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  1. Rewind Eject

    Rewind Eject Bluestreak 's #2 Fan

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    If you dislike lots of reading, only read first paragraph to know what thread is about. Inspired by TheUltraMagnus' autobot team thread, I wanted to make a thread for people to post premises for their entire series. I welcome you to be as thorough as possible and include plot premises, characters, casting, visual aesthetic, themes explored, and anything else that you think sets your series apart from the rest. Although not often as college starts soon for me, I plan to comment on the ideas I find most appealing.

    Background: after the quintessons attacked and enslaved cybertron, the cybertronians united under alpha trion to overthrow their quintesson overlords. Two things resulted from the first great war of cybertron; General distrust of organics by cybertronians and cybertron depleted of most its energy and resources. Two leading parties then appeared with different approaches; the autobots were isolationists while the decepticons were imperialists who planned to take the needed energy and resources from conquered organic planets. There was tentative peace between the decepticons and autobots until a team of decepticons covertly took over close neighboring planet charr, thus inciting the beginning actions of the war. The second great war was devastating and only ended when cybertron itself officially became past saving;both sides retreated to their respective allied planets (autobots) and colonies(decepticons) and are now in stalemate as they are currently equally matched.

    Plot premise: earth is discovered. As it is in a strategic placement and is a veritable cornucopia of resources, it has the power to tip the balances in this cold war towards whoever controls it. Optimus is sent to convince the natives to ally with the autobots to prevent the decepticons from taking over it. Season one deals with forming the alliance and defending from the decepticon seekers who arrive. Season two focuses on larger war for earth as well as the discovery of a decepticon superweapon. Part of the crew travels to autobot capital nebulos to warn the council. Final season is an offensive against the decepticon empire itself.

    Main characters season one

    Autobot crew

    Optimus Prime- Kevin Conroy. Fire chief's truck. Weapon: ion emitters; eskrima sticks whose tips can create solid light weapons (swords, axes, hammers). Prime in this simply means captain of the ship so my optimus is Prime of the Avalon. Old sarcastic war veteran, was once a soldier so idealistic it gave him the name optimus, now it comes off as ironic. Very vocally complained about the council hiding the decepticons threat status from civilians, mission is partly an attempt to stick him somewhere he won't be heard. Cares for his crew deeply. Prefers exploration part of mission over more fighting. Known for unconventional planning and his belief that sometimes crazy works. Think of my optimus sort of as a more in shape animated ratchet mixed with primal.

    Ironhide- Michael dorn. SWAT riot control truck. Weapons: none but his two fists and tons of guts. Second in command. So old, he was optimus' drill sergeant during the beginning of the war. Fighting is fun to him, and he constantly jokes to optimus and red alert to lighten up. Begins series not knowing what to do with himself now that the wars over, he was literally born for it. Trains rest of crew to fight. Overzealous in belief autobots are right and all decepticons are wrong.

    Roadrage- Gina Torres. Muscle car. Weapons: various guns and explosives, pop out in vehicle mech tech mode. Secretly a decepticon who turncoated to the autobots during the war. Fears being discovered, but optimus secretly already knows and doesn't care; that she made the right choice in the end is all that matters to him. Usually Zen logical bot, people wonder about her name but she suffers from cybertronian form of ptsd called bipolar mode conversion. Robot mode she is her reasonable levelheaded self. Vehicle mode she endures panic and flashbacks. Dealed with by red alert. Glyph's bodyguard. Atoner over her past.

    Red alert- Tara strong. Ambulance. Tools: right arm equipped with various surgical tools, magnet. Was once a soldier alongside optimus. Was left injured on the battlefield and a decepticon medic named glit rescued her and patched her up. After war, decided she was sick of fighting and grew bitter of the us vs them mentality of the war, she trained to be a doctor. Only agreed to be optimus' first recruit when he promised she wasn't there in a combat role. Pacifist by nature and believes all life is sacred, but still gets exasperated by hotshot's apparent death wish. Overprotective of charges, will eventually agree to occasionally join the field but still devoted to not taking a life. Optimus' wise advice giving friend like rhinox.

