You also condensed a lot of industrial-grade wailing about people being banish-ed. This is probably for the best; that part was a bit annoying.    

 

what?! no talk about sex?? lol jk. right now im makin a sad face

 

Good update.  

 

Oh yes, and the annoying thing is there's PLENTY more wailing to come  

Well as much as Arcee is looking forward to getting her hands on Starscream's camshaft some things just don't need to be talked about  

 

Hmm, using rain to set the mood eh? That's quite clever. So what will we be seeing now?

 

Poor arcee

 

 

hahaahahaha. lol. it would be akward to talk about it with the nurse. though sex talk is the best kind of talk there is. ooo that could be my new sig!!

 

Really love the drama in this new update  

And good call for not keeping the sex talk (it's really naughty XD)

 

"Give me his face! "
NOOOOOOOOOO Sky Byte!!!  
LOL nice drama.

I havent read the book or watched any R and J movie,   so I don't know too mush of it

 

I like to think I'm being somewhat educational then  

 

And you're doing it with good grace too.  

I might need to get Stories from Shakespeare Volume 1 by David Timson from Naxos Audiobooks (read by Juliet Stevenson & Michael "Kenneth Williams in Fandabuloza to Tony Blair in The Queen & Sir David Frost in Frost/Nixon" Sheen) to refresh my knowledge of the great bard himself.

Still keep going. I still pretty much enjoy this adaptation.  

 

And here's another update.

Would have had it up yesterday, but (completely unrelated) one of my daleks (one of my favourite ones actually) broke in an accident and I wasn't really in the mood to do it after failing to repair it...still isn't repaired now  . Hopefully I can pick up some stronger superglue tomorrow and it'll be fine (for those who don't know, my Dalek toys are my pride and joy...I value them far above my transformers).

Anyway enough of my whining  

Scene Three: Primal's Shrine

 

What a suspenseful chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Also Ratchet's line "Open the damn door monkey" was my favorite part of this chapter.

 

this really good

but i have to say i enjoy ratchets personality

 

This is getting more dramatic as it progresses  

Good job on capturing the drama of the source material

 

This is getting more dramatic as it progresses  

Good job on capturing the drama of the source material

 

This sure is entertaining. Which is kinda amazing given that it's subject is about robot to robot romance.  

 

  I had to have Ratchet steal the show, especially since my other favourite character (Skywarp) won't be around for a while.

Thanks  
I enjoy writing for Ratchet, angry old guys FTW

Thanks  

Oh just you wait, I still have tons of slash fic scenes left to do  

I kid, I kid

 

awwwwwww