Transformers: Until That Day

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What Project would you prefer to replace Until That Day?

Poll closed Jul 17, 2020.
  1. Gundam: Rising (a Gundam photocomic)

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  2. Autobots: Revenge of the King (a Studio Series photocomic)

    37.5%
  1. Arkimus Prime

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    From the not-really-talented semi-author comes an incredibly low-budget comic strip...

    TRANSFORMERS (and a few other things): UNTIL THAT DAY
    (My applause to the first to recognize the title's inspiration.)

    Arc 1, Part 1:
    Until That Day #1.png

    Well, hope you found even a mite of satisfaction in this low-comedy start!

    If all goes as planned... this may be the little humor to come for a while... :ev: 
     
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  2. Scarlet knight

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    Great start if i could make a recommendation make the images larger and make the text bubbles on the images
    Something like this Photo_talks_1584892122799.jpg Photo_talks_1584891862906.jpg

    Other then that it's a great start
     
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  3. Arkimus Prime

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    Hmmm...

    Like this? Until That Day #1.1.png
     
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  4. Scarlet knight

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    That's exactly it your comic is now way easier to read great work!
     
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    Driskull98 Evil is as evil do.

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    Good stuff! :lol 

    You've gained a new reader!
     
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    Hahah! That is rather accurate! Love his "attempt" at going Furai! Keep 'em coming!
     
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  7. Arkimus Prime

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    Thanks, a lot!

    I am honored to gain a reader, senpai.

    I would strive for no less than accuracy, and I am glad that you enjoy Prime's shenanigans.

    Screenshot 2020-03-26 at 10.13.42 PM.png

    What was I doing again? Oh, yeah, the update.

    Until That Day #2-

    Until that Day #2.1.3.png Until that Day #2.1.5.png Copy of Until that Day #2.1.6.png

    Sorry for the weirdness in panel size shifts. They were the same during editing... :( 

    And also... yes, I did just make the Iron Man Mark 1 armor out to be Galvatron. Fight me.
     
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    Some of the text is too small for me to read. Is there any way you could make it larger?
     
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  9. Arkimus Prime

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    Fixed the issue.

    ...ish.
     
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    :lol  Poor Brunt. If it's any consolation, you're more Galvatron to me than Stark!

    To avoid the font size issue, I'd recommend writing out the text before making the word bubbles.
     
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    Hehe. Impersonators and wannabes every where! Wait till the real Galvatron makes an appearance.
     
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    :lol  just out of curiosity do you use your phone to edit this stuff?
     
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    Nope.

    I've got a cheapie "chromebook" from school that I use. My "high-end editing platform" is Google Drawings.

    But I do use my phone to take the pictures, e-mail them to myself, so that I can download on the computer.
     
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    Anyone else read Sounblaster with G1-Soundwave's voice?
     
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    That's how I read all Soundwaves. :) 

    :popcorn 
     
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    I agree... actually, I had the idea to name Brunt the "Beast Machines Ultra Superior Class Vehicon Hermit Galvatron," but this joke made more sense.

    Right! Once I dig up... that TR Galvatron I totally own... somewhere...

    I know, right? Oh, and my first popcorn! What an occasion!

    Anyway, here's issue #3! Children beware- themes of violence and wrath present! Bit of a late-night update!

    UNtil THat Day#3.1 (2).png
     
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    Hmm. Basically like yelling "bomb!" On an airplane. Instant chemical reaction :popcorn 
     
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    :lol  :popcorn 
     
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  20. Arkimus Prime

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    Quite so! Also, it was less of a chemical reaction, and more of a mechanical reaction in this case...
    Hey, if you keep dishing it out I'll keep taking it!

    Alright, time to be serious. I've always intended this as a mostly serious photocomic, and have used the last three updates to act as a buffer zone while I get my bearings and set up the story. To this end, I proudly present:

    Transformers: Until that Day
    The Sensation of Time
    Part One: "Et Ego Novi"

    Author's note: The images in this thread are mostly intentionally dark. This is a dark time, and the feeling of gloom has even worked its way into the atmosphere. :D 

    Until That Day_ Reformation #1.1.png Until That Day_ Reformation #1.2.png
     
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