    Wheeljack- John DiMaggio. Cherry picker truck. Tools: extendable arms and legs, Wrench. Famous engineer for designing the wrecker's ship the xantium. Very cowardly and self centered, but also a surprisingly loyal autobot. Will pretend to be busy to avoid dangerous situations, and carries whatever newest super weapon he invented when it can't be escaped. Gets on ironhide's nerves, but gets along with hotshot. Ultimately out of respect, will do anything optimus asks, however much he complains about it afterwards.

    Hotshot- Will friedle. Sports car yellow with red flames. Tools: dual flamethrower, enhanced vision visor. Pilot of the Avalon. Though very talented, was kicked out of elite guard academy for mouthing off to his drill instructor. When optimus couldn't think of anyone to be the pilot, arcee said his name as he was top of the class in that skill. She's regretted it ever since as he always seems to get them in trouble. Cocky, a motormouth, and a jokester. Begins series as total optimus fanboy, much to the older bot's embarrassment. Matures as series continues.

    Glyph- hynden walch. mini Cooper. Tools: ability to link into any machine, including very temporarily other cybertronians on contact. Computer specialist and"earth expert". Worked in university until claim to fame by discovering earth. Thus, the initial cause of the whole expedition. Learned everything about earth by discovering our internet, thus knows all facts but is wrong occasionally to their importance (judging by pictures and posting habits, they clearly worship these cats). Curious and fascinated by alien culture, documents everything. Wheeljack was a teacher there alongside perceptor, she recommended him to optimus.

    Jazz- Phil lamarr. Austen Martin. Weapons: sonic discs for distractions or at higher volumes, damage, sniper rifle. One of two combat specialists assigned by council to defend ship in case of attack. Secret intelligence agent back on cybertron. Considers whole mission vacation until decepticons appear. Easy going and laidback, but it as at least partly compartmentalization. Former partner died, so he prefers to take the hardest missions alone. Tries to get arcee to loosen up, acts as big brother figure.

    Arcee- sumalee montano. Police motorcycle. Weapons: electrically charged nightstick/ rifle and expanding riot shield. Other combat specialist. Was poor urchin on nebulos who joined the elite guard academy. So impressed leader prowl that he took her on as his protege. she takes after her mentor by being the member to quote protocol and ensure that all the rules are followed. Jazz requested her as the other combat specialist because he distrusts prowl and wanted to get her out of his influence.

    As that was two hours worth of writing and I tried earlier today only to accidentally close my window after finishing almost all the autobots, I will post the decepticons and humans later this week. Until then I look forward to your own creative ideas.
     
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    I will post mine here tomorow ot will take me some time to write it out but I gotta go soon so expect it up tomorow lolz
     
  3. MasterZero

    MasterZero Taking a Break

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    Orion Pax and his brother Megatron Pax are both born as the sons of the scientist Alpha Trion Pax, a cruel, but brilliant mech on the planet of Cybertron. Alpha Trion works for Unicron, the planet's (mortal) ruler and dictator. The Cybertronians are, for the most part, a race of tyrants and racists, going from planet to planet and wiping out organic life under Unicron's command.

    The day of Orion and Megatron's birth, Alpha discovers that Unicron plans to destroy Cybertron and most of their race, leading the few survivors. He warns as many bots as he can, but most fail to listen. As a last ditch plan, he builds a bunch of ships called the Arks, heroically kidnaps as many babies as he can, and launches the ship off of Cybertron. The planet blows up, Alpha Trion is Alpha Dead-on, and Orion and Megatron (and a lot of other babies) are sent to various planets.

    Orion and Megatron's planet ends up on Earth, where they are found and adopted by a kind family of humans. The Parkers. Ben and May Parker adopted the large, robot babies and treat them like their own on their simple farm in the quiet city of Megacity-One, Kansas.

    As time goes on, the Parkers slowly begin to realize that Megatron and Orion (now under their adopted Earth names of Megan and Optimus Prime) are more than meets the eye. They can transform and look like cars and other vehicles! Also they're giant robots now, but puberty is weird for everyone.

    ANYWAYS.

    Optimus Prime and Megan are getting tired of the farm life, so they go to the big city! The triple walled city of Wakanda, Kansas. There, they join a demolition derby to earn some cash for sick new, GOLDEN RIMS (and pink fuzzy dice for Optimus Prime). They win, but win SO HARD that they aren't given any money. That, and they have no drivers, so the manager kinda freaks out. As they leave, the manager is robbed and the two do nothing to help.

