Transformers: Shin Primus Saga

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    Prolouge

    Long ago, in the deep dark space, there was a great battle between two metal giants. One was the god of transformers, lord Primus. And the other was the demon Unicron. They fought for centuries, plants were destroyed, lives were killed. They fought and fought, nither one was winning or losing. Until Unicron transformed, ready to end Primus. But primus didn't fear him and chareged at Unicron, shining with the power of the galaxy. They collided and there was flash.

    Episode 1 Mystery

    Many years have passed, and the autobots have won the great war. Some where in space, the battle ship Archangel is patroling the point where ships mysteriously disappear. Three Skygrasper units were sent to investigate.

    Zero: Man this sucks! After the autobots won, all we do now is patrol missions!

    Rouge: Oh stop complaining! You sound like you want another war to start!

    Dagger: She's right, Zero. You can't do anything about it.

    Rouge: As always.

    Zero: Yeah I know. But there's no action!

    Rouge: Aren't you the one who complained about it in the first place?

    Zero: I'm not gona start with you again, Rouge.

    Rouge: Hey, that's not a way to talk to a lady!

    Zero: Are you a lady?

    Dagger: Stop it you two! We're here.

    The three young pilots arrived at their destanation. It was a shining crack in space that sucked anything that get's near it.

    Zero: OK, we found it. Now let's go home.

    Rouge: Come in Archanel. We've found the cause of the disappearing ships. Archangel do you copy?

    Dagger: That crack is jamming our communicters.

    Zero: Let's get of here before something happens.

    Rouge:Yeah, I think you.....AAAHHH!

    Dagger: Rouge! AAAHHH!

    Zero: Rouge! Dagger! WAAAAAH!

    The three tried to escape, but there was no hope. They've been sucked to the unkown.

    To be continued...
     
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    Well, what do you think? It's my first story.