The Bizarre Adventures of Takeout's TFs!

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Takeout, Aug 15, 2010.

  1. Takeout, Aug 15, 2010
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    Takeout Mistress of the Night

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    Episode One: The First Episode

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    Enjoy.
     
  2. tfmad2010, Aug 15, 2010
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    tfmad2010

    tfmad2010 Oh Hai Internet!

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    cool not to nitpick but can you try to make it make more sense (where the bubbles go)
     
  3. Autovolt 127, Aug 15, 2010
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    Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Not bad for a first start. "Your standing on my face!!!!" :lol 
     
  4. Moriarty, Aug 15, 2010
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    Skywarp, don't try edging in on the face thing! Optimus won't like it. D:

    The speech bubbles are a wee bit confusing, but I want to see what happens next! =]
     
  5. Moonscream, Aug 15, 2010
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    Moonscream YES, We Exist, and We DON'T Want to Date You

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    I would suggest making the text a lot bigger. When TFW resizes it, its very hard to read.

    --Moony
     
  6. Tigermegatron, Aug 15, 2010
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    great comic
     
  7. Plastic_nomer, Aug 16, 2010
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    Plastic_nomer Doing the unmentionables

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    Kinda Hard to see, maybe tone down on the lighting
     
  8. Takeout, Aug 16, 2010
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    Takeout Mistress of the Night

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    Yeah, it's a bit of a mess when it comes to the speech bubbles.

    Watch this space.....

    That's what I get for taking pics in full daylight, with the blinds down and the flash on.
     
  9. Takeout, Aug 16, 2010
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    UPDATE!

    Episode Two: Fun with Fan Modes (Alternate Titles: Rampage the Headmaster, The Revenge of Rampage, The One with Readable Text)

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  10. Plastic_nomer, Aug 16, 2010
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    Plastic_nomer Doing the unmentionables

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    LOL at Headmaster reference^^
     
  11. Dran0n, Aug 16, 2010
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    Dran0n miss me w/ that

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    Digging the comic so far, dude.
     
  12. Andersonh1, Aug 16, 2010
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    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    You're not a headmaster, buddy! :lol 
     
  13. Takeout, Aug 22, 2010
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    UPDATE!

    Episode Three: The One Outside

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  14. FattBoy94, Aug 22, 2010
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    FattBoy94 is playing "catch up"

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    error!error! iseeskywarpinthelastpicturebutiknowhefelltotheground! error!error!
     
  15. Takeout, Aug 23, 2010
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    Takeout

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    UH.....

    Okay, quick, I gotta figure out an explanation.....

    Yes! I know!

    That wasn't Skywarp, that was his identical twin, Airwarp, who just happened to be there at the time! Yeah. That's right.

    You know.....just call it a blooper and be done with it.