TLK Fan Edit

BumblebeeNotOP · Jul 11, 2017

While the movie was not bad at all, there are a lot of things that could have happened in the movie instead. Seen here below is my own edit of TLK. If this is not allowed, please mods, by all means, take it down. Some surprises along the way as well...

A little summary on the changes:
-Optimus Prime is the last knight
-No Decepticons will die
-Berserker is simply mentioned

Fandom criticisms addressed:
Cogman will use his Headmaster ability
More screentime for Optimus and the Decepticons
Some explanations

Principal Cast
Autobots
Optimus Prime (voiced by Peter Cullen)
Bumblebee (voiced by Will Friedle)
Hot Rod (voiced by Omar Sy)
Hound (voiced by John Goodman)
Drift (voiced by Ken Watanabe)
Crosshairs (voiced by John DiMaggio)
Cogman (voiced by Jim Carter)
Sqweeks (voiced by Reno Wilson)
Scoop (voiced by Erik Aadahl)
Holepunch
Grimlock (voiced by Khary Payton)
Wheelie (voiced by Tom Kenny)
Canopy (voiced by Frank Welker)
Bulldog (voiced by Mark Ryan)
Topspin (voiced by Steven Barr)

Decepticons
Megatron (voiced by Frank Welker)
Barricade (voiced by Jess Harnell)
Onslaught (voiced by Gary Oldman)
Nitro Zeus (voiced by John DiMaggio)
Dreadbot
Mohawk (voiced by Reno Wilson)
Thundershock (voiced by Mark Ryan)
Berserker

Others
Quintessa (voiced by Gemma Chan)
Infernocus (voiced by Steven Barr)
Dragonstorm
Stormreign (voiced by John Cleese)
Dragonicus (voiced by Gerard Butler)
Steelbane (voiced by Steven Barr)
Skullitron (voiced by Frank Welker)
Slash (voiced by Steven Barr)
Hardhead (voiced by Frank Welker)
Daytrader (voiced by Steve Buscemi)
Unicron

Humans
Cade Yeager (played by Mark Wahlberg)
Izabella (played by Isabela Moner)
Seymour Simmons (played by John Turturro)
Vivian Wembley (played by Laura Haddock)
Lieutenant Colonel William Lennox (played by Josh Duhamel)
Sir Edmund Burton (played by Anthony Hopkins)
Jimmy (played by Jerrod Carmichael)
Commander Santos (played by Santiago Cabrera)
King Arthur (played by Liam Garrigan)
Merlin (played by Brendan Gleeson)

Any comments are accepted, and feel free to ask about the characters and the overall narrative

A stop motion adaptation can also be found in my YouTube channel below

Cruxton Prime · Jul 11, 2017

I wish the movie was like that.

Flyby · Jul 15, 2017

I was going to do something like this too, but I guess you've beat me too it . Part of what I was going to do was introduce the rest of the combaticons and have Brawl be revived some how and to have the sub be an actual transformer like Seaspray. I look forward to seeing how you edit the film.

greboguru · Jul 25, 2017

BumblebeeNotOP said: ↑

the movie was not bad at all
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Um... uh... Did we watch the same movie?

BumblebeeNotOP · Jul 26, 2017

greboguru said: ↑

Um... uh... Did we watch the same movie?
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Why yes. Yes we did

greboguru · Jul 26, 2017

BumblebeeNotOP said: ↑

the movie was not bad at all
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Except for the fact that everyone would have been dead halfway through the movie.

When two planets come into each other's orbit -- let alone touch -- that spells absolute devastation and destruction for both planets. The gravitational forces alone would be catastrophic. The atmospheres would be ripped away, volcanoes, tidal waves, floods, the entire crust and mantle ripped up... Both planets would have been utterly obliterated.

