I'm starting off this four-book series with my third book, since the first two are more like prequels. God knows if I'll ever make to the end of all four of these books, but since Book Three is my favorite I'm going to give it my best try.

Updates should be every Sunday as much as I am able, so stay tuned for more! Questions, thoughts, and critique are all very welcome!

 

Looking interesting so far.   Can't wait to see more.

 

Add me on the curious list on what this take on Optimus Prime's tale is. Also it seems Rodimus is a fan of Spider-Man Into the Spider-verse's soundtrack. He has good taste.  

 

Guess you'll just have to wait and see.   But about Roddy's song choice - he's actually singing a Queen song. However, I can definitely see him singing something from Spiderverse as well, haha.  

 

Nice start. Gives a light atmosphere, definite RID influence to your designs, promises some cool stuff.

How long before shit hits the fan?

 

Wow. Art is real nice. I like what's on display! Life has returned to normal and the big OP is actually trying to have a normal life. I. For one, am.curious to see if Roddy knows what he's doing hehehe.

 

Thanks man, I appreciate it, especially coming from someone like you. RID influenced some of my designs for sure, and a good chunk of the show's events are canon in my story (such as Bee being situated on earth for awhile with his less-than-competent assistants trying to protect it from stray Decepticons, Optimus returning from another dimension, and Starscream showing up eventually). It also has some influence from Prime and the IDW comics story-wise and design-wise.

Since you're curious when things get more intense, I'll let you know - the next three pages I'll be posting are mostly expository but the third one is where the story starts to pick up.  

 

Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback.   It's encouraging knowing people like what I'm making so far.

 

Much obliged. Future reference, though, there's a multi-quote button there for a reason.

 

Thanks. Um...I'm kind of new to this forum's setup so I tried to look at the F.A.Q. figure out the different between a quick reply and multi-quote and it's still confusing me a little. Is it that with multi-quote I can quote multiple people in the same message? Is that what you're recommending I do?

 

Yep.

 

Not sure if further explanation beyond the "yep" provided is required as you're new but I will offer that using the multi-quote is simple enough.

Just tap the multi-quote button for each post you want to quote, the plus sign will turn to a minus once selected. You can remove a post from your quote list by just hitting the multi-quote again and it will revert to a plus sign.

Anyway, once you've made your selections, you'll hit the "insert quotes" icon that will appear beside "upload a file". Then you can respond as you like.

I apologize if this all something you've worked out for yourself.

Good luck with your efforts in this series.

 

Nice artwork!

Never read anything of yours yet, will probably need to get to that with this EPIC drawing.

 

Thanks man, I think I got it now, but I appreciate it!

Well, I can imagine you wouldn't have read anything, because this is the first story I've posted up here. I hope you enjoy reading it!  

 

I'm liking this story so far. The Aligned influence on the designs is a choice I appreciate.

 

Wow, just started reading this, and I already like it!

 

Great job on the Bumblebee story so far! I’m smelling some IDW influence here!

 

Interesting choice on making Bee's job as a mailbot. Fits into what will likely be his scouting job in the future.