Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Hiraga, Sep 27, 2009.

  1. Starscreamer217

    Starscreamer217 Banned

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    Which incarnation of Waspinator do you think your Wasp resembles - Animated's jagged, vicous look or Beast War's "buggy-eyed" fly-man?

    For now, he's the Animated version in my head, but he's got BW Wasp's voice.
     
  2. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    Right now, I imagine him as a little more of the Animated version. But only in that he hates Bumblebee, and really knows how to hold a grudge. He does have the more nieve and playful attitude of the BW version as well. But really, I've just made him a Decepticon on the fritz. He's not insane like the Animated, but not an idiot like the BW.
    He's glitchy, but has a little more to him as well.

    EDIT: As for voice, it's probably more similar to Animated's.
     
  3. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Waspinator=AWESOME.
     
  4. Starscreamer217

    Starscreamer217 Banned

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    Ah. I meant physically, too. Does he resemble BW or Animated?

    [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
  5. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    You should probably wait for Jazz_00's design for looks.
     
  6. jazz_00

    jazz_00 legen wait 4 it dary

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    all designs will be uploaded soon. may show a teaser in a day or so but im going to be dumping them all here at once instead of at random like before.
     
  7. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    I have thought of the Animated Waspinator design when imagining this design.

    Honestly, I had my doubts if this would out do Doomsday but boy it did
     
  8. Hiraga

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    CHAPTER 12 PART 1


    *The Fallen stood atop a Pyramid in Egypt. It was the one remaining Pyramid after the Harvester had been demolished after the last battle there. He took out his spear once he saw that Jordanian helicopters were headed towards him.*


    Fallen: Simple minded insects...

    *Using his spear, the three helicopters were levitated higher into the air. He used the spear to disable the rotors, then released them, sending them crashing down to the Earth.*

    Fallen: Enough of you're insect games! I want Prime!

    *He then saw further off into the distance that there were two alien-looking jets headed towards the pyramid. Not even Cybertronian. One was dark purple/black, and the other was dark blue/silver.*

    Fallen: Now the Autobots are coming for me?

    *He activated his spear and tried to levitate them, but to his suprise, it did not work.*

    Fallen: What is thi-

    *The Fallen was suddenly interupted by a concussive force knocking him off his feet, sending him tumbling down the Pyramid. He got up, growled, and tried to teleport. But once again to his suprise, that didn't work either.*

    Fallen: What's going on here?

    Cyclonus: Don't ask questions, just give us information on the Primus.

    *The Fallen looked up to see Scourge and Cyclonus staring down at him. Cyclonus aimed his cannon arm at him.*

    Fallen: How...DARE YOU!!! RAGH!!

    *The Fallen jumped up and took hold of Scourge and threw him into Cyclonus, knocking both of them down. He then picked up his spear and thrust it into Scourge's chest.*

    Fallen: DIE!!!

    Scourge: Not...yet...

    *The Fallen's optics widened in shock. Scourge took hold of the spear, and it simply melted into a puddle of goo. Both the Heralds stood up and Scourge's chest healed. Before the Fallen could react, Cyclonus took hold of his throat and forced him against a pillar. As the Fallen struggled, Scourge walked up to him.*

    Scourge: Listen, obviously we could help each other. You want Optimus? We can give him to you.

    Fallen: Why....should...I...trust....you?

    Scourge: What do you have to lose? Besides, if we show you Optimus, you must give us information on the Primus.

    Fallen: What....do...you...AGH....mean?

    Scourge: Oh, I think you know exactly what we mean.

    Fallen: RAGH....Fine...just....EGH....let...me...go....

    *Scourge nodded and Cyclonus let him go. The Fallen fell to the ground holding his damaged throat.*

    Fallen: Who are you?

    Scourge: Travelers. Heralds. And you're new best friends.
     
  9. Hiraga

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    CHAPTER 12 PART 2

    *The Fallen walked through the pillars in Egypt with Scourge and Cyclonus following.*

    Fallen: You want to know about the Primus? I'll tell you about the Primus.

    Cyclonus: Then DO IT.

    Fallen: Fine, I am. In the beginning, there were two beings. The Unicron and the Primus.

    Scourge: You know about Unicron as well?

    Fallen: Do you want to hear the story or not? Anyway, Unicron and Primus were brothers. Part of a gigantic race of planet like beings. Primus was the king, the leader of this race. Unicron was his younger brother, but rather then royalty Unicron was treated like a common thief. Which he was. The place where this race lived was extremely wealthy. But what they had a love for, was weaponry. They had no real wars, just had a strange obsession with weapons. So they created the ultimate weapon...It was everything, a library of information, a death bringer, and most importantly...a creator.