    When they return, they discover Daddy Ben was KILLED. By a heart attack. Which he got while fighting off a CAR JACKER! Mommy May is in tears as Optimus Prime and Megan leave to find and kill the sonuvabitch who killed their adopted daddy.

    They find him and, PLOT TWIST, it was Unicron! He tries stealing Daddy Ben's car and gave him a heart attack! He's come to Earth to either kill or adopt the Cybertronians on the planet and go on killing all organic life in the universe. Megan and Optimus Prime are disgusted with the giant robot and try to attack him, only to lose. They escape though, and swear on Daddy Ben's grave, that they will ASSEMBLE a team of Cybertronians and take the fight to Unicron and beat him! And they'll call their team...

    The Transformers.

    And that...is Transformers: The Amazing Dark Titan of Steel.

    Boom. Trademarked. Where's my money?
     
  4. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    Nice bro I would so watch that!!!
     
  5. Jetbolt

    Jetbolt Maximal Air Commander

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    Thirty years after the liberation of Cybertron from the Vehicon forces, the Maximals and Predacons continue to try to let go of the past. Though that becomes tested when veterans of the Great War reappears....

    Characters

    Omega Primax:
    The young commander of a small team with a big legacy. One that in the past made him a addicted to hard energon when he couldn't take the expectations that others wanted. He can be sarcastic at times, but he has a good spark and a skilled fighter. Some of it is natural and other taught by Great War veterans Springer, Grimlock, and Roadbuster.

    Roadbuster:
    The Great War veteran who is often haunted by old war memories. As a Wrecker from back in the day, he's done stuff that he isn't proud about, but it was necessary. Following the final battle, he couldn't handle peace and he served with the Autobot Elite Guard to capture remaining Decepticons. But soon that mission was presumably completed and so he left Cybertron and became a bounty hunter. Centuries later, the old war veteran finally got tired of conflict and returned to a changed Cybertron. One that was now dominated by smaller Transformers, the Maximals. Upon becoming a Maximal himself, he would soon meet somebody that would give him a new purpose as an instructor.

    Cybrus:
    As the medic of Primax's team, he's should be fully trusted, but that's not the case. Despite the process, issues of old are hard to quit. He's a Predacon that was selected by Omega Primax, a Maximal, to be the medic for his team. He knew that the only way to let go of past issues is by trusting each other. Despite the issues that come up now and then, it's slowly working.

    Warcry:
    He was a cadet in the Maximal Elite Guard, though often annoyed instructor Grimlock. In the war, Grimlock lost a lot of friends and still scared by the true horrors of war. Warcry often imagined being a place to find glory, which Grimlock would try to tell him otherwise. Following his time at the Elite Guard, he was assigned to be with Commander Omega Primax. He's one of the smaller members of the team and now annoys Roadbuster with his fanciful view of war. Sometimes the two bickering gives Omega Primax a processor-ache.

    Flameblast:
    He was one of the top cadets at the Elite Guard. He was personally picked by Omega Primax to serve on his team. He mostly works closely with Warcry as the two are near the same size. He's also the team's arsenal inventor, some say he could possibly rival legends like Ratchet, Wheeljack, and Perceptor.


    The fragile peace is put to a great challenge when the original Predacons reappear. Led by Razorclaw, he desires nothing more but the extinction of any remaining Autobots, along with the Maximals, and any knockoff Predacons that does not swear allegiance to him.

    Razorclaw, Divebomb, Rampage, Headstrong, and Tantrum are back, stronger than ever before.

    In the series, I'd would show the status of the veterans of liberation and the Beast Wars. Along with how the original Predacons survived the Great War, along with mentioning how it ended and the fates of some of key players in the war.

    Tiblet:
    Omega Primax is the grandson of Orion Pax and Ariel, better known as Optimus Prime and Elita 1. During the Golden Age, the two had a son, Dion Pax. When Megatron attacked, Alpha Tion rebuilt Orion and Ariel. Not wanting Megatron to find Dion, Optimus and Elita sent the new Dion Primax off world with a trusted friend. Over the eons, Dion Primax became a warrior and fought in the later years of the Great War. He would soon fall for a sniper, Oracle. The two would have a spark mild, creating a new one. Dion Primax would be kill in action not long after, just three years before the war would officially end. While devastated, Oracle would now be in charge of their son, Omega Primax.
     
