Hmmm.... looks okay, though kind of flat (yeah I know manga style looks flat to begin with). I keep thinking that there are either some perspective or proportional issues, though again, that could just be my eyes playing tricks on me. I keep thinking her breasts are too high and extend out too much and the arm looks a little two small. This isn't a bad picture as the pose and general composition seems good, just more of a case of editing a few things. In fact, you may consider doing some life drawing (ie) have someone model just to get the pose and general proportions and perspective down pat, and then "overlay" your actual character over that.
My head hurts.... thanks for all the tips. I really appreciate. Sure you don't think the girl in the pic similar to some other anime girl?
Of course you are a Transformers fan, otherwise you wouldn't be a member of TFW2005. but seriously: fan of what? I only post scans when the moon shines like the sun.
Thanks...I guess. As for the Bum (whatever that is, I assume you are talking of her butt ) I have my reason considering who this girl is suppose to be.
Yes, by all means, give Misha from Superlink breast implants. They look so not perverse considering that the character is, you know, 15.