The G1 episode "The Ultimate Doom" was more believable than that schlock.

daniel 97 · Jul 28, 2017

BumblebeeNotOP said: ↑

Chapter 1
Chicago
Former Decepticon scout Barricade contemplated alone in an abandoned building. To keep his idling occupied, he tinkered on his turret-ring that is wrapped around his left arm. His mind was still bothered about that fateful day: when both Autobots and humans assaulted him and his fellow Decepticons right before they had Cybertron into the Earth's atmosphere. At the slight recalibration of his optics, his fellow Decepticons were dropping dead as insects ran toward them with their firearms blazing
He was confident he would be able to suppress the humans' firepower, but the next thing he knew, his legs were blown off. On the ground, the humans fired upon him, destroying his optics. He crawled blindly around, longing for his comrades, but he was suddenly knocked out by a yellow flash. When he awakened, the battle had concluded. Despite blinded, he was lucky enough to be able to crawl away before the human authorities invaded the area. The other Decepticon survivors were either killed or taken as prisoners. Now, seven Earth years has passed since that great battle, he took this chance to repair himself substantially into a new and improved body; and has refused to leave the place where the Decepticons suffered great casualities including their own leader, Megatron. The only reason why he refuses to leave, is because of a floating rumor that an inventor is taking in a bunch of Cybertronians and providing them with shelter.
Barricade aimed his turret at the wall of the building, and fired. The turret's eight barrels fired all at once, blowing a massive hole at the building's wall, bringing in daylight into the dimmed interior. Satisfied with the turret's damage output, he retracted his turret. While looking out at the blown hole, he spotted a small dump truck overloaded with junk passing by. As if by signal, he immediately switched into his disguise form, which is a midnight blue Ford Mustang police cruiser. He roared out of the building and followed the overloaded dump truck. According to his recent observations, this specific dump truck comes and goes from the same direction at all times.
His pseudo chase lead him through a ghost town; a seemingly forgotten part of Chicago, and ultimately ending at a dillapidated junkyard. Seeing the overwhelming size of the junkyard, he decided not to continue inside, knowing that he is alone and if the rumor serves to be true, he would be easily overwhelmed in terms of sheer number. Before turning around, he logged the coordinates of the junkyard.

