This is my first comic so this part is going to be really short but I hope you enjoy. Please comment. This comic is about a biker gang named after the Sons of Silence but transformers style. BACKGROUND: The Sons of Silence are after energon to get drunk with Power. Next post will be the comic. Thanks Guys!
Yes you are Grimmy^^ Liked it so far, and Biker gang squad of D'cons, I should think of a naem for that type of group. The only thing that bugged me is the Transforming sound, Kinda big or repeatedly too much
Cool start, nice layout but like mentioned before, the "transforming sounds here" is a bit much. Sound fx's are the hardest thing for me with doin my comic cause I don't wanna jumble it up with a bunch of word art and whatnot...then there's the issue of deciding exactly what sounds to make "visually heard"...lol, maybe i will do one where like EVERY sound is seen, from ambient noise and foot steps to machine hum and breathing...lmbo, ok let me stop - as you see, i can ramble on Welcome to the Funnies!
I am glad for all the feed back I will try and make things a bit more funny, well I hope I do. In the next part. I am also taking into consideration to make less emphases on the sounds and more on the images. If you can tell I didn't toy with the transformation in the photos until I figured out almost half way through photos but I learn fast. I am also going to make some epic light piping in the next one esp for Big Boss Bot. Sad to say but most of my good bots are in storage so until I move in a few months you might find these characters used often until I get them out.
Forgot to reply yes your right that was Lugnutz he might just be a background character cause he is a bit unstable to stand up.
OK for a supplemental I shall post some of my art I have had no time to work on my comic. I just found out my girl friend had to replace her iPhone 4 so my photos from the last shots are gone. But no worries she is working on this and I promise more comic soon. thanks for reading and hope for more comments soon. Esp on the new art up and I swear I shall do more supplemental with my actual art. Next post will be the new art. Thanks