Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Shadow25, Nov 15, 2009.
bump for an update...
yes I am dying to know what happens next.
Sorry for the lack of them, guys, just had tons to do lately. I'll try real hard to churn out another chapter within the next few days.
well don't rush it keep that quality up!
that's okay we all have lives outside of transformers. we understand you are busy
Oh Lordy. I'm really sorry guys. I intended to take a little break but I didn't mean for it to stretch over three months. School's been all sorts of tough, so I haven't had too much free time. I'm going to make every attempt to finish this, though, within the next two weeks. Stay tuned and thanks for your patience.
not a problem shadow
same here don't worry
see shadow we understand that you are busy.
Thanks guys. Hopefully an update will be out tomorrow. I just want to mke sure I can realy send it out with a bang even after quite a hiatus. The conclusion should be really satisfying.
Awesome. Wish I could write like this. My fanfics come out stupid. I have to re-write twice now and haven't completed any of them yet
Chapter 18, Part 2
Leo could not keep the gun he had picked up from an unconscious soldier steady. As brave as he was trying to be, as brave as he had to be, he couldn’t deny how unlikely his chances were. Crawling behind a large bush with Jen right behind him, he sighed as they made it past a single battalion of Sweeps. Only twenty more to go.
Suddenly, Leo and Jen covered their ears at the piercing noise which grew louder and louder.
Soundwave landed in the middle of the group of Sweeps. Speaking in Cybertronian, Soundwave gave swift commands to them, and they immediately complied, running off in the direction of some incoming tanks. Soundwave remained for a moment and then followed, until Jen slipped and rattled the bush. Soundwave immediately turned his head and developed a fixation on that one spot that Leo thought would never go away. Finally, Soundwave walked away.
Leo: (whispering) Come on, come on, let’s go!
Leo and Jen made a quiet dash for another place to hide, but both tripped as the ground shook violently.
Jen: What? What was that?
RUMBLE jumped right out from behind a building and landed right in front of the two. Transforming one of his arms into a large plate of metal, it threw a blow at Leo who ducked and crawled away screaming.
Jen ran as fast as she could with Leo getting up to join here. Rumble, despite his bulk, was right on their tail. Leo and Jen took as many twists and turns as they could, but could not lose Rumble. Finally making a dash towards the Pentagon, their rush was cut off by the presence of another group of Sweeps.
Leo: Oh, God…
Making a break for the opposite direction, Leo and Jen found themselves out of options. Rumble to one side, and Sweeps to the other (both rambling in Cybertronian), Leo and Jen had nowhere to run.
Bumblebee flew to the ground, landing with a hard thud that Sam both heard and felt. Cyclonus calmly walked over to the Autobot.
Cyclonus: This is the fate of those who defy the Chaos Bringer. And so shall it be the fate of all of your allies down there.
Bumblebee was not willing to give up. He jumped up and climbed on to Cyclonus’ back, firing several shots at his back before jumping off, charging into the Decepticon with all his might, and knocking him to the ground.
Cyclonus wasn’t fazed in the slightest; he rose and within a split second morphed his arm into a blaster which had a deafening impact on the Autobot. The entire left side of his chest had been blown off, with his left arm surviving the blow just barely.
Sam: Don’t give up Bee! Please!
Bumblebee nodded and got right back up locking blow for blow with Cyclonus. Cyclonus was impressed by the Autobot’s vigor.
Bumblebee released a blade from his arm and rammed it into Cyclonus’ neck, lodging himself onto the Decepticon. He then took relentless shots at his chest, causing Cyclonus to lose balance. The battle was not over, however, as Cyclonus howled not in pain, but at the activation of electricity which jolted through his body and right into Bumblebee, dislodging him from Cyclonus. Cyclonus immediately grabbed Bee and tossed him with all his might into the wall, creating a gaping hole, which Sam knew he could take advantage of.
Hot Rod regained consciousness and darted for Cyclonus, delaying him just enough for Sam and Mikaela to get to the next chamber and continue their search.
Cyclonus: Now you both die!
He threw off Hot Rod, who jumped back to his feet and stood alongside his injured comrade.
Hot Rod: It’s up to us now, Bee!
Bee nodded weakly.
Optimus’ and Galvatron’s blades locked, swung back, and locked again. Prime sidestepped Galvatron and sent a hard kick to his face.
Galvatron readied his fusion cannon. Optimus dodged the onslaught of fire before finally taking a blow to the shoulder. Prime readied his own blaster and returned fire. Galvatron took a few petty hits to his legs while jumping and landing right on top of Prime, burying him in the ground. Galvatron plunged his fusion cannon into the hole.
Galvatron: Now to eliminate you once and for all!
A hand rose from the hole and grabbed the cannon, twisting it around, as Optimus rose out of the ditch and unleashed a series of punches on Galvatron. He still took another cannon blow, however, which left serious damage to his left knee.
Optimus: You don’t understand what’s at stake here, Galvatron. Our race, our home, the humans’ race, the humans’ home…
Galvatron: And you think any of that matters to me?