  6. Jochimus

    Jochimus Some days you just can't get rid of a bomb!

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    On the surface, mine would have distinct echoes of "Animated" and "Rescue Bots" - Autobots as emergency response vehicles with non-firearm weapons, dealing with primarily non-Decepticon threats; Decepticons as military flyers with guns - but it would very quickly become apparent that this series would be a love letter to the golden age of Japanese sci-fi, the kaiju movies and TV series of the '50s and '60s, in much the same vein as the animated spinoff of Tri-Star's "Godzilla" was.

    The basic premise starts out familiarly enough for the Transformers mythos: the Ark and the Nemesis crashing into the Earth in the prehistoric past - the Ark to the bottom of the Pacific Ocean, the Nemesis into the Antarctic tundra. However, there's a twist this time: the two ships passed through a cloud of weird space microbes that they carried with them to Earth, and as the millennia pass, those microbes seep into the Earth, evolving and mutating from exposure to the Energon reserves that leaked from the battle-damaged ships...until the present day, when the entire planet suddenly becomes beset by a barrage of what appear to be natural disasters. The truth is, of course, a lot uglier than that: giant monsters of all kinds have risen up from beneath the ground and started stomping, smashing, crawling, swimming, and even flying their way all over it. Fortunately, one such disaster reactivates the Ark's computer and revives the Autobots, who recognize the threat they've unwittingly brought upon the Earth and resolve to defend the planet from these gigantic menaces; unfortunately, another such disaster reactivates the Nemesis's computer and revives the Decepticons, who recognize a new source of Energon-based destructive power that can help them take over the entire planet and suck its resources dry!

    AUTOBOTS, at least the ongoing regular cast of them, from my previously-posted roster in that other thread:

    DECEPTICONS, not all of whom will be seen regularly (under the logic that Megatron will have them scattered across the Earth on various operations to try to gain control of the monsters - thus the military alt-modes):

    Megatron Stealth bomber; weapon - arm cannon.
    Soundwave Attack chopper; weapon - shoulder launcher.
    Ravage One of Soundwave's missiles; beast mode - panther.
    Laserbeak Same; beast mode - condor.
    Ratbat Same; beast mode - bat.
    Squawktalk Same; beast mode -hawk.
    Beastbox Same; beast mode - gorilla.
    Slugfest Same; beast mode - crocodile.
    Overkill Same; beast mode - alligator.
    Starscream Jet fighter; weapon - arm blasters.
    Thundercracker Same.
    Skywarp Same.
    Dreadwind Bomber; weapon - grenade launcher.
    Darkwing Gunship; weapon - rifle.
     
  7. Slingshot

    Slingshot Back In the Game

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    This is my second series in my continuity. In the first one, The autobots landed on Earth and had to prevent the Decepticons from numerous of weapons for their use, including the relics of Iacon, the Nemesis, etc. The series ended with the Predacon arc, where the Predacons were cloned by shockwave after discovering Predaking alive. The Predacon arc took 15 years to end, and resulted in most of the decepticon forces including Megatron being killed. The autobots had their share of cassualities too, consisting of Bulkhead, Ironhide, and Blurr to name a few. This ended the 12’th Cybertronian War, and the longest and deadliest of them all. 30 years later, Cybertron was functioning well. However, after being locked up for thousands of generations in the Dead Universe, Nova Prime emerges from a long absence. Nova Prime believes that he is the true Primus, and see's Primus as a weak being who must be destroyed. Shockwave, Bludgeon, Deathasouras and Jhiaxus defect from the Decepticons to join Nova, and the autobot generals Ginrai, and Dai Atlas defect also right in front of Optimus. Optimus divides the autobots into teams to hunt down Nova Prime's followers, who call themselves the "Noviances".
    Optimus puts Star Saber in charge of a team to hunt the Noviances on Earth. Star Saber, a follower of the Covenant, believes that Nova Prime is the final Fallen, and the most dangerous yet. On his team are, Windblade, who trained under Optimus, Brainstorm and Wheeljack of the science division, Rattrap, one of the last maximals (a group that surveyed planets during the early days of the war, until they were left stranded on Earth, forcing them to adopt animal modes to prevent altering Human history).
    Bumblebee leads a group on Earth consisting of Strongarm, Sideswipe, Smokescreen, Fixit, and Prowl. Ultra Magnus stays on Cybertron with the wreckers in case the Noviances attempt an attack on Cybertron.
    Eventually however, while hunting for the Noviances, Bumblebee’s team encounters a new Transformers group, the “Terrorcons”, a group of animalistic like Transformers created by Shockwave to fight for Nova Prime. These Terrcons consist of the first Underbite, the second Thunderhoof, the third Fracture, the fourth Grimlock, the fifth Steeljaw, the sixth Filch, the seventh Bisk, the eighth Chop Shop, the ninth Hammerstrike, and the tenth Terrashock. These Terrorcons bridge to Cybertron, and wipe out the Wreckers, slaughtering most of the wreckers, and leaving Optimus and Magnus in critical condition. Hot Rod is given the matrix, and attempts to lead an attack wiping out the Terrorcon forces, but ends up dead and the Terrorcons taking the matrix to Nova Prime. Nova Prime then kidnaps Optimus and reveals his plan to him. By using the matrix, which he still is able to communicate with, and merging it with the Key to Vector Sigma (often referred to as the Allspark), the oracle, and the Cerebrons, which is the database of all things, giving the wielder god-like intelligence, which when all merged creates the tree of life. By doing that, and using the Matrix cannon to disconnect Primus from cybertron, he will connect the Tree's branches to the wires which connect the core and Cybertron, making him Primus.
     
