TheBandWagon's Chronicles

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by thebandwagon, Aug 8, 2014.

  1. thebandwagon

    thebandwagon Well-Known Member

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    I have recently found a bunch of the funnies and I've really been enjoying them, so I decided I would try my hand at this. This is my first outing in the world of comics in general, nonetheless photocomics, so go easy on me please haha.

    I don't have any crazy awesome editing stuff, nor do I have an awesome set to record these in, so I will be using flight stands and other things like this to do these with.

    Anyway, this is going to be a limited run probably, but I wanted to see how it turns out. Without further ado, here we go!

    Chronicles: Introduction
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    As I said this is my first outing in the world of webcomics, so feel free to leave some comments and/or suggestions for me!
     
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    Special effects were good, but the comic itself was kind of all over the place.
     
  3. mandiprime97

    mandiprime97 Junkion

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    Good start.
     
  4. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Just another Edgelord

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    Story's a bit scattered, but overall good.
     
  5. nobleboivin

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    Good start
     
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    AgentAlabama113 Wily Old Buzzard

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    Not bad.
     
  7. Maroyasha

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    I like it. Pretty good start
     
  8. thebandwagon

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    Yeah it was a first shot at something like this, so I have much to learn haha. I am trying a new format per some suggestions I saw in hopes of being able to improve.


    Thank you, I am hoping to improve it as I go along.


    Anyways, I have a couple new ones that I shot, so I am giving a double update this time.

    That's Just Prime Part I
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    That's Just Prime Part II
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    Now these are only my second and third comics so far, so any comments and suggestions on how to improve would be greatly appreciated.
     
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    Wars Regular At Swerve's™

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    Poor Screamer :lol 

    I like how this is going so far. Colour me interested
     
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    LOL! How'd you manage to attract a hive of Primes! LOL.
     
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    Run Starscream.........is there a similar gathering of Megatron's?
     
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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    This is some pretty good stuff. :lol 
     
  17. thebandwagon

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    Thanks guys! 'Tis good to see that the newer two worked out better than the first, I am still new to all this, so I have lots to learn. I love the ROTF Screamer figure, so I decided I'd give him some more characterization to begin with. I also want to establish a bit of back story for why the figures are so diverse. In addition, I am planning on going a new route with some figures in hopes of getting a unique mix.

    In regards to a gathering of Megatrons, surprisingly enough I only have 2 Megatrons, a junker that probably will find his way in somehow from the Armada line, and the Generations figure, so I think that it would be cut far short of a Megatrons Anonymous meeting xD Also, that's a great way to describe them, a hive of Primes.

    I'm rather surprised, the first few comics I typed up a story for and then photographed, but I found that my new batch worked best with just a concept in mind, taking the pics, and figuring out the rest from there. Is that normal? Hahaha

    I also have some questions for you guys who do comics, do you feel that you get better response from releasing the comics one at a time or in a wave of new stuff? Also, what would be some suggestions for me?

    Anywho, I am going to do another double update, one for the That's Just Prime storyline, and a separate one for something new I am planning on trying out. I came up with the idea while I was driving home from lunch today to do spotlights of sorts of some of the different figures in my collection, that way I can expand the breadth of my world a little bit further in the limited run. I also will kinda leave this up to others, if people seem to like the Spotlights, then great, if not, I may not continue to do them. But we will have to wait and see.

    Feel free to leave some feedback too!


    That's Just Prime Part III
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    And yes, Wreckloose is an obnoxious guy. He also happens to be wayyyy to friendly to be either a Decepticon or a dinobot/con, yet he's both.
     
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    On the way you release comics. All up to you bro. Whatever you think works best is what I say. And man, you always gotta try the reverse psychology.
     
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  20. mandiprime97

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    I like Wreckloose already.