

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    Pretty cool concept. Would be nice to see individual member bot and alt modes.
     
  11. RobotKnight95

    RobotKnight95 Unamused and Insane

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    Here you go. :) 
    Browse Art - deviantART
     
  12. Quintesson #1

    Quintesson #1 Eater of Fuzzy Stuff

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    Oh dear. :lol