Transformers Animated: The Continuation

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  1. JustADreamer

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    Hello, lovely people reading this! With inspiration from such things as Transformers Meta (Which is suggest you check out, by the way) I have decided to created my own continuation of TFA, utilizing both the AllSpark almanacs ideas and my own personal ones. Without further ado, ENJOY!

    Episode 1: The Trial of Megatron

    They rallied in front of him, millions of Cybertronians, cheering at their savior. He was red mech, with blue gauntlets and boots, and around his neck was the newly reformed AllSpark, and in his grasp was the Magnus Hammer itself, the ancient weapon belonging to Cybertrons leaders. This mech was Optimus Prime. The masses cheered around him today for he, and his faithful crew, had defeated the most dreaded tyrant in all Cybertronian history, Megatron.

    He stepped forward, and raised his shed for silence, and after the cheering came to a stop he began to speak. "Thank you, My fellow Autobots, for this welcome. But we have not come to be praised as heroes, for we are just workers, and so are the rest of you loyal Autobots! And we all work towards one thing, the continued prosperity and happiness of both Cybertron and all it's loyal citizens! and today we have made a major stepping stone in that goal" He turned around and pointed at Megatron, who scowled in response, "The capture of known war criminal and tyrant to surpass all others- Megatron!" He turned back around, and the crowd once more burst into applause and cheer

    Soon, The elite guard of the Autobots came form the crowd soon after one of the few people in the crowd not cheering, Sentinel Magnus, current leader of Cybertron and known rival to Optimus, pointed at the decepticons. They grabbed Megatron and his followers Lugnut, Blitzwing, and Shockwabe and began to force them away. With the crowd still cheering.

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    Elsewhere, on the distant planet Earth, there was no cheering. Though they certainly celebrated beforehand when Optimus had defeated Megatron, now there were only construction crews removing rubble and slowly rebuilding, well, buildings.

    Two Sewer Workers were also doing their fair share of work, as they looked down at the open sewer pipe "Eh, hope those Bots didn't do too much damage down their, our jobs unpleasant enough as it is. Well you know the drill Jordy, head on down". The man known as Jordy nodded, and turned the light on his hard hat on as he prepare his descent, for a while things were silent until Jordy's voice rang up from the depths. "Mike...I..think you might want to look at this." He sighed grudgingly, and prepared his descent as well. He soon found out what his partner was talking about, as both he and him were gawking at a rather unusual site. Massive Purple crystals, growing through the ground.....

    Sorry this first part is a little short, but I just neede dot get started. Future parts will be longer hopefully. Constructive criticism please!
     
  2. Rodimus_2316

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    Not bad! Also, are you continuing the Animated toy-intro pattern, assuming there are still Animated toys that would have come later if the show had continued?

    Looking forward to more, however it is. :) 
     
  3. JustADreamer

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    What exactly do you mean by Toy Intro pattern?

    Also, thank you for the reply! More should be coming fairly soon.
     
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    There were more TF Animated toys released after show officially ended, right? If so, I'd say continue the show story somehow, and get in those would-have-been next toy-characters, and sound like it could have been done at the time a continuation would have. That's what I'm doing with my TF fanfic project (see signature & post with info and link below on this sub-forum).
     
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    I do plan on using the unused toy ideas that would have been in the show, though when they show up might be another matter entirely. But they WILL be utilized in the story.
     
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    So you won't be showing them in the same way the show did with its? Just trying to understand.
     
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    If you mean what I think you mean, then no, I won't be using them the same way the show did.
     
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    Ok, cool. I just ask because, in my fanfic group's continuation of the G1 cartoon, we introduce the right G1 toy-characters at the right times (1987 right now) as the real show did and would have, sounds like it was written at the time it would have (1987), etc. Was just wondering if that was your plan too.

    Good luck with your stories. They sound interesting. :) 
     
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    There were plans for a triple changer Megatron and Powermaster Optimus Prime for the canceled season 4, as well as earth modes for other characters like Ironhide and Cosmos. I would suggest looking it up on TFWiki.com.
     
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    Just going through the info on tfwiki. Awesome, thanks! JustADreamer, are you going to use any of these guys in your stories?
     
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    Definently, though most will probably show up after this "Episode" (Or chapter) is finished.
     
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    Cool. So you're considering doing new "episodes"? Again, that's what I'm doing with the G1 cartoon.
     
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    Where was he?

    Was he alive? Or dead? He did not know. His thoughts were out of place and random. Memories missing and coming back.... But he soon started seeing things in a more chronological way. His entire life, before his eyes, but did he have them? Was he corporeal? Nonetheless the memories..they came.

    He was created from nothing more than a slim, metallic shell, he was given his body. He could feel something inside him... it pulsates and thrithes. It is his core? That which gave him the spark of life? His spark?

    He remembers something more....on his back, heavy and weighing him down...it was his wings?

