Transformers: Beginnings

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Shadowwavepool7, Mar 15, 2014.

  1. Richform4

    Richform4 Trans and MLP fan =D

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    Part 29 was awesome because Soundwave had a major spot light and that character does not disappoint. :D  :popcorn 
    Rumble and frenzy were funny :rock 
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    Ending had a quite of an mystery about if Megatron is hiding a secrete from Soundwave.. if I read correctly. :wink: 
     
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    daniel 97 Autobots' second in command

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  3. daniel 97

    daniel 97 Autobots' second in command

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    Man I like Bee's and Bonecrusher's bios, I would like them even more if it was like that in the movie
     
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    Richform4 Trans and MLP fan =D

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    Wow nicely writing story for part 30. :D 

    Enjoyed hole bunch of the action battles and some emotion drama when it seems to be over for the Autobots. Optimus always has a great habit of coming up with an idea that totally comes out of the blue; ends up Saving the hole team from Defeat.

    Also Megatron is Dead!!! Wo-ho! Or is he???LOL :thumb 
     
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    Richform4 Trans and MLP fan =D

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    Allot of interesting parts that went on for part 31.

    :rip  Beach comber

    Agent Fowler was acting kind-of strange others words a bad guy in this part of 31???

    Oh yea!!! Side ways character is a very cool character That know of it's head Color scheme and visor reminds me of so much of the Armada Side ways. :D 

    Very Creepy ending after Spike tries to go back to bed after a night mare.
     
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    Richform4 Trans and MLP fan =D

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    New start of Normal life on Earth and Cybertron for part 32

    Kids starting a brand new like by mentally closer than ever.

    Starscream gladly became leader.

    The Autobos on cybertron is having one of the most normal life as it can be.

    Plus Nice speech you had writing for Optimus at the end.

    Good work for all stories you had worked on. :D  :rock  :thumb  :bay 
     
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    batmanprime Omega-con

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    Excellent story, but I give up, where can I find Enslavement?
     
  8. Richform4

    Richform4 Trans and MLP fan =D

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    Read your post-credit scene: Forgotton story

    it's like Hallowing all over again. :lol 
     
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    Richform4 Trans and MLP fan =D

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    Some great action to this "Enslavement" trailer. :thumb 

    Who-Hoo!!! Kicker and Misha is going to be in it! :D 
    :lol  Humans totally cracked me up with there rude manner the beginning.

    Rest that fallowed seemed exciting. ;) 
     
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    I just finished part 5. I'm liking more as I read it :)  Bumblebee's and Waspinator's feud is cool. I love Megatron's and Soundwave's relationship, though. Really grounds them. And poor Spike, too XD
     
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    Knockout196 A.K.A. BlackStar

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    Finally finished reading this a while back.
    Can't wait to get to Enslavement once I'm done with the Bionicle models for GMod.
     
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    TFP Ratchet Doctor of Doom

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    Finally! Someone didnt forget about me!!!!
     
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    Nice choice of voices! :) 
     
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    Nice job on making Arkeville a former Oxford professor.
     
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    Nobody eats Prowl's Energon-Os!
     
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    Interesting.New to your fan fics,I'm going to read Ch1 of this tommorow.Based on the characters can't wait!:) 
     
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    Well saw #1.Some comments below.

    1)Great work!The story really has a great plot right now!
    2)So Shockblast is a Trident plane?Cool,hope we can see more of him!
    3)Energon Os?Sideswipe ate Prowl's?LOL!!!
    4)Great plotline...Soundwave made a dive for it alright...
    5)Okay,2 suggestions:
    -Maybe instead of introducing random characters like Hubcap have a prior known Transformer take their dialogue.
    -G1 Ark-Nemesis Route.Similar intro.Maybe next time don't go too much G1 in the beginning.
    6)I'm loving Sideswipe and Longarm!
     
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    Saw two. Okay...it kinda seems like Chip and Spike...hate eachother?Not the right word...Ace and Tyrone...don't give me that homo-crap again!LOL.The Transformers have arrived,yay.
     
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    Up to here...have to go now.

    ...SOUNDWAVE IS BACK BABY!!!!!:dj :music