Part 5, 6, 7 excellent! Bee kicking ass, shock was so cold and poor hot shot. Part 7 though ace and tyrone where going to create some choas but glad they didnt! And of course the 'cons up too no good. Man it's getting better and better with each part!

 

This is just awesome.

 

So there was a part two to 11 story.  
I read it and I enjoyed it.  

 

Splicer should be a autobot hes too nice too be a 'con. And screamer was funny jealous! Lol also spike and carly shouldnt be just wandering off.

 

Aww man hubcap I didnt want him too die! But what a battle awesome!

 

Wow ratchet needs a ass kicking he went way over the line! and great speech by optimus!

 

Fear, terra and splicer great! And prowl specch was nice!

 

I forgot how powerful terra was! I mean five no six autobots too take him down! And ratchet crying? Theres hope for him yet!

 

Wow splicer was great I didnt think that he could fight like that! And man poor carly!

 

Wow awesome!! Cant wait for the next chapter. Splicer almost sounded like he wanted too switch sides!

 

Heh heh partc19 YES YES!! Love the action! Classic screamer!

 

I read part 13.  

 

I read part 14.  

Hilarious random slap fight in the beginning.

That part was also funny      

 

wow splicer was kicking ass b4 ironhide knocked him out. Love the action and beach with dreeds?

 

Man how sad part 22 was!! Optimus will save the day.

 

Nice love when optimus kicks ass! Love the action!

 

Hope jacky will be ok I thought for sure he was dead! But what a great fight! And brim at the end damn!

 

NO! NO! Bee cant die!! And spike incredible!!

 

I read part 15  

 

I read part 6