    He remembers something...powerful from his wrists. He remembers the feeling of...changing, his form now a different one. Something aerodynamic, he transfomed?

    He remembers this...but not who he is.


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    On Cybertron, within the hall of the Autobot High Council in the Metroplex, the Autobot team lead by Optimus Prime, and the Ninja Bot who had assisted them known as Jazz, sat in center of the room being stared at from all sides by the members of the council, and especially Sentinel Magnus, who sat in the highest chair due to his current position as Acting Magnus. It went without saying that they were all very, very nervous.

    Though they had not been called in for trial, It was actually a debriefing, it was still nerve wracking to be stared down by the most politically powerful and wise Autobots on all of Cybertron. It was a moment before Sentinel finally spoke. "Optimus Prime, you and your team are here for you to state the events that happened on the disgus-ORGANIC planet of...erm...Orth.." He said, with obvious disregard for the planets proper pronunciation. Optimus attempted to look confident, though he still couldn't hide the look of nervousness on his face. "Megatron, after taking control of Omega Supreme temporarily and randomly transporting through the galaxy, which I believe this council already knows the reasons behind..." The council nodded their heads, eager to hear more of his report. "Megatron was rejoined by his followers, Lugnut and shockwave. He then used Lugnut as the template for clones of Omega Supreme. He attacked Detroit, and admittedly was going well. The Omega Supremes were then hijacked by the Decepticon Starscream, though without too much detail we eventually beat him."

    He gave a moment of silence, as if what he said next would be hard for him to say. "Our...teammate Prowl made a great sacrifice, and died after reconstituting the AllSpark....Afterwards Megatron attempted to attack me, and I used the Magnus Hammer." He paused after he heard a growl from Sentinel, He had attempted to force Ratchet into giving him the Magnus Hammer after he recovered it on Cybertron from Shcokwave, but was angered and frustrated after Ratchet refused "The uh..Magnus Hammer to defeat him, afterwards I was with the repaired AllSpark and I used the hammer to forge a new casing for it" He tugged the AllSpark matrix that hung from his neck, which was the "New Casing" he referred to.

    The council regarded him for a moment, before Alpha Trion, an old and wise looking bot, spoke "Thank you for this report Optimus Prime....now the rest of the council....not including Acting Magnus Sentinel......wish to speak to you and your team. We have important matters to discuss...."

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    A ship approached an asteroid, this ship was bronze and black, and one could tell from its design that it was indeed Cybertronian. This ship was a repair ship, and it house two lowly repair bots, who looked as if they hadn't been repaired themselves in years. The ship soon approached its destination: a large asteroid, which held a mining station adorned with the Autobot symbol on it.

    The ship soon landed, and the two bots walked out, the slightly bulkier one spoke first. "Man, can't believe we got a beacon this far out, anyways...". They walked inside, and as they went deeper inside, they soon realized the state the building in was poor at best, metal was falling off the walls, the lighting was failing, and sparks of energy flew from the ceiling at random.

    "it...looks like this place hasn't been used in years....." Said the bulky repair bots partner, and soon he was surprised when a massive claw grabbed his chest "That's cause it HASNT, my friend..." The one who the claw belonged to was known as Oil Slick, a tall Decepticon who had a clear dome over his head that contained green chemicals. He removed his claw from the Autobots chest, who was terrified when he realized that part of it was now golden, the gold spread to his other joints as he started screaming as he fell apart, before his body went completely gray.

    "GPS, personal favorite of mine..." Said Oil Slick. The Bots partner fell down and tried to crawl away, but was soon blasted into bits by four bots behind him who were now walking towards Oil Slick. The first of them was General Strika, a large and bulky femme bot who was the one that shot at the repair bot. The other was Blackout, the largest of the group. There was also Cyclonus, who admittedly not much was known about except for his Nihilism and battle prowess. The final one was Spittor, another bulky bot who was also know for his disgusting habits.

    "Excellent job, Oil Slick." said General Strika, who cruelly stepped on the remains of the Autobots as the rest of her team followed behind her, "To their ship, we don't have much time to waste, if we are to enact the plan soon then we must maintain a tight schedule." Oil Slick nodded as started walking towards the exit, and the Decepticons followed, prepared to enact their mysterious "Plan".
     
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  14. JustADreamer

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    Just a heads up my friends, it's a gambit on whether or not I'll post the next part of Episode 1 today, since my schedule is a wee bit busy. So yeah, watch out for that and if it isn't here then well...all I can say is I will try to get it done tomorrow.
     
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    nah, it's fine. do what you can. our lives are hectic enough as it is.
     
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    "Excuse me?!" Yelled Sentinel, he could not believe his audio receptors, the council was asking him to leave?! He was the Acting Magnus of Cybertron for AllSparks sake! Technically, Alpha Trion and the Civillian Guilds held power over him and the Millitary, but it was still insulting, not to mention the fact that the idea of Civillians being in control of the Millitary was altogether stupid to him "May I ask WHY the council sees fit for me to leave?!" Yelled Sentinel, his voice even louder this time.