Gobi Desert
In the midst of the blank desert lay the Knightship, crashed. The spacecraft was a legendary Cybertronian vessel: it used to be a vessel that carried the Knights' Temenos, a hub or stronghold of the ancient Knights of Cybertron. They were responsible for assisting the Primes and were usually the first witnesses when a new generation of Cybertronians were created by Cybertron or Primus himself. That was the past, until recently, it was acquired by intergalactic bounty hunter Lockdown, and was utilized as prison ship for whatever exotic species the bounty hunter collected, and this included four knights that were wrangled up and captured. But this was also before Autobot leader Optimus Prime, who was also one of the Knights of Cybertron, was able to liberate the ancient knights and finally defeat the bounty hunter, leaving the possession of the Knightship up for anyone. During the battle between Optimus and Lockdown, Decepticon leader Megatron, who was thought dead, hijacked the ship and tried to take it for himself. Tried to, as Lockdown's mercenary forces proved to be a force to be reckoned with. When Megatron destroyed everyone, the ship was heavily damaged, unable to be controlled, and ultimately crashed into the Gobi Desert. A way to desecrate millions of years of Cybertronian history.
The ship lay dormant for two years already, hidden away by mountains of sand. If ever the locals spot it, they will forget they ever saw it for fear of their lives. The crashed spaceship was totalled: it was no longer salvageable. The hull had a huge hole torn in, its darkmatter drives leaking, the wings were displaced, and its former crew was spilling into the sand. At the bridge, was a large deactivated silver drone. Its hands were on the controls of the spacecraft, presumably it was trying to control the vehicle.
Just outside the bridge, a one-armed mercenary was trying to break open the door to access the bridge. Realizing that physical strength is not enough, it spotted another deceased mercenary, with its rifle still intact. It sliced off the rifle from the other mercenary's arm, and blew a hole through the bridge access. It quickly rushed in, and proceeded to the controls. Before attempting to re power the ship, it attacked the deactivated silver drone. It attempted to crack open the drone's head, but before it could perform its plan, the silver drone reactivated and tossed the one-armed mercenary out of the bridge.
"I AM GALVATRON!" The silver drone announced.
The mercenary attacked, but proved useless against the larger drone. Galvatron, who was a drone created by Kinetic Solutions Incorporated, was possessed by the thought-dead Decepticon leader Megatron and took it as a body for himself.
A small blade emerged from under Galvatron's arm, and charged at the mercenary. Even one-armed, the mercenary proved to be a challenge for Galvatron. The mercenary dodged the blade strike, and wrapped his arm around Galvatron's head, attempting to decapitate the drone. Galvatron responded by flipping around, and with a quick strike, drove the blade straight into mercenary's neck.
"Even in death, there is no command but mine." He sneered.
After disposing of the rogue mercenary, he decided to look around. The place that intrigued Megatron the most, was the weapons storage. Swords, blasters, shields lined the entire place. The place in complete disarray though. Blasters were scattered around the floor and some of the ancient shields have shattered. The statues of the ancient knights have also crumbled. The only thing that was still intact was the sword storage. There were a total of five swords inserted into the storage, with one vacant spot. Galvatron tried pulling out one sword from the storage, but he could not pull it out. He then tried another sword on the right, but to no avail. But when he tried the sword on the left, he heard a clicking sound. As if by magic, his arms transformed into gauntlets that resemble the kind from knightly armor, his head horns were turned into a face guard, and a brand new fusion cannon that can be turned into a shield at will. Other improvements also include waist guards and enhanced shoulder armor. His chest grinder was shut down, and simply covered by enhanced armor plates similar to that of a knight's as well.
Galvatron was a prototype drone created by technological tycoon Joshua Joyce of Kinetic Solutions Incorporated (KSI), to address the issue of the presence of Cybertronians after the destructive Battle of Chicago. Galvatron was meant to rival the likes of Optimus Prime, so as to make the public feel safe as this drone was going to suppress the Autobot leader, and at the same time evoke a noble feel to it. Their expected outcome was not met, due to the drone gaining sentience, and sparking an uprising. This was caused probably, by their source material. To gather information and the science on how a Cybertronian works, KSI acquired scrap Cybertronians left by the carnage of the Battle of Chicago. The scrap included the body, or what's left of Decepticon leader Megatron. Since the designers, and Joyce himself wanted the power of someone who can rival the strength that of Optimus Prime, what better source to look at than the Autobots' greatest foe. While they only wanted the science on how their kind works, Megatron had other plans. While his physical body can be ruled out as dead, due to him being decapitated, his mind still had brainwave activity; unbeknownst to them. Basically, the Decepticon leader swayed the humans into creating him a new body, just for him to control. This is possible for Megatron, as having the energies of the Allspark within him, after his revival using the same device that once killed him. The Autobots are not aware of this, and the Decepticons have long forgotten about this principle. Now as Galvatron basically possesses Megatron's subconscious, the memories of the latter are slowly returning.