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    "Kiss Players-The Series"
    Marissa Fairborne is on a mission to outer space, while up there she lands on an unknown planet, which we all know to be Cybertron, she walks around and sees all these robots, one in particular sticks out and that is Optimus Prime..
    OP:"Hey good looking whats up? do you like it long and hard?"
    MF:" Of course I do big guy, it looks like you have a long and hard metal object."
    OP: "of course I do just come back to my pad and I'll show you."
    Funky 70's music plays while showing the outside of his house, noises are heard (5 minutes later they both walk out with cigarettes in their mouths)
    MF: "wow you are long and hard."
    (9 months later)
    Wheeljack: "um Optimus there's some lady who is trying to get in touch with you, she keeps showing up at the door."
    OP: "I thought I would never see that tramp again, it was just a one night stand, what does that bitch want?"
    WJ: "she said something about an "Offspring" of some sort."
    OP: "Oh Shit.."
    WJ: " and she says it's yours."
    next scene we see the Maury show intro..
    Maury: "so you say that this isn't your baby."
    OP: "Of course it isn't, this baby is yellow and I'm red, I think she was messing around with Bumble Bee."
    MF: "Oh no you didn't oh nooooooooooooooooooo you didn't, I was only with you." (snaps her fingers and wobbles her head)
    OP: "You shut up hoe, you know you be hoeing around on cybertron, in fact I caught an STD from you, the same one that, ironically, Bumble Bee has."
    MF:" Whatever, whatever,(snaps fingers and wobbles her head.)
    Maury; "The test says....(silence for 10 seconds) you are NOT the father."
    Op: "Bam! I knew that I wasn't the daddy."
    MF: "That test is fake, he my baby daddy."
    Maury: "I'm sorry but out test are 99.999% right."
    MF: "Whatever, (snaps her finger and wobbles her head)
    OP: "well I think that you should test that Bumble Bee dude, after all this baby looks like him."
    Maury :"next week is Bumble Bee the baby daddy? stay tuned to find out"

    and the series continues for three seasons until they find the baby daddy..
     
  9. Gerth

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    Energon Wars (which would be followed by a prequel series named Spilt Energon)

    A neutral trade ship, neither Autobot nor Decepticon, would be about to leave an Autobot controlled system, with cash and weapons, to trade with other cybertronians, they would be boarded by an Autobot search party (lead by Soundwave) meant to check whether or not they'd taken anything they didn't really own, which they hadn't, the search party would leave, but follow behind the trade ship just to be safe, a Decepticon warship would notice the Autobot life signals, and assume they were coming from the trade ship, they would fire on the ship, causing its crew to resort to their greatest weapon, and though they manage to shoot down the Cons, they've sustained far too much damage to fly anywhere else and crash-land on the same planet as the cons, around ten years later, we see the neutral leader, Skybreaker, a humble mech often scrutinized for his desire to be a medical officer, wake up and patch himself up, he would then wake up his comrades, Gridlock, Ironhide, Jazz, and Stormbringer, we switch scenes to the Decepticon crash site, where Shockwave, (their leader) is being revived by a Vehicon with amazing leadership abilities, who has sent Starscream out to find local Alt. modes for the troops to scan,