    Scourge: What was this weapon?

    *The Fallen turned to the Heralds and glared.*

    Fallen: They called it the Allspark.

    *The Heralds nodded and the Fallen continued.*

    Fallen: Unicron stole this weapon, killing three of his species in the process. The Primus was ashamned of his brother, and the species first war was started.

    *The Fallen laughed to himself.*

    Fallen: You know it's funny. They had all those weapons...but none of them did any good against Unicron. He used the Allspark to kill them all, and in very terrible ways. Primus could not take his brother anymore, so he used his own personal weapon to teleport himself and Unicron away from their land. They went to this universe, and fought for years. Primus invented the Allspark so he managed to avoid it's deadly powers. But once the great fight was over, Primus had stolen back the Allspark, and forced Unicron into another dimension entirely.

    Cyclonus: Amazing...

    Fallen: Once it was all over, Primus had managed to shift himself into a giant planet. It was during this time he took the time to grieve over the loss of his race, his land, and his brother. But he decided to be a little creative while in stasis, and used the Allspark to create my race.

    Scourge: What else do you know?

    Fallen: All I know now is that since the Allspark is dead, so is he.

    *The Heralds eyes widened.*

    Cyclonus: He's...DEAD?

    Fallen: Yes. And that's all I know.
     
  10. Stiles

    Stiles The Lovely Little Demon

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    Oh My God! Dude I wish this was TF 3. That would sooo totally be awesome! By the way you aren't going to kill Optimus,right?
     
  11. Hiraga

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    Well this is TF4...But I'm not commenting on the whole Optimus dying thing...so take that for what you will.
     
  12. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Did you even read Doomsday? This is the sequel to that.

    Great updates! I like how you made the Fallen seem so weak compared to the Heralds. Now we know the world is in trouble :wink: 
     
  13. Stiles

    Stiles The Lovely Little Demon

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    Yes I read Doomsday. I was tired when i posted the message. What I meant to say that this should be a movie along with Doomsday.
     
  14. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Awesome, man! :thumb 
     
  15. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    I hear ya. You should see some of the stuff I've posted right after I've woken up :lol 
     
  16. cybertron2006

    cybertron2006 Fly By Clockwork Pictures

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    Re-reviewed!!!
     
  17. Hiraga

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    CHAPTER 12 PART 3

    *Fallen glared at the Heralds.*

    Fallen: You promised me you could tak me to Prime! Where is he?

    *The Heralds, both calmed down and looked at the Fallen.*

    Cyclonus: We did promise you that didn't we...

    Scourge: Fine. We'll take you to Optimus. But we'll be back.

    Fallen: Back?

    Scourge: We must leave. But we will leave you eith Optimus. Once we return, we'll probably need some more help from you.

    Fallen: And what's in it for me?

    *Cyclonus smiled at Scourge.*

    Cyclonus: We'll make sure you rule this universe until it's end.

    Fallen: You...you can do that?

    Scourge: What do you have to lose?

    Fallen: A lot...trust me...

    Cyclonus: We only want your help in figuring this universe out. But believe us, with our power, you would be ruler in no time.

    *The Fallen considered for a while, then smiled.*

    Fallen: Take me.

    *****************************************************************

    *At the Autobot base, Bumblebee and his team pulled up. Sam, Simmons, and Waylan got out.*

    Waylan: That had to be the longest drive...I need water right now!

    Simmons: I gotta agree with shrimpy here Witicky. Does this place have some fricken nourishment?

    *The Autobots transformed. The entire group walked through the base gates and saw the Dinobots standing at the base doors.*

    Ratchet: Grimlock, where are the others?

    Grimlock: Matrix of Leadership stolen...they inside, while Dinobots gaurd base!

    Swoop: We gaurd good bot-brother!

    Blaster: Brother? They must have been hanging out with Jazz.

    Chromia: Is Ultra Magnus alright?

    Snarl: He just got healed by Jolt.

    Bumblebee: We have to go talk to them. Now that the Fallen's back, we need each other more then ever.
     
  18. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Fallen you gullible fool!!

    Lawl I get into this a lot :lol 
     
  19. Stiles

    Stiles The Lovely Little Demon

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    Wow Fallen. Your that stupid.
     
  20. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Awesome! Fallen seems very foolish.