After receiving his upgrades, Galvatron, with much gusto, pulled out the sword. The weapon had the hilt of a sword, but the head of a double-sided axe. With conviction, the Decepticon leader announced his return, accompanied by a cackle of glory.
"I AM MEGATRON!" He announced. "DECEPTICONS, I HAVE RETURNED!"
From his transformation, Megatron was also a member of the Knights of Cybertron, just like Optimus. The sword he picked up is coded to its original owner's biodata, allowing it only to be retrieved by the original owner only. It would also seem that the reactivation and resurfacing of Megatron's identity as a knight, contained the memories of the original Megatron, granting the drone all the memories of the Decepticon tyrant. Now, the drone now contains the memories of the drone as Galvatron and the original Megatron. The reborn Decepticon took time to let everything that happened sink in.
"Finally. Away from that wretched body." Megatron retorted. "I have truly returned now."
He then remembered the last moments he had before Optimus Prime ripped out his head, and spine, during the final moments of the Battle of Chicago.
"Optimus." He growled. "After I helped him defeat Sentinel, this is how he repays me? Cybertron. He destroyed it as well."
Megatron's new fusion cannon deployed from his right arm, and out of rage, fired a blast that tore a hole in the bridge. Before he could escape, a voice called on to him.
"So you want to rebuild your home?"
"Who dares?" Megatron pointed his cannon.
"You wouln't need to. I have no quarrel." The voice responded.
"Who are you?" Megatron inquired, while lowering and retracting his cannon.
"Come to the cages. I am the only one alive."
Megatron walked forward, to face a rusting Cybertronian inside one of the cages. He face was falling apart and his legs have been severed.
"Now, who are you?" Megatron inquired once again.
"I am Thundershock." The voice replied.
"One of the oldest Cybertronians, and one of the close followers of The Fallen." Megatron realized. "You were thought to be destroyed by the Primes."
"I see you know your history." Thundershock replied. "And I wasn't destroyed. I was handed over to the knights by the Primes, and I have remained here for the rest of my life."
"What do you want?" Megatron sneered.
"I have knowledge to aid you. As a prisoner of the knights for all my life, I know many secrets that are hidden from the common Cybertronian."
"Just cut it!" Megatron growled.
"If you insist!" Thundershock snapped back. "When The Fallen explored this planet, he came across many more ancient Cybertronians. The reason as to why they were on this planet, is because they were trying to protect somethimg from rising beneath the planet. The Fallen then decided to build a Star Harvester to destroy this planet's sun, which will in turn kill it."
"I already know this part!" Megatron yelled.
"I'm not finished. When I was incarcerated, I overheard many knights discuss certain things, especially about a weapon they have taken from their own creator. Its purpose was to awaken the very being that is beneath the planet, at the same time kill it. A certain human approached the knights one day, and that weapon was given to him, never to be seen again."
"Sounds promising. Where do I find this, 'weapon'?" Megatron asked, intrigued.
"The knights said that the 'last knight' would bring the weapon back to them, together with the descendant of that human they have given the weapon to. The last knight would be identified by a certain talisman. And that knight would come from Cybertron, and arrive here one day."
"That means I have to wait?" Megatron asked in anger. "RAAARRGGHH!"
Megatron lashed out and grabbed the ancient Decepticon by the throat.
"When do I get to do something?"
"You can start by looking at the largest battlefield you had on this planet. I have heard rumors circulating about that knight escaping Lockdown's clutches and getting lost in space." Thundershock replied calmly.
Megatron released his hold on the Decepticon. "For now, I will keep in mind the things you have told me. In the mean time, I will have to regroup if I am going to go for this. I really need a team regardless if I am going to do your mission anyways." He said smugly.
Looking at the blasted hole, Megatron ran towards it, and switched into a Cybertronian fighter jet, and blasted off to parts unknown.
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Quite interesting.

