Untitled Transformation 3

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Razorwing, Jul 21, 2009.

  1. BurnedAlive

    BurnedAlive Horrorcon

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    Really good

    probably the best TF3 fandom I have read
     
  2. Razorwing

    Razorwing The Fallen Alternity.

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    ^ thanks!

    new stuff coming soon guys. Not sure why no one else is commenting.
     
  3. Shockwaved

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    This is by far my favourite fan fiction that I've read.

    I think that fact that you killed off Sam's parents shows that no one's safe.
    Thats something thats missing from the movies, you just know they're all gonna survive (the main humans that is).
     
  4. Pasaway

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    I'm reading with every update :popcorn  it is good stuff. :thumbs2: 

    don't get dispointed, there are a lot of people that read, but never post, like myself most of the time.
     
  5. Razorwing

    Razorwing The Fallen Alternity.

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    Thanks guys.

    I did kill of Sam's parents as a motive for Sam to help the Autobots. I mean in the 1st 2 movies, there wasn't really a reason for Sam to help the Autobots. I realized then the story needs a drive.

    But yeah more coming soon..!!!
     
  6. sideswipe45

    sideswipe45 AUTOBOT

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    This would be an awesome start to the new movie.
     
  7. Razorwing

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    Ironhide looks around for any survivors of the attack.

    Jolt: Megatron did this. I know it.

    Sideswipe: but the marks.. looks like of Optimus's blade.

    Ironhide: can't be. Optimus went with the Major.

    Epps gets out of his Humvee. He spots a badly injured girl and assists her.

    Epps: Medic!

    We see the medical team from another Humvee rushing with medical gear. While this is happening, Jolt and Sideswipe notices something in the sky.

    Jolt: Decepticons! Get into cover!

    We see the F16s Seekers coming down and readying to deploy a massive carpet bombing.

    Ironhide: We need to divert them

    Sideswipe: We'll go and distract them.

    Prowl: I'm coming with you.

    Jolt: Me too.

    Sideswipe, Prowl and Jolt transforms while the F-16s come down really low. The 4 Autobots split into 2 directions to draw the Seeker's fire. But the seekers had other plans. They go immedeatley after the Nest team.

    Epps: RUN!

    As Nest team scrambles in chaos, the F-16s lay down fire, going back and forth. Soldiers running get shot down and Vehicles being blown up. Sideswipe, Ironhide, Prowl and Jolt transform and look as they see the whole team being killed.

    Sideswipe: let's go. come with me Jolt.

    Upon approaching the team, Sideswipe transforms infront of Jolt and he takes hit directly in the chest, so the rest of the surviving Nest team is safe.

    Ironhide: Sideswipe, are you ok?

    Sideswipe: Been better. Jolt, power me up.

    Jolt whips his electric whips onto Sideswipe's wings and they charge his blades up, so they turn really orange.(that is like the energon orange we see from Optimus's blades)

    Sideswipe: They are going to pay for this.

    He turns to the oncoming Seekers

    Sideswipe: I'LL TALKE ON ALL OF YOU!!!!!

    Ironhide: NO WAIT!!!

    Sideswipe whips out his blades and goes head to head with the oncoming Seekers.

    Once the Seekers were low enough, Sideswipe jumps and throws one of his blades into a F-16. The blade goes directly through the fueslage. With the plane going down, Sideswipe uses that as leavrage to pounce on to another Seeker.

    While pouncing, he takes the blade that is in the 1st seeker and runs it the nose cone to the tail end. While still on the 1st falling seeker, he throws the other two blades directly in to the other Seekers. The two others goes down and he jumps from the 1st seeker to the other two Seekers, collecting back his blades.

    The last Seeker transforms and starts shooting Sideswipe. Sideswipe takes a hit or 2 and takes his blades and stabs it right into the Decepticon. The last seeker falls as Sideswipe lands ontop of him with his blades stabbed into the Seeker's chest.

    Sideswipe: Justice is satsifying..

    Sideswipe then takes one of his blades out of the Seeker and stabs it right in the middle of the chest and takes the blade out. Upon coming out, we see the blade has actually ripped out the Spark.

    Sideswipe: and that will be the end of you.

    Sideswipe retracts his blades and Prowl is right behind him getting back to the surviving Nest team. Prowl transforms right nest to Sideswipe.

    Prowl: Sideswipe, are you ok?

    Prowl looks on the badly damage body of Sideswipe. We see energon leaking everywhere.

    Sideswipe: a bit damaged, but I should be alright.

    Jolt: We need to get you to Ratchet, he should be able to patch you up.

    Sideswipe: He is too far.. still in the Nest Base helping out with Arcee and her twins.

    A Nest Soldier sees in the distance a shadow in the midst of the dust.

    Nest Soldier: It's Optimus!

    Prowl: Wait.. it's.. Optimus? Why did you re-scan?

    Then coming out of the midst, we see Nemesis Prime and he transforms. Prowl without knowing it, goes to Nemesis Prime.

    Prowl: Optimus we took out the last remaning Decepticon strike team.

    Prowl then notices in the chest of Nemesis Prime, there is a Decepticon logo instead of a Autobot logo.

    Ironhide: Prowl get out of there!

    Nemesis Prime ejects his energon sword and stabs it through Prowl. Limpingly Prowl dies.

    Ironhide: NOO!!!!

    Nemesis Prime : Useless trash.

    Nemesis Prime retracts his blade.

    Nemesis Prime: Where is Optimus Prime?
     
  8. Shockwaved

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    The way Sideswipe took on those seekers was so cool, for a second I thought you were gonna kill him off.

    Poor Prowl.
     
  9. Pasaway

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    I liked that, Prowl always was kind of boring to me.

    :popcorn 
     
  10. Razorwing

    Razorwing The Fallen Alternity.

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    Bad news guys. The laptop that I had the script on is pretty much dead. It decided to die today. :S... I guess I have to write the other parts again.. stay tuned.
     
  11. Shockwaved

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    Sucks about your laptop dying.
    Hows the rewrite coming along?
     
  12. Razorwing

    Razorwing The Fallen Alternity.

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    It's coming along.. I had great content.. but now I have to re-write everything -.-... oh well. :( .