Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by Moonminer, May 27, 2020.
Zoingo suggested i do warpath next, so here he is!
i welcome suggestions in the comments.
Do you could do Dia Atlas next?
this... I like!
I think any character you pick will look great, my suggestion is just draw more
I love your style and the colours you’ve chosen. My favourite bits are the hands and the smoke trailing from the inky tip of the barrel like a cigarette. His expression and tge grenade are great too.
I suggest the following for the bright yellow reflective lighting on the side of the torso:
Have the lighting come from the bottom up to match your hatching
Since you're using hatching as a form of graduation, the bright yellow highlight on the bottom of the side on the upper torso should be gradiated into the darker highlight instead of sticking out as a cut/cell shade. Any cut/cel shaded highlight shouldn't go over hatching.
Since you're coloring a drawing with hatching, it's best to shade/highlight with gradiation instead of cel shading. Here you have a mix but it's counteracting your inks instead of complimenting them.
This drawing is really cool! The way is is shaded and posed reminds me of the Marvel UK G1 comics, and the facial expression. Also I think Nightbeat would be a cool character to see done in this style.
Zowie! Always dug Warpath, and I love your drawing.
By suggestion i was more thinking what character i should do next. thanks for your feedback though. i just wanted to put yellow luster on red, not to reflect any kind of rules of reality or drawing rules.
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