Bob evans · Jul 28, 2017

That is one of the Best stories i have ever heard. Mined if i take some elements from this story and put some in mine

DeletedUser_119270 · Aug 2, 2017

Nice!

Bob evans · Aug 14, 2017

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Chapter 8
Chicago
"Search this town!" Cade heard Megatron order. "They're close."
Cade, Jimmy, Izzy and Sqweeks navigated through narrow alleyways to weave through the town. Their only guide is the direction of the Decepticons' constant yelling. The had to cross one street that nearly got them caught. As they were about to cross, Onslaught walked by. The humans hid in the dark section on the building's wall as the hulking brute cast a large shadow as he walked by.
As they continued running, they were surprised by Mohawk's sudden appearance on top of the buildings. Thankfully, the Decepticon did not see them. Surprised, Sqweeks suddenly turned on one of the alleys, while Cade, Jimmy and Izzy continued running straight. The three humans rendezvoused with Crosshairs, as they spied on the Decepticons. That is when Izzy noticed Sqweeks was gone.
"Where's Sqweeks?" Izzy asked worriedly.
"Weren't you together?" Cade replied.
"We were."
"That ain't our problem, now." Jimmy remarked. "We've got a couple of Decepticons on our asses, and we got three Autobots against them. Great."
"Don't worry." Crosshairs said confidently as he pulled out another sub-machine gun. "These are just leaderless scum. No one to coordinate their attacks. Easy peasy. I'll take out the foot soldiers, then Bee and Drift can assist me in taking out the big one."
"You sure?" Jimmy asked, skeptical.
Crosshairs ignored the question. Then came a communication from Drift.
"Go on, Drift." Crosshairs answered.
"Decepticon near your location, Crosshairs." Drift warned. "Ready yourself."
"Ready as I'll ever be." Crosshairs said as he aimed his guns at the sky.
"Wait!" Drift called out again."
"What now?" Crosshairs asked, agitated.
"I think one of us is cornered."
"What are you talking about? Damn Bee."
Then Crosshairs' assumption was proven wrong when Mohawk called out to the other Decepticons.
"Check out that blue mofo!" Mohawk called out.
Sqweeks emerged from an alley way and onto the street. He realized his mistake when he saw Megatron at the other end. He attempted to go back into the street, but stopped when Mohawk blocked his way.
"Where ya goin'?" Mohawk said cunningly.
Megatron slowly walked forward, deploying his fusion cannon. "Come here."
Izzy tried to intervene, but Crosshairs and Cade stopped her.
"Change in plan." Drift said. "Have Bee distract the big one, then we dispose of the foot soldiers, so as to divert its attention on the scrap drone."
Crosshairs then left the humans, with Cade surveying the area as to how they will extract Sqweeks once the plan has been executed. Megatron walked up to Sqweeks, and picked up the helpless Autobot as the other Decepticons converged.
"Easy to crush." Megatron mused. "Easy to blast. I will enjoy pulling out your circuits."
"Fuck you." Sqweeks bleeped with difficulty.
Bumblebee was about to attack Megatron when Izzy suddenly showed herself, despite Jimmy's warnings.
"Shit!" Cade exclaimed.
Barricade pointed out to Megatron about Izzy approaching.
"Put him down!" Izzy yelled angrily. "Go to hell."
"This planet is hell." Megatron responded.
"That fleshy's gonna get it." Nitro remarked.
"You think I'm afraid of you?" Izzy taunted Megatron.
"You should be!" Megatron sneered.
"Incoming!" Cade called out as he aimed his Cybertronian rifle at Megatron.
"More insects." Barricade said as he deployed his turret ring.
Before the Decepticons could react, Cade fired a shot at Megatron which knocked him back. While the enemy was distracted, Cade blew up the street using a remote he had in his pocket. In preparation for this kind of attack, Cade rigged the entire town to blow, one street at a time, using salvaged weaponry from the Battle of Chicago.
As the street blew up, Bumblebee rushed to them, and shielded them, including a traumatized Sqweeks. Once the smoke cleared, Bumblebee then backtracked, while shielding the humans, while also opening fire on the recovering Decepticons.
"Get those vile beings!" Megatron ordered. "Even the humans."
