Episode: 0 EDIT: I advise you skip ahead half a dozen pages, or so. Just FYI. This was meh first comic strip. meh. (the images look better normal sized.) I'll make it better as I go along.
A comic startin' out from someone thinkin' a friend of his turned into a can... I'll try to keep track. ^^
Next seg. Here is the next segment: You'll know what Prime, BB, And Jazz are talking about in the prequel, comming soon to a theter near you!! Er, Computer, I mean. EDIT: Please excuse the grammatical errors. I'm tired and can't speel curreuctly. EDIT 2: I just noticed that I had prime say "Us plastic toys" Yeah. PLOT HOLE!! NOOOOOOOOOO! Oh, wait. This is a weird star wars thing I'm doing. You'll see.
I wold like it if some one could give me some tips, er sumthin'. I am 'new' to this, and have only MS Paint (though my dad has frigin' photo shop, he doesn't have any more licences!!! ) and a five, er 4 year old Nikon Coolpix, ya know...the kind that ISN'T all awesome, but, it takes decent pics. I'd use the "Close up" function, but that uses flash, and flash, #1 Drains battery, #2 is real anoyin', and #3 Make pic's come out TERRIBLE. So, yeah, 'afore I start ta rant, I'ma leave it at this. THANKS ALOT!
Great start. Bumblebee singing "Danny Boy" to the coke can that he thinks is Jazz had me laughing out loud. For photo editing, you might want to try downloading GIMP 2.0. Is almost as good as photoshop, and it's free. Quite a few people here use it, check out Warring At Play if you want to see an example of the high end effects GIMP can create. For the camera-is there a way to disable the flash? Mine has a super-macro setting works wondefully with TF's but you have to kill the flash first. Failing that, maybe you can flood the room with enough natural light so that the flash doesn't trigger? The main thing with any comic is the writing though. As long as you're funny, no one minds if the FX are basic or the photography is a bit fuzzy. By all means, go to town on the FX if you want too, because it can be VERY rewarding, but always remember that the writing is where you stand or fall.
Thanks a lot for your "2 cents" Really, thanks. I got to work on my 'writing' skills; I did those first two comics spontaneously. That's why they're kind of weak. I might need some help with 'writing', though I already have a P.O.K.E. lined up, ooops. SPOILER! OK, nevermind I said that. Uhhhh...I'm no good at 'writing', I am very spontaneous, and that's a hit and miss endevor. Oh-well. just keep Bay-ing it!
Well... ... At the very least, this Prime's not messin' things up because he's a dick... ... but because he's a moron! XD
I was trying to play on the fact that BB and JAZZ are from the movie, and that they're older then TFA prime XD Think, naive prime=Total n00b. >.<
Good start, I'm thinking you have some more stuff up your sleeve for these guys. Consider me another reader!
Well, while I won't reveal anything just yet, I think they're are more suprises to be expected. Thanks alot, yo!
Episode Three Here's meh next 'Update' and this has slight continuity with the previous comic. Can you spot it? And a little bonus picture: Did that blow your mind!? HMMM!?
Ah, the P.O.K.E., possibly one of the greatest things to ever come out of TFA. You Atomic explosion needs something though: Michel Bay!
I love how you have the TFA figures be "idiots." I can tell it will make things very interesting whenever they get involved in this comic. Keep it up. You'll do fine as you go along.
