TLK Fan Edit

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by BumblebeeNotOP, Jul 11, 2017.

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A single post that has the entire story in it, or the multiple posts are fine?

Poll closed Oct 11, 2017.
  1. Yes, make the single post

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  1. BumblebeeNotOP

    BumblebeeNotOP Autobot Second-In-Command

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    While the movie was not bad at all, there are a lot of things that could have happened in the movie instead. Seen here below is my own edit of TLK. If this is not allowed, please mods, by all means, take it down. Some surprises along the way as well...

    A little summary on the changes:
    -Optimus Prime is the last knight
    -No Decepticons will die
    -Berserker is simply mentioned

    Fandom criticisms addressed:
    Cogman will use his Headmaster ability
    More screentime for Optimus and the Decepticons
    Some explanations

    Principal Cast
    Autobots
    Optimus Prime
    (voiced by Peter Cullen)
    Bumblebee (voiced by Will Friedle)
    Hot Rod (voiced by Omar Sy)
    Hound (voiced by John Goodman)
    Drift (voiced by Ken Watanabe)
    Crosshairs (voiced by John DiMaggio)
    Cogman (voiced by Jim Carter)
    Sqweeks (voiced by Reno Wilson)
    Scoop (voiced by Erik Aadahl)
    Holepunch
    Grimlock
    (voiced by Khary Payton)
    Wheelie (voiced by Tom Kenny)
    Canopy (voiced by Frank Welker)
    Bulldog (voiced by Mark Ryan)
    Topspin (voiced by Steven Barr)

    Decepticons
    Megatron
    (voiced by Frank Welker)
    Barricade (voiced by Jess Harnell)
    Onslaught (voiced by Gary Oldman)
    Nitro Zeus (voiced by John DiMaggio)
    Dreadbot
    Mohawk
    (voiced by Reno Wilson)
    Thundershock (voiced by Mark Ryan)
    Berserker

    Others
    Quintessa
    (voiced by Gemma Chan)
    Infernocus (voiced by Steven Barr)
    Dragonstorm
    Stormreign
    (voiced by John Cleese)
    Dragonicus (voiced by Gerard Butler)
    Steelbane (voiced by Steven Barr)
    Skullitron (voiced by Frank Welker)
    Slash (voiced by Steven Barr)
    Hardhead (voiced by Frank Welker)
    Daytrader (voiced by Steve Buscemi)
    Unicron

    Humans
    Cade Yeager
    (played by Mark Wahlberg)
    Izabella (played by Isabela Moner)
    Seymour Simmons (played by John Turturro)
    Vivian Wembley (played by Laura Haddock)
    Lieutenant Colonel William Lennox (played by Josh Duhamel)
    Sir Edmund Burton (played by Anthony Hopkins)
    Jimmy (played by Jerrod Carmichael)
    Commander Santos (played by Santiago Cabrera)
    King Arthur (played by Liam Garrigan)
    Merlin (played by Brendan Gleeson)


    Any comments are accepted, and feel free to ask about the characters and the overall narrative :) 

    A stop motion adaptation can also be found in my YouTube channel below
     
    Last edited: Aug 8, 2018
  2. Cruxton Prime

    Cruxton Prime The Fandom Prime

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    I wish the movie was like that.
     
  3. Flyby

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    I was going to do something like this too, but I guess you've beat me too it :) . Part of what I was going to do was introduce the rest of the combaticons and have Brawl be revived some how and to have the sub be an actual transformer like Seaspray. I look forward to seeing how you edit the film.
     
  4. greboguru

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    Um... uh... Did we watch the same movie?
     
  5. BumblebeeNotOP

    BumblebeeNotOP Autobot Second-In-Command

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    Why yes. Yes we did
     
  6. greboguru

    greboguru Psychedelic Brainchild

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    Except for the fact that everyone would have been dead halfway through the movie.

    When two planets come into each other's orbit -- let alone touch -- that spells absolute devastation and destruction for both planets. The gravitational forces alone would be catastrophic. The atmospheres would be ripped away, volcanoes, tidal waves, floods, the entire crust and mantle ripped up... Both planets would have been utterly obliterated.

    The G1 episode "The Ultimate Doom" was more believable than that schlock.
     
  7. daniel 97

    daniel 97 Autobots' second in command

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    Quite interesting.
     
  8. Bob evans

    Bob evans Well-Known Member

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    That is one of the Best stories i have ever heard. Mined if i take some elements from this story and put some in mine
     
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    Nice!
     
  10. Bob evans

    Bob evans Well-Known Member

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    Um Im confused. Who Dies in this part and a part i dont like is Optimus suddenly showing up. Insnt he supposed to be under quintessas rule.
     
  11. BumblebeeNotOP

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    No one dies here. Optimus shows up because Quintessa told him to, as seen in Chapter 6. Quintessa isn't here yet because she still needs to move Cybertron, which technically speaking, moves a lot slower.
     
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    This story is awesome!
     
  13. BumblebeeNotOP

    BumblebeeNotOP Autobot Second-In-Command

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    Thanks, what do you think of it?
     
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    It's just so in depth and detailed,plot really works.
     
  15. BumblebeeNotOP

    BumblebeeNotOP Autobot Second-In-Command

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    Thanks. And while you're at it, what DON'T you like about it? :) 
     
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    I love it.
     
  17. Lunamaria

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    same TBH.
     
  18. Bob evans

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    To be honest. I always liked this one more than Mine. He took a bunch of ideas from the lore and put them in this story. He even put the Conversations and Dialogue. All I did was Put the most important plot lines. You did your Fan Fic Amazing and I would pay to see this kind of Movie. You handled all the Characters well especially the Decepticons. How you took them and made them into the New Combaticons. I hope you keep on Making these films and maybe one day we could collaborate on One of yours or Mine and We could make a great story. Keep up the good work.
     
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  19. BumblebeeNotOP

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    Thanks man. I would definitely want to collab on one with you soon. I want to try creating a story of a movie with a large cast. And who there is known to have created a story with a large cast and gave them their own shining moments, and it is none other than the brilliant man I have replied to :) 
     
  20. Bob evans

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    Thanks man anyways when you asked me about those combaticon names. What where they for