"We're on it!" Onslaught obeyed, as he deployed his arm cannon, and returned fire at Bumblebee.
Nitro took to the skies to launch an airstrike, but was hindered by Drift who engaged him in helicopter form. They exchanged missiles, and it ultimately led to Drift tackling down Nitro to the ground in robot form. The two then engaged in hand-to-hand combat, that led to Drift injuring Nitro in the arm.
"You'll pay for this!" Nitro threatened, as he backed away.
As Bumblebee got the humans to safety, Crosshairs took over and engaged Onslaught. Bumblebee deposited the humans back to where Jimmy was hiding, and instructed them to run.
"Are you out of your mind!" Cade scolded Izzy as they ran. "You don't do that kind of kamikaze shit!"
"That thing's gonna get us killed." Jimmy commented nervously.
Crosshairs tried getting up and close to Onslaught and tried to use his size to his advantage. Unfortunately for him, the Decepticon had other plans. When Crosshairs tried performing an uppercut, Onslaught went straight for the Autobot's head using his pincer claw. Crosshairs saw it coming at the last minute, nearly missing decapitation.
"Primus of Unicron!" Crosshairs exclaimed.
As he was distracted, Dreadbot then rammed him, and engaged him, leaving Bumblebee to take on Onslaught instead. As Bumblebee prepared to face Onslaught, Mohawk situated himself behind the Autobot, knives ready for a sneak attack.
"Got this mofo, Onslaught." Mohawk muttered.
Bumblebee flipped down his battle mask, and charged towards Onslaught. His enemy activated a missile launcher from his back, and fired two heat-seekers at the Autobot. Bumblebee decided not to fire, as a missile explosion would further damage the town. He leapt over one, and dodged the other, and proceeded to attack Onslaught. As the missiles turned around toward Bumblebee once again, Drift intercepted them and masterfully sliced the missiles clean in half. He also took the chance to fight Mohawk, who engaged him in a fight of blades.
Onslaught's thick armor would not allow Bumblebee's plasma cannon blasts to penetrate, giving him the upper hand. The Decepticon grabbed Bumblebee by the leg, and tossed him around like kid with a stuffed animal.
"Had enough?" Onslaught taunted, as he dropped Bumblebee to the ground.
Then he went for Bumblebee's head using his pincer, but the Autobot caught it at the last minute. He then called for Drift, who was busy dueling Mohawk.
"Sharp tool! Sharp tool for that." Bumblebee called out.
Drift understood, and tossed one of his swords to Bumblebee. Onslaught tried getting the blade himself, but he nearly got cut when Bumblebee picked it up and waved it around. The Autobot used the blade to keep Onslaught's pincer claw open, while he and Drift switched positions. As Bumblebee ran towards Mohawk, Drift ran towards Onslaught, and picked up his blade before the hulking Decepticon could crush it. The warrior flipped, and dug in one of his swords straight into Onslaught's chest. Unfortunately, the blade did not go through the Decepticon's armor, and kept it stuck inside. Drift tried desperately to get the blade out, but it would not budge.
"Get off me, vile Autobot." Onslaught remarked, as he tried picking up Drift, as the latter was constantly punching and kicking.
Bumblebee and Mohawk's battle was quick, as the Autobot quickly fired a shot from his cannon to incapacitate the Decepticon. As he turned around, he spotted Megatron arriving on the scene, while Drift and Onslaught were trying to get each other off themselves.
Megatron landed, and deployed his fusion cannon.
"Give me a clear shot, Onslaught!" He called.
Bumblebee rushed towards the duo, and pushed Drift and Onslaught out of Megatron's blast. He then urged Drift to leave the blade alone, and flee.
"Optimus isn't here!" Megatron complained. "But how are they so hard to exterminate?"
Onslaught stood up, grabbed Drift's stuck sword, and destroyed it.
"They really were waiting for us." Onslaught commented.
"No." Megatron insisted. "We're in chaos. We need to be coordinated."
"I have an idea." Onslaught suggested. "I did this with my crew back on Cybertron to focus our strength during the war."
"What are you suggesting?"
"Gestalt combination."