    The next episode, the Vehicon would be reformatted into Vibracon,

    Nightbird would be built, and a plot line similar to that in the G1 episode featuring her would occur, except that in order to stop her, a male ninja robot would be built, except that this one would be similar to a suit, controlled from within the head by the man whose martial arts moves were the basis for Nightbird's combat programming, this suit would be dubbed Epsilon, and after an episode or two, would take her down,

    Half way through the middle of the first season, Skybreaker would be experimenting with something the neutrals had on board before the crash, when he accidentally gives it life and personality, it then takes apon itself the name of Jetfire, and becomes a great addition to the team,

    Three quarters through the first season, an orb shaped ship would crash-land, its crew, Torchworm, Paddles, and Downfall, (the mech with six sparks) would befriend the neutrals in their quest for escape and fight against the Decepticons on this planet, after finding alt. modes in a museum,

    The first season would end with the audience seeing what appears to be a meteor crashing from the sky, and a dark bodied mech walking out of the crash site,

    The second season would start with flashbacks of Cybertron, introducing that character and his history, he would eventually befriend the neutrals, but refuse to join them,

    One quarter through the second season, Jetfire would become lonely, being the only being like himself in the universe, and would recreate the process that brought him to life, the resulting entity would then say hello, run out into the hallway, and tackle Stormbringer, and when told to get off of him, he would transform a blade like EMP out of his hand and stab Stormbringer in the T-cog, saying, "This is no ally of yours," and Stormbringer's outer plating would move and shift until he was no longer Stormbringer, until he was Makeshift,

    In response to the increasing ranks of the neutrals, the Decepticons would create their own, Jetfire-like being, who took the name of Skywarp,

    Halfway through the second season, the audience would see a junkyard, and a silver hand, attached to a blue wrist coming out of it, they would see Soundwave emerge and scan the nearest object in working condition, a tape deck,

    Shockwave decapitates Torchworm,

    Three quarters through, he and his child, Strikewave, (who turns into an outdated MP3 player/recorder) join the Decepticons, and the audience would learn that the same blast that took out the 'Cons, also shot down the 'Bots,

    The season would end with the dark bodied mech fighting against Shockwave, and after being defeated, reverting to his original, Cybertronian state, and when this process is over, he holds in his hands two great swords, given to him by Primus himself, and seemingly lost forever a short time before he embarked towards Earth, or whatever the name of the planet was, and he would face off against Shockwave once more, cutting off his arm and saying, "This is for her," cutting off his head and saying, "This is for Torchworm," and lastly, stabs him through the spark chamber, "And this," he pauses before finishing his sentence, "Is for the pit of it,"

    The heroes would then scatter like the wind, to take back Cybertron, to hunt down the rest of the 'Cons, or to accomplish their goals, Nightbird would somehow be released from wherever she was being kept, along with the Epsilon suit, Skybreaker would accomplish his dream and become a nurse, Skyfire would discover a new Cybertronian mating system, Jetfire would wander the universe in search of Skywarp, and Ironhide would depart with Crossfire to kick some fraggin' 'Con aft,
     
  10. Beastwarsfan95

    Beastwarsfan95 Also known as Cheese House

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    I'll work on it tonight and post it in the morning.
     
  11. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    It would be a show about Optimus Prime and his Autobots who come to Earth and fight Megatron and his Decepticons from taking over the Earth.

    I know it's unoriginal but I have a grand long term plans for the series that I'm not ready to talk about.....
     
  12. TheSoundwave

    TheSoundwave Bounty Hunter

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    The story starts during the last days of the Cybertronian war. It is revealed that the Cybertronians are a race of sentient robots, who are war with each other. The Decepticons were Cybertron's cutting edge army/peacekeeping force for eons, until Megatron become their leader, and slowly got more and more power until he was more like a dictator than a military commander. Various other high ranking Decepticons followed Megatron's influence, and served as his main henchmen (Starscream was the air force commander, Soundwave was in charge of communication, Shockwave was scientist/weapon designer).

