Poetry From Jordan Nicholas

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  1. MasterZero

    MasterZero Taking a Break

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    Huh...

    I like this kid. :D 
     
  2. Kungfu Dinobot

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    That's so clever:eek: 


    Too bad the sophisticated elites would prefer to skip the second part:rolleyes2 
     
  3. Novaburnhilde

    Novaburnhilde Lord High Governor

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    Very nice. :) 

    Thank you for sharing my friend.
     
  4. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    That makes me feel good.
     
  5. CodeXCDM

    CodeXCDM Well-Known Member

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    Hadn't noticed that last line the first time...

    With kids like him... there may be hope just yet.
     
  6. bookwormdalek

    bookwormdalek Gotta get a grip

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    Fantastically done.
     
  7. AgentAlabama113

    AgentAlabama113 Wily Old Buzzard

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    Wow. This is really good.
     
  8. Purple Heart

    Purple Heart Some other time..

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    Beautiful, Not trying have any light but i enjoy doing things like this,
    But on a more personal level.

    My English teacher inspires me to he more. He is the best teacher i've known.

    He's been going past the state and teaching us things in hopes of waking us up,
    In hopes of breaking us free from becoming a machine.

    Sadly his efforts seem to be in vain, Only one student has acknowledged his message so far.


    I know....Logically that there are more kids like him out there.
    Who realize what our generation is, And what the hopes of the future are.

    But everytime i see this it makes me smile. Hope fills me heart.

    Yet hope seems out of reach sometimes.
     
  9. MasterZero

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    Hope is never out of reach.
     
  10. Purple Heart

    Purple Heart Some other time..

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    Not when you can see beyond it, Then is an un-escapable place.
     
  11. BeeOtch217

    BeeOtch217 Ha Ha You're a Mini-Con!

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    Who?
     
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    rapid_fire Banned

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    Pretty neat! Cant say ive read something like that before
     
  13. MasterZero

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    Some 14 year old kid.

    Oh. Right. Kid's 14 years old.
     
  14. TrueNomadSkies

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    Good read :)