I read part 17
Yup some real drama and action in this one.
Feel bad for Thunder Cracker and the doctor that was seriously injured.

I also read Part 18.  

 

Who was that bot? But I have too say awesome action bee is really kick ass in this story compared to g1! But what happened to megs and optimus?

 

Short one but damn! Fear is dead bummer! Ole beachy flintstone vitamins priceless!!

 

Prowl! No!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Oh snap megs you are in trouble! Soundwave is gonna kick your aft!! And bad idea giving prime a break!! Hes gonna come back!

 

Damn that was epic!! And screamer I wonder if the other cons will find out and I knew prime would recover!

 

What the hell thought brim was dead? I'd like too see spilcer lead the cons! Not screamer! Flower very cool from tf prime!

 

Nice ending just curious what sideways has in store!

 

Post-credits very creppy!

 

WOW!! Awesome trailer how many parts do you done? And what do you mean that you are alone in the shadow dimension?

 

I have only read the first 3 parts so far and already I love this story.

 

Read part 19.

Some great battle between cliff and scream.  

 

I read part 20.

Part 21

 

 

I read part 22

 

I read part 23.

Some great show down action by Optimus and Megatron also two more BB and Brimstone.

Funny ending by

LOL good work on part 23.  

 

Oh my i finally finished this and i looove the ending. Agent Fowler, the way Soundwave has to "Downsize", Chip becoming crippled, and so much moreee.

 

Another good "part 24" story  

 

Some great action and drama in part 25

Nice epic fight between Payload Vs. Bumblbee.

Wow   Brimstone quickly starts being a coward by begging mercy when he was about to be executed by Spike.

Ohhhh...Such a dark scary ending when Brimstones spark enters Bumblebee that started to make Bee possessed by him. Bumblebee had a quite of an Stomach jolt he was entirely under Brimstones control.

Awesome   well not for Bee at least    

 

random Dog fight in the beginning of part 26 between a human and Thunder.

Man some day DropKick just had and he got killed by anger from having to deal with Bumblebee and Long Arm. Seeing how his past comrades-brothers mentally close to him
was taking away. Even before Dropkicks death having to see his friend Blastwave explode in front of him. What a violent to die.

 

Terrible defeat by Soundwaves blast, hitting Prowl square in the chest. Still, epic fight between the two from part 28.