    Eventually, Cybertron's gvernment began to fall apart (as Megatron took more control), and a lowly (but noble) librarian named Orion Pax (who was separated from society, and lacked self-confidance) realized the corruption, and formed a group called the Autobots (formed from older, outdated robots, and retired military soldiers) to stop Megatron from gaining complete control. Orion Pax was unconvinced that he should be leader, so Sentinel Prime took over. (The title 'Prime' came from legend, where it was said that only the most noble leaders take that title) However, Sentinel proved to be unable to lead, and was killed in battle. Orion still didn't think he was fit to be the leader, but old, wise veteran Ironhide convinced him that he could lead, and that he was the only one with good enough morals, optimism, and motivation to lead. After Orion still declined, Ironhide gave him the legendary 'Autobot Matrix of Leadership', and convinced him that whoever carried the Matrix would be a true Prime, and it would "Light their Darkest Hour". With newfound confidence, Orion took on the name 'Optimus Prime', and stepped up to take his rightful place as leader of the Autobots.

    Sadly, the Autobot vs Decepticon battle turned into a full scale war, and eventually Cybertron was devastated, and drained of energy, making it unsustainable for the robots to live on. The Autobots constructed a Star-Destroyer-sized ship called the Ark to carry them to a new world, while the Decepticons did the same. After launch, the Ark was boarded by the Decepticons, who discarded their own ship, and continued the battle on board the Ark. The ship flew out of control, and was caught in Earth's atmosphere. Realizing the ship was going to crash, several Transformers escaped in pods and landed on Earth's surface safely. The Ark itself crashed in the Nevada desert in 1984, where the government immediately sealed off the area, and attempted to study the ship, but were inable to get inside. The few transformers who escaped in pods went on to search for the Ark, and had adventures in the 80s.

    in modern day, the Ark was disturbed by scientific testing, where the Autobots and Decepticons awoke, and broke free. Megatron and the Decepticons fled, but the Autobots formed ties with the government, who agreed to stay out of their way as long as they took care of the Decepticons, which the humans couldn't destroy. The robots also pick vehicle modes for disguise.

    The Decepticons dissappear for a while, and the Autobots look for them in a game of cat and mouse. Eventually, the Decepticons reveal themselves, and raid a scientific facility in search of something, killing the lead scientist who stood in their way. The Autobots fight them off, but unfortunately the Decepticons escape with what they need. Upon investigation, it is revealed that the facility was developing a type of alternative energy/fuel heavily resembling Energon, but a super powerful version of it. The Decepticons have stolen the formula. At the destroyed facility, the Autobots meet a college age girl named Jenny, who is the adopted daughter of the scientist who was killed. She allies herself with the Autobots, for vengeance on Megatron for her father's death.

    Meanwhile Megatron infuses the Decepticon army with Super Energon, (produced by Soundwave) and begins his conquest of Earth. The Autobots attempt to stop them, but are overwhelmed by the supercharged villains. During the battle, Jenny is stabbed by Megatron while trying to foolishly attack Megatron. Ratchet is able to preform electric shock therapy on her, which revives her, and surprisingly jolts her memory, and she is able to recall her father's Energon formula. As Perceptor works on producing Super Energon, it is also revealed that 'Jenny' is really a Cybertronian who evacuated the Ark during the 80s, and has been running unconsciously in stasis disguised as a human, unknowing of her true nature. Her father was aware though, and based his formula off of her 'blood'.

    Just as all hope seems lost, Perceptor completes the Energon and infuses the Autobots with it, which turns the tide of the battle. As the Autobots drive away the Decepticons, Optimus and Megatron duel one on one. Because Megatron overdosed on Super Energon, he unfortunately gets the upper hand. Just when it seems like Megatron is going to win, Optimus opens his chest, and pulls the Matrix of Leadership open. The Matrix implodes, causing a porthole which blows Megatron into a different dimension, and destroys the relic. With their leader gone, the surviving Decepticons retreat, and go into hiding.

    With the world saved, the Autobots are pronounced heroes by the government, and set up a base in the wreckage of the Ark. Jenny decides to remain among humans, where she can protect them best, while Optimus realizes that it's wasn't some old relic that made him a leader, but his courage and nobility. Optimus Prime narrates while an old 80s song plays over Bumblebee's radio during the credits.
     