Optimus: No. But it matters to me. And that’s why…
Optimus lunged a blade at Galvatron, thrusting it into his right elbow.
Optimus: I will never allow you victory!
Optimus turned his arm, severing Galvatron’s right arm. Galvatron howled in pain but was not deterred. He tackled Optimus to the ground.
Galvatron: Such bold words, Prime. A pity they’ll be the last you ever speak!
Galvatron pinned Prime down with leg before ramming his fusion cannon through Optimus’ chest.
Optimus’ optics began to fade, as his grip on Galvatron loosened.
That was a really intense fight! Optimus is dead? Well that's definitely not good for the Autobots. Glad to see a new update, and it was even more awesome than I expected
No! No! Not again! Optimus can't die again! He's too important! He only die like what two years ago! Man, this guy gets no breaks!
Chapter 18, Part 3
Prowl swerved in and out of incoming fire with the Witwickys in tow. Sweeps lunged at him left and right, but Prowl outmaneuvered them with stunning skill.
Ron: Hey, how much farther we got, anyway?!
Scourge swooped in landed right in Prowl’s path, sending the car flipping through the air. Prowl transformed in mid air and dove for the flying Witwickys, barely managing to catch them in one hand and Mojo’s and Frankie’s cages in the other.
Prowl: Keep moving!
Ron and Judy scrambled to their feet, grabbed the dogs, and started on a mad dash towards the Lincoln Memorial. Prowl fired a few shots at Scourge and his incoming Sweeps before joining them. Reaching down, he scooped up the humans and dogs and placed them on his shoulder, continuing to charge through a line of Sweeps, shooting and dodging each one.
Closing in on the Memorial, Prowl was suddenly tackled to the ground by Scourge; thankfully, the Autobot was able to protect the Witwickys from harm, placing them gently off to the side as he rose and slugged his foe in the face. The Witwickys ran as fast as they could for the Memorial, only a few hundred feet away, as Sweeps tried fruitlessly to grab them, due in part to Prowl taking a shot at them when he had the chance. One Sweep eluded Prowl’s aim however, and swooped in on the Witwickys, only to be shot down by a shot from Kup, emerging from the Memorial.
Kup: Come on, quickly! Get in! The Harvester’s nearly finished!
Kup fired at a few more Sweeps before looking to Prowl, locked with Scourge.
Prowl: I’ll be fine! Seal the chamber!
Kup nodded, and ran back inside as the Memorial sealed back up.
Prowl sighed in relief before Scourge hacked off his right arm with a blazing slash.
Scourge: This is your end!
Skids and Mudflap were hot on Runabout and Runamuck’s trail over the Francis Scott Key Bridge.
Skids: Yo! We’re never gonna catch em!
Mudflap: Stay cool, bro, I got an idea!
Mudflap transformed and landed on Skids, who began to swerve left and right.
Skids: Hey, whadda ya think you’re doing?!
Mudflap: Just trust me!
Mudflap, who looked as if he were surfing on Skids, took aim at Runabout and fired his grappling hook. Immediately retracting it, he shot towards the Decepticon, who made a sudden U-Turn to change the angle of his travel and send Mudflap flying past his target and into the wall. This distraction, however, gave Skids ample opportunity to hop on Runabout’s back and force him to transform.
Runabout: Hey, Runamuck! What does this Autobot think he’s doing!
Skids: Takin’ you out, that’s what!
Runamuck transformed and dashed to help his comrade, but tripped over the grappling wire Mudflap shot out. Mudflap jumped on top of Runamuck and delivered a series of sloppy yet powerful punches.
Mudflap: Now, bro!
Mudflap picked up Runamuck with all his might and tossed him at Skids, who tossed Runabout into him. The two Decepticons flew over the side of the bridge, barely, clinging on to its edge.
Skids: We did it!
Mudflap began a victory dance while Skids ran over to the edge of the bridge to see the two Decepticons dangling. Mudflap snapped out of it and joined him.
Runabout: Please, help us!
Skids: Why should we?
Runamuck: We’ll change! Please!
Mudflap reached out his hand, which Runamuck grabbed… and pulled down on, sending all three of them hurtling to their doom in the river.
Skids: Hang on, Mudflap!
Skids jumped off the bridge and flew down, shooting his grappling hook up and swinging down to grab his brother.
The two then flew back up and landed hard on the bridge.
Before either of them could get up, Arcee zoomed past them, beeping her horn.
Skids: H-hey! Where ya going?!
Skids turned to his brother, who was already driving off in Arcee’s direction.
The fates of Leo, Prowl, Prime, and the rest of our heroes... in Chapter 19!
wow shadow no doubt worth the wait excellent and i know prime will be okay.
Woohoo. Prowl was awesome too.
Thanks guys. Chapter 20 will be the final chapter (there may also be an epilogue).
Chapter 19, Part 1
Jen braced herself as Rumble readied its arms and took charge.
Leo: Get away from her!
Leo rushed right in front of Rumble and fired his rifle. The Decepticon was barely damaged, and proceeded to smack Leo with his arm, sending him flying into a tree.