Cade, Jimmy, Izzy and Sqweeks arrived back at the building where they parked. It was a multi-storey parking building, and like all the buildings in town, it was abandoned. As they entered, police sirens filled the air.
"Shit, it's him again." Cade said.
"Who's him?" Jimmy asked.
"The cop."
"'Cop'? What 'cop'?"
Luckily Cade's truck was parked on the lowest level, giving them easy access. Cade then instructed Jimmy to attach some of the weapons in his bag onto the truck. When Jimmy opened his bag, Wheelie jumped out.
"Finally." Wheelie said in relief. "Can't get out of there. All I could feel was shaking and explosions."
"Shut up and get on the truck!" Cade ordered, as he helped Jimmy attach long blasters on the truck's doors, and hood.
Inside the truck, Cade pressed a button on the stereo, and switches emerged from the dashboard. Switches to activate and fire the newly attached weapons.
"That's so cool." Izzy remarked.
"Just for cases like these." Cade explained.
Just as they were about to leave, they heard a vehicle with a loud engine enter the building. They ducked inside the truck as the vehicle passed by, accompanied with loads of flashing red, blue and white lights.
"That's a con?" Jimmy whispered to Cade.
"Yeah." Cade whispered back.
Barricade switched into his robot mode, and engaged his weapons.
"By Primus, these humans sure don't know how to hide."
As that line spoken by Barricade, Cade stepped on the accelerator, and rammed the Decepticon.
"Ain't too smart to see that coming?" Cade answered back and drove out of the building.
Barricade sneered in anger, and gave chase to the humans. The Decepticon caught up effortless due to him being a lot faster than Cade's truck. Sqweeks, who was loaded up on Cade's truck's bed, was angered after what had happened to him earlier. Out of nowhere, his replacement right arm suddenly formed into a blaster too large for him. He struggled to aim it at Barricade, who was already on their right. Then came his chance. As Cade prepared to turn a corner, he fired, distracting Barricade. The Decepticon screeched to a halt as he did not have enough momentum to change his direction. The humans were in awe.
"Nice one, Sqweeks!" Izzy cheered.
"Not bad." Cade muttered.
"That's my little buddy scrap drone." Wheelie added.
As they prepared to turn into another corner, Nitro swooped in. He landed right in front of them, causing the humans to screech to a halt. Cade tried backing up, but Barricade arrived behind.
"Nowhere to run." Nitro said as he deployed his crossbow. "Sayonara insects!"
Before Nitro could fire, they heard a loud roar and the crushing of asphalt. Cade was relieved.
"On my signal," Cade instructed. "We jump out of here!"
Behind Barricade, was Grimlock charging towards them. The Decepticon scout activated his taser weapon, and aimed it at the charging Dinobot.
"Freeze!" Barricade ordered as he fired.
Grimlock had other ideas. He dodged the blast, rolled on the ground, and swiped him away using his tail.
"NOW!" Cade yelled. The humans followed suit.
Grimlock then attacked Nitro, and in the process crushed Cade's truck. Nitro fired his crossbow at Grimlock, but the Dinobot breathed fire at him, singeing his crosbow, temporarily disabling it. Fortunately for Nitro, the heat he absorbed from Grimlock's fire breath fueled the jet turbines on his back. After a quick warm up, Nitro released a wave of thermal energy, that sent Grimlock flying, knocking out the Dinobot.
"They don't call me Nitro for nothing!" Nitro boasted. "You would do well to remember that."
Then he caught sight of the surprised humans.
"Ain't no Dinobot is gonna stop me." Nitro boasted once more, and deployed an anti-aircraft gun. "Let's see your Dinobot save someone else."
Bumblebee and Drift arrived behind, and rammed Nitro, sending him forward. Then Crosshairs arrived, throwing an unconscious Dreadbot towards Nitro.
"What did I miss?" Crosshairs asked.
"Nothing much." Drift answered as he and Bumblebee switched forms.
"I think that took care most of it." Crosshairs reckoned. "Haven't seen the bigger one though after the explosion."
"I have unfinished business, and I want to finish it fast." Bumblebee chimed in.
"Who are these Decepticons, anyways?" Drift wondered.
"No one important." A voice yelled.
The assembled humans and Autobots turned around to be face-to-face to Megatron. He had his shield deployed, and axe-sword ready.
"No more soldiers." He growled. "Just you and me, Autobots."
"Speaking of the bigger one." Crosshairs remarked.
Bumblebee signalled the humans to take cover.
"Once I destroy all of you, your humans will never be safe." Megatron commented.
"Not if we destroy you first." Drift interrupted. "You're no threat. You're just cult followers of Megatron, wannabe Decepticon threats. We've faced tougher opponents than you."
"Your pride shall be your downfall, Autobots."
"How ironic." Bumblebee commented.
"I am your doom, Autobots. I am Megatron."
"Impossible." Drift could not believe what he just heard. "That is madness."
"Allow me to prove it."
Megatron then charged at the Autobots, weapons drawn. Bumblebee leapt onto him, to attempt to obliterate his head, but Megatron grabbed him, and slammed him down. Crosshairs tried shooting at him, but had his shots blocked by Megatron's shield. The Decepticon leader then used his shield to hit Crosshairs, and knock him out. Lastly, Drift tried to engage him with a swordfight, but Megatron quickly disarmed him. Unarmed, Drift yielded. The Decepticon picked him up by the shoulder, and mused at him.
"Such a skilled warrior. Why do you stay reserved when you should be out there, slaying Autobots ruthlessly."
"Slaying is not what I live for." Drift defended himself. "As a warrior, I fight for honorable causes. You, are not fighting for a honorable cause."
"Anything more honorable than fighting for our own kind?" Megatron questioned.
"Our race was no longer honorable after you started the war. The best we could do is to prevent other races from falling into dishonor."
"Well then." Megatron concluded. "I'll start executing Autobots, starting with you."
Before Megatron could begin his killing, Cade, Jimmy, Izzy and Sqweeks intervened. Out of anger, Megatron slammed Drift down on the ground as well, and deployed his shield away from the attacks. After a while, he switched back his shield into his cannon, and prepared to fire.
"Die, wretched humans!" He roared as his cannon charged up.
The humans were helpless. As Megatron was right in front of them. They have been cornered. Izzy burst into prayer with Jimmy, Wheelie and Sqweeks took cover, while Cade continued fighting. As if an answered prayer, a small space cruiser landed on the street behind Megatron. This distracted Megatron causing him to launch the blast at the one who was exiting the ship. The latter shielded himself from the blast.
"Megatron." It called out.
"I know that voice." Cade thought.
Megatron let out a maniacal chuckle. "Optimus. About time."
"I see you have reacquired your knightly form." Optimus noticed.
"Reacquired a form I have once discarded before is still better than having to endure being in the wretched human body." Megatron explained. "As I said, I will be back, and now, here we are."
"I have no quarrel with you, Megatron." Optimus said. "Let the humans go, and we could talk about this."
"You may not have, but I do!" Megatron yelled as he charged.
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Um Im confused. Who Dies in this part and a part i dont like is Optimus suddenly showing up. Insnt he supposed to be under quintessas rule.