    Alpha Trion's emotions were not betrayed by the expressions on his face, but when he spoke the annoyance in his voice was obvious to all but the deaf "Because, Sentinel Magnus, the information we have decided to give to these Bots has been decided by the council to be best given to them and only then until we see fit to share it with you, Sentinel." When Sentinel opened his mouth to seemingly complain, The annoyance in Alpha Trions voice grew and hints of anger could now be heard "Sentinel Magnus, do not push your boundaries farther, you are only Acting Magnus and as such you are not entitled to all the privileges that the true Magnus is!" He spoke the final words in such a way that suggested Sentinels pleas would fall on deaf receptors.

    Muttering to himself, he begrudgingly walked out of the room. At first he planned to go train, in order to release his anger at both Optimus and the Council, but as he walked down the corridor he thought of an idea. He went up to the door and put his head up close to it. He smiled as he heard voices and sounds, the council was of course capable of sound proofing the room if necessary, but it appeared that they ha don't considered it so at this time. He continued listening in, eager to find out what the council considered worth making him leave the room.

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    The Autobots who sat before the council, speechless, they had known Sentinel as arrogant and somewhat self absorbed but they had never expected him to argue with Alpha Trion himself. For a moment there was nothing but stunned silence, and Alpha Trion neglected to speak as well, seemingly attempting to remain calm. It remained like this a moment longer before Bumblebee spoke.

    "So uh...while I'm glad Sentinel's out of the room, I have to ask, why did you have him leave, uh...Alpha Trion... Sir?" Optimus, Jazz, and Ratchet glared at Bumblebee for his inappropriately casual way of speaking to Alpha Trion, but Alpha Trion himself seemed to show no signs of annoyance. He seemed to have more patience with the young Bumblebee than he did Sentinel "Sentinel Magnus has....a sensitive ego. The information we are about to share with you might damage it, and we are worried he might potentially take rash actions due to it." He said. Most of Optimus's team gave a smirk at this, though Optimus Ratchet and Jazz attempted to remain a professional in front of Alpha Trion, who continued to speak. "Moving forward, first the council wishes to congratulate you all for the defeat and capture of Megatron, as well as express our sorrow at the loss of Prowl." For a moment, everything was silent again, and the smirks from the team vanished instantly.

    Soon Alpha Trion started again, after giving them their moment of grieving "And now we wish to state your new assignment, which is to return to Earth and act as ambassadors to the Human race." The team was stunned by this, though they were very much pleased as well, they had come to see Earth as just as much of their home as Cybertron. "Thank you sir, but with all due respect, I must ask why you see fit to return us to Earth? Though we have no objections" Said Optimus, for a moment Alpha Trion was silent, studying Optimus, before he spoke. "While it has been forgotten by many, the duty of the Autobots is to protect as many lives as possible in the galaxy, this includes organic life forms. Though many cybertronians have forgotten this and replaced it with simple Biophobia." He said.

    "And now onto the final subject, that of both the Magnus Hammer and the restored AllSpark, as for the AllSpark, it will, of course, remain in Iacon under heavy protection" The team nodded, it made perfect sense after all, the AllSpark was one of the most powerful and important Cybertronian artifacts. "And as for the Magnus Hammer, it will as well be in Iacon, under temporary guarding until the return of Ultra Magnus"

    "WHAT?!" They heard a voice yell, they all looked at the door and saw who it belonged to, Sentinel Prime had burst in the room.

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    Megatron was furious.

    Fury and rage were, of course, emotions he was very well acquainted with. But this was a new type of rage, one he couldn't suppress with all his might. He had been beaten by nothing but a lowly Prime. Not even a Magnus or a well known soldier, but a repair bot who simply managed to get lucky and have the chance to destroy his machinations.

    Attempting to distract himself from his anger, he looked around the Metroplex dungeon, the temporary place of his imprisonment he was in until his trial was complete. Across from him he saw Shockwave, who sat there with his usual, cold, calculating look. His guards stared at shockwave with a look of deep hatred. Shockwave had been the spy Megatron placed inside the Autobot elite guard, and he had assasinated and sabotaged many Autobots during his period as the bot known as "Longarm Prime". The guards stared at Shockwave endlessly, as if they wanted nothing more than to crush his spark with there bare hands. Like Megatron wanted to do with the cur that was Optimus Prime

    He realized now he was think of him again.

    He knew that there was one thing he would never stop for now, something he would strive for with all his spark. Optimus Prime would die. By his hand, and his alone.

    For anyone's who reading, if you can, I HIGHLY encourage comments and criticism, just a small note.
     
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    Sentinel's gonna get himself ousted at this rate. Keep it up!
     
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    I just want to apologize for not writing recently, I've gotten distracted by something else. But I do plan to continue this sometime relatively soon.
     
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    no worries. it's been emergency month for me personally.