commissioned by ARS (i think this is part of the box art... i can't remember if he actually used it or not). i posted this in my deviantart account, but hadn't posted it on any boards yet. i think the alt mode could have come out a little better in the line art, but hal said he was happy with it. colors by eric burns.
Nice work. Yet there seems to be something a little off to me about the vehicle mode. Does anyone else notice something off or is it just me?
Very sweet. In the spirit of helpful criticism I would say that the mouth looks a bit 2-D; especially in the colored version ... or not even 2-D, just floating above the flat plane that is her face. And her lips don't look all that femenine. Partially because they don't have any particular shape (pretty straight across) and partially because they're not colored with 'lipstick.' Not big things, but like I said - in the spirit of helpful criticism ...
thanks, hal! i wasn't exactly sure what part of the box it was on. lol i guess i hadn't asked before. hiro prime> yep. i believe it's the left side of the window or just the angle of the whole thing. i spotted it after i inked it, but left it as is. >.< WBG> heh. yeah. i see it. i messed around with the mouth so much too. XD oh well.
I only see something 'off' with the colors. The front of the car is completely white, while the robot mode has it in pink and black (chest/stomache section). Still...100% kickass.
Very nice work Beams, in top form as always. And Eric's colours are always a blast. Any particular reason why you don't post on the AS anymore?