  13. Lovecraft

    Lovecraft Banned

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    ^^That's really good.

    If you wanna know what I would do then read my fanfic, please.

    Link in my sig.

    The Decepticons are the ones with human allies and the Autobots come to Earth looking for them. But the Autobots aren't definitely heroic and the Decepticons aren't definitely evil, they're both just shades of grey with hints of corruption and nobility on either sides. The Decepticons do have more negative personality traits though.

    Megatron and maybe Starscream are the only for sure evil Decepticons, but Megatron is isolated on Earth trying to atone for his crimes and Starsceam is just a dick. Optimus Prime believes in showing mercy to the Decepticons, though with the exception of Megatron, and trying to assimilate the two factions into one race once more. But upon his arrival to Earth, he is lied to by the crooked cop like Prowl who has a pronounced prejudice against the Decepticons, more so than other Autobots, and does not believe in granting any of them mercy.

    Characters later,

    Give it a read! I'm two chapters in.
     
  14. MasterZero

    MasterZero Taking a Break

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    Okay. Transformers by MasterZero TAKE TWO.

    The year is 2107. Space travel and taking vacation on the moon and other planets is fairly common for Earthlings. One particular family, the Witwicky Family, is preparing for an outer space adventure in the Andromeda Galaxy! Yaaaay!

    Suddenly, BAM! BOOM! Wormhole accident. The family is sent spiraling off into an unexplored sector of space. They crash land on a planet of metal, Cybertron! There they find the planet under the tyrannical rule of Sentinel Prime, who is at war with a bot named Megatron and his gang of revolutionaries, the Decepticon.

    Megatron discovers the family of Earthlings, plus their robot butler, and wants to find their homeplanet. Not just to bring the humans back to their world, but also to take the planet Earth for resources in their war.

    One Decepticon, Orion Pax (Megatron's BFF), doesn't want this. He wants to help the humans get home and make sure the Earth doesn't get involved in the war. So, he abandons the Decepticons with some of his friends and they (and the humans), go on a planet wide adventure across Cybertron, being hounded by the xenophobic Autobots and the power-thirsty Decepticons, all while trying to find the humans a way home.

    Witwicky Family
    Sam 'Spike' Witwicky = Caucasian father. Terrified of the new planet and surroundings and is trying his hardest to protect hi family.

    Sari Witwicky = Indian mother. Feels like all of this is just a fun chance to do some family bonding.

    Jack Witwicky = Half white, half brown youngest son who just wants to go home.

    Alexis Witwicky = Half white, half brown second eldest child. Something of a nerd back home, she loves Cybertron, despite all the life threatening situations. Gets a crush on Starscream.

    William Witwicky = The eldest son. A soldier from back home. Fits in rather well on Cybertron.

    Bumblebee Witwicky = The family Robo-nanny/butler/babysitter. He loves Cybertron, feeling at home with all the other robots there, despite only speaking in beeps and whistles (cheap programming. What cha gonna do?). He even gets a Transformation cog installed into him so he can transform like the locals.
     
  15. Gerth

    Gerth Well-Known Member

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    I've got several fanfics, but they're not really things I would turn into shows if given the chance...okay, maybe SKR-9,
     
  16. UltraAlanMagnus

    UltraAlanMagnus See ya!

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    Something Akin to the Likes of JoJo's Bizarre Adventure & Age of Extinction.
     
  17. Gerth

    Gerth Well-Known Member

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    This is good in my opinion, with lots of nods to several TF continuities,
     
  18. TF Cagle

    TF Cagle The Prime of Reviews

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    I actually am using my stop-motion idea.

    The human turned their backs on the Transformers and actually attacked them, destroying both the Autobot base, and the Nemesis.

    Megatron and Optimus are in similar situation of that of TF Prime Optimus.

    Eventually the two leaders are repaired looking to escape the world fighting back, and trying to head back to there home where they try and rebuild the Omega Lock.
     
  19. MasterZero

    MasterZero Taking a Break

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    Thank you. And that was all just on the top of my head. :) 
     
  20. Gerth

    Gerth Well-Known Member

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    It took me a month or so to come up with mine,