The Sweeps lowered their guard as Rumble pulled back his fist to deliver a blow to Jen. Thankfully, that blow never hit. A well aimed shot from the incoming Arcee stalled Rumble, whom she then threw to the ground. The Twins followed in and engaged the Sweeps in fire.
Jen ran over to Leo, and put her hand to his head. It was freezing. She then put her hand on his chest and felt an extremely faint beat.
Jen: No, no, I won’t let you die!
Jen took a deep breath and then moved in to begin CPR on Leo. The second her lips touched his, Leo’s arms shot up and pulled her in close.
Jen immediately jolted back and slapped the laughing Leo in the face. But then, she began to cry out of relief and hugged him as tight as she could. The moment of joy was interrupted by a charging Rumble. Skids tackled the Decepticon and swung him around, as Mudflap leapt and kicked him to the ground. Then, he stomped on his head, severing it and ending the Decepticon’s life.
Skids: That’s some serious skills, yo!
Mudflap: What else you expect?!
Leo and Jen sighed, as Arcee pulled up to them.
Arcee: If you two lovebirds are done, let’s get out of here!
Leo and Jen hopped onto Arcee, who drove off towards the Memorial while the Twins drove in the opposite direction to attract the Sweeps away from the humans.
Ultra Magnus had never felt as free as he did right now. He focused all of his rage upon Shockwave, dealing hit after brutal hit.
Ultra Magnus: This is where it ends. This is where you pay.
Shockwave took aim, but Magnus dodged the fire and tackled Shockwave head on, pinning him to the ground. Magnus unleashed a relentless series of blows, severely distorting the Decepticon’s face.
Shockwave simply laughed in his cold, emotionless voice.
Shockwave: You're blind, Magnus. You have no hope of defeating me.
Magnus was startled by this claim, allowing Shockwave to grab him by the arm and toss him overhead onto the ground. Magnus rose as quickly as he could and threw a raging fist at his opponent, but Shockwave caught the hit and twisted Magnus’ arm around his back, eventually hacking through it with his cannon arm to sever it for good. Magnus fell to his knees and to the ground.
Shockwave: See what I mean?
Magnus fired a few random shots, of which only one hit Shockwave, who kicked his downed body across their battlefield. Shockwave began to charge for a finishing blow, before the arrival of Lennox’s military battalion and some tanks.
Lennox: Concentrate your fire!
Shockwave: Fools! You will all share the same fate! Shockwave turned his aim to the battalion, whose fire did little to deter him.
Shockwave’s first shot destroyed most of the tanks, leaving only one and a handful of soldiers left standing. Magnus looked on in horror. Then, he remembered a nearly identical situation during a battle on Cybertron.
Ultra Magnus: No… I won’t… let it happen again!
Magnus rose to his feet as Shockwave fired his second shot.
Lennox: Brace yourselves!
Lennox cringed, but then opened his eyes at the realization that the shot did not hit. Instead, Ultra Magnus had dove in front of the blast, taking brutal damage to his chest.
Shockwave: There really is no limit to the lengths you’ll go, is there, Magnus?
Shockwave walked over to his fallen foe, and picked him up by the neck with one arm. With the other (his cannon arm), he rammed it through his already weakened chest.
Shockwave: Farewell, Ultra Magnus. The last sight you’ll see will be the destruction of your human “friends”.
Shockwave prepared to take out his arm, when suddenly Magnus gripped it with all his might. Shockwave was stunned.
Ultra Magnus: Not… a… chance!
Magnus swept Shockwave to the ground and stood right on top of him. Pulling with all his might, he ripped Shockwave’s arm right off his body while it was still through Magnus’ chest. Shockwave rose and threw his remaining arm at Magnus, who grabbed it and spun Shockwave around. Then, Magnus grabbed Shockwave’s head from the rear.
Shockwave: No! No! Impossible!
Lennox looked on in utter awe.
Ultra Magnus: It's.. it's finally over!
Magnus ejected his axe from the hand which held Shockwave’s head. The axe sliced Shockwave’s head into two halves, which Magnus proceeded to rip clear off his neck by pulling back.
From across the battlefield, Ironhide turned to see what had just happened.
Magnus, with what little strength he had, turned to Lennox.
Ultra Magnus: You’re… you’re safe now…
Magnus collapsed. Ironhide ran over, shooting down the Sweeps that followed him, and cradled his comrade.
Ultra Magnus: Ironhide… you were right. Tell Optimus… he was… right…
Magnus’ optics faded as his head fell back.
He turned around to see Blitzwing closing in on Lennox’s squad. Rising up, he ran up to and slid under the Decepticon, firing several powerful shots into his chest. Turning around, he grabbed the top of Blitzwing’s turret and, after loosening it with some fire, tore it off. Blitzwing turned around to find Ironhide’s cannon pointing right in his face.
Ironhide: Say goodbye!
Blitzwing fell to the ground. Ironhide, was exhausted. Turning to see Bruticus and dozens of more Sweeps incoming, he knew the battle was far from over.
wow shadow incredible i'm in awe!! the last chapter should be awesome i'm sad to see this ff end
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