Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Hiraga, Sep 27, 2009.

  1. Stiles

    Stiles The Lovely Little Demon

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    Holy shit!
     
  2. cybertron2006

    cybertron2006 Fly By Clockwork Pictures

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    This calls for some good ol' mindfuckery!
     
  3. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    Mindfuckery? Explain, in good way or bad way?
    And why?

    Thanks though guys. :D 
     
  4. jonatron26

    jonatron26 Well-Known Member

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    oh, my god. i hope nothing bad happens....
     
  5. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    I'll insult the Fallen if I want :D 

    But why didnt the Heralds just ask Unicron about the Primus? They were practically brothers.

    Anyway: I'd say Keith David for either Unicron (the G1 guy is dead right?) I mean, have you heard his voice? It just fits.
     
  6. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    Orson Welles? And yes.

    The Heralds weren't looking for a history on Primus, they wanted to know if he was still here, how the Allspark was, and if Primus was as weak as he was when Unicron left. That's what Unicron wanted to find out.
     
  7. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    Hey guys, I'm gonna put it to a vote. Do you think I should give Unicron a robot mode or not? I'm waiting on at least ten posts. Read the description of him in Chapter 13 part 1 and make your desicion! GO!
     
  8. SkyfiRe71

    SkyfiRe71 Precursor

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    yes but like a beastmode robot mode: like a gigantic serpent cuz snake r often used to represent the root of all evil
     
  9. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Awesome chapter, man! Seems like the Fallen isn't an idiot after all!

    As for the robot mode, give him a humanoid robot mode, but so scary we won't be able to sleep at night.
     
  10. jazz_00

    jazz_00 legen wait 4 it dary

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    i vote for unicron to be something like an octopus! with tendrils going everywhere and his wicked beak mouth. hell i gotta draw him anyway lol
     
  11. cybertron2006

    cybertron2006 Fly By Clockwork Pictures

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    I was just saying "Good job".

    ROBOT MODE!!!!

    Make him like Energon Unicron. Ya know, with the energon pulsing inside of him?
     
  12. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    Lol, guys, the question was if you want him to have a robot mode or not. Not what do you want him to look like.
    But it does look like I'll be giving him a robot mode.
     
  13. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    CHAPTER 14 PART 1

    *Unicron stopped at Jupiter, taking a moment to consume on of the planets many moons. He disabled all human sattelite cameras, so nothing could detect his presence. He was now free to take Earth by suprise. Suddenly, the eater of worlds spotted something. Flying nearby were Cyclonus and Scourge, his Heralds. A voice seemingly boomed out from all over the planet.*

    Unicron: My sons...what have you found out?

    Cyclonus: Master, we talked to an acient inhabitent of this universe.

    Scourge: We found out the status of Primus and the Allspark.

    Unicron: You have? Excellent. What is their status?

    Cyclonus: Erm...my lord...

    Unicron: What is it?

    Scourge: Master....The Allspark has been destroyed, and Primus dead.

    *There was silence for a long while. Cyclonus and Scourge looked down in regret, expecting to be destroyed for the terrible news they told their master. Instead, Unicron spoke calmly.*

    Unicron: So I AM the last of my race. Normally this would be a bad thing. But to me...it only makes my mission easier.

    Cyclonus: Easier, sir?

    Unicron: I will not lie. Primus, as much as I despise him, was always stronger then me. Now about the Allspark, it's destruction COULD render our mission obselete. Without it, it would be impossible to create my new universe...

    Scourge: So, if I may ask, what do we do now my master?

    Unicron: This...Earth planet...I hardly believe that they would be able to completely destroy the Cube's energy. It cannot be destroyed...It's power must have been...transferred to another object...

    Cyclonus: So what do you want us to do Unicron?

    Unicron: Seek this object that now holds the Cube's energy. Sentient or not, find it...and bring it to me...
     
  14. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    CHAPTER 14 PART 2

    *It had been one day since Soundwave had planted his virus. In the city of Las Vegas, the Autobots drove while Ratchet, Ironhide, and Ultra Magnus carried the Dinobots in large trailers. Sam, Waylan, and Simmons rode in Bumblebee.*

    Waylan: I don't get it what did I do?

    Sam: You didn't tell us about the FREAKING GIANT PLANET EATING ROBOT PICTURE YOU HAD!

    Simmons: Really Waylan that was probably the most important one!

    Waylan: You don't consider the destruction of Pluto important?

    Simmons: Yes, but I consider what CAUSED the destruction of Pluto even more important!

    Waylan: Well I'm sorry...

    Simmons: Don't give me sorry! Instead of giving me sorry, give me the picture of the huge mechanical planet!

    *Suddenly, each radio in the Autobot's started buzzing. A scratched up voice came through, and it was the voice of Optimus Prime.*

    Optimus: Autobots? Can you hear me?

    Bumblebee: What the....

    Sam: Prime? Is that you?

    Optimus: Yes it is.

    Ultra Magnus: Optimus!? Are you alright? Where are you?

    Optimus: I'm fine. You aren't going to believe this...But I'm with the Fallen.

    Ultra Magnus: What? Do you need back up?

    Optimus: No. I just need you to tell me where you are.

    Ultra Magnus: We're in Las Vegas.

    Ironhide: What are you doing with the Fallen?

    Optimus: I'll tell you when I get there.

    Rodimus: When will that be?

    *Suddenly, traffic stopped. All the Autobots had to avoid crashing into each other and other humans. People in all of the cars in front of the Autobots immediatly got out and ran up the street screaming. Sam got out of the car and his eyes widened. Optimus was standing in front all of the cars, and right behind him was the towering Decepticon known as the Fallen.*

    Optimus: Right now.
     
  15. Shadow25

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    Awesome. I can't wait to see if the Fallen will be true to his word... or betray a Prime again.
     
  16. jonatron26

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    this is getting intense.
     
  17. Jetfire217

    Jetfire217 AirialBot

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    Dude,This is 20 time better then Doomsday
    if this was a movie it would be my favorite!!!
    Fantastic Job keep it up!!
     
  18. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Awesome! :thumb 
     
  19. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    I vote no robot mode. He (Unicron) isn't exactly a transformer. I think the energy ball consuming thing is more menacing.

    The Fallen didnt kill Prime eh? I guess this means theyre temporary allies.
     
  20. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    I vote no robot mode. He (Unicron) isn't exactly a transformer. I think the energy ball consuming thing is more menacing.

    The Fallen didnt kill Prime eh? I guess this means theyre temporary allies.