BumblebeeNotOP · Aug 14, 2017

Bob evans said: ↑

Um Im confused. Who Dies in this part and a part i dont like is Optimus suddenly showing up. Insnt he supposed to be under quintessas rule.
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No one dies here. Optimus shows up because Quintessa told him to, as seen in Chapter 6. Quintessa isn't here yet because she still needs to move Cybertron, which technically speaking, moves a lot slower.

DeletedUser_119270 · Sep 2, 2017

This story is awesome!

BumblebeeNotOP · Sep 3, 2017

Awesomepow said: ↑

This story is awesome!
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Thanks, what do you think of it?

DeletedUser_119270 · Sep 3, 2017

It's just so in depth and detailed,plot really works.

BumblebeeNotOP · Sep 3, 2017

Awesomepow said: ↑

It's just so in depth and detailed,plot really works.
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Thanks. And while you're at it, what DON'T you like about it?

DeletedUser_119270 · Sep 24, 2017

I love it.

Lunamaria · Oct 1, 2017

Cruxton Prime said: ↑

I wish the movie was like that.
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same TBH.

Bob evans · Oct 1, 2017

To be honest. I always liked this one more than Mine. He took a bunch of ideas from the lore and put them in this story. He even put the Conversations and Dialogue. All I did was Put the most important plot lines. You did your Fan Fic Amazing and I would pay to see this kind of Movie. You handled all the Characters well especially the Decepticons. How you took them and made them into the New Combaticons. I hope you keep on Making these films and maybe one day we could collaborate on One of yours or Mine and We could make a great story. Keep up the good work.

BumblebeeNotOP · Oct 1, 2017

Bob evans said: ↑

To be honest. I always liked this one more than Mine. He took a bunch of ideas from the lore and put them in this story. He even put the Conversations and Dialogue. All I did was Put the most important plot lines. You did your Fan Fic Amazing and I would pay to see this kind of Movie. You handled all the Characters well especially the Decepticons. How you took them and made them into the New Combaticons. I hope you keep on Making these films and maybe one day we could collaborate on One of yours or Mine and We could make a great story. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks man. I would definitely want to collab on one with you soon. I want to try creating a story of a movie with a large cast. And who there is known to have created a story with a large cast and gave them their own shining moments, and it is none other than the brilliant man I have replied to

Bob evans · Oct 2, 2017

BumblebeeNotOP said: ↑

Thanks man. I would definitely want to collab on one with you soon. I want to try creating a story of a movie with a large cast. And who there is known to have created a story with a large cast and gave them their own shining moments, and it is none other than the brilliant man I have replied to
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Thanks man anyways when you asked me about those combaticon names. What where they for

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