Obsidian's Lament and other post-Beast Machines stories

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Andersonh1, Mar 13, 2007.

  1. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    Cheetor's leaving!? 0_o

    Did not see that coming. Now, who's he talking to?
     
  2. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Well, Rattrap did figure it out and call him out on it earlier in the story. So I have signposted what he has in mind. :) 
     
  3. Rotorstorm

    Rotorstorm Wreck n’ rule

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    He's talking rhetorically to himself and reminiscing about Optimus.

    I don't see how Cheetor can just wash his hands of everything. He's not Optimus but Optimus would never have given up like this. I guess everything is just too much for him. I doubt it will be too long before the rest of the council realise that Cheetor was right and try and get him back when the sh1t hits the rotorblade so to speak.
     
  4. Anodythe

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    It's very sad to see Cheetor leave in such a state. He's tried so hard and very little seemed to work. He may have been second choice, but he wouldn't have been chosen if he had not had what was needed for the task at hand. I just wish the Oracle was more open-handed with information for him.

    It's good to see your update. I know how hard it is to get free time with smalls at home! Hope you are all well.
     
  5. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    It has become too much for him, exactly.

    The free time is limited, but things are settling down now. My funnies page has certainly suffered a lack of updates lately. :) 

    I'm actually about a week ahead on pages for this story, and hopefully having bought myself some time, I can keep up the regular updates until the story is done.
     
  6. ssg4life

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    it's obviously not the end for cheetor's part of the story. if it had been, i think shane would've made it more dramatic. he might not be willing anymore, but i still get the feeling he'll be back
     
  7. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    He hasn't actually left Cybertron... all will be clearer after the next few pages are posted.
     
  8. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    cheetor leaves, pred's access vector sigma, bring back the big baddies...oh wait, this is a Shane Anderson story, so it can't be anywhere near that simple!
     
  9. G1Wheeljack

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    So where's Cheetor off to?
     
  10. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    Ah Cheetor, always with the rash decisions.
     
  11. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    You know Shane, I really have to compliment you on that Cybertron. It's very well done, the intricate details, like some of Primus showing through. :D 
     
  12. Moonscream

    Moonscream YES, We Exist, and We DON'T Want to Date You

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    I bet he's being shadowed...

    --Moony
     
  13. Greyryder

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    *suddenly has memories of an old Real Ghostbusters comic, where a werewolf was singing "I'm being followed by a moon shadow."

    Yeah. Random. I know.
     
  14. Moonscream

    Moonscream YES, We Exist, and We DON'T Want to Date You

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    :lol 

    --Moony
     
  15. thumpmonkey

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    Wow. I just read this entire comic words cannot describe its epicness so,
    :jawdropper: :bay :bay :bay 
     
  16. Pun-3X

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    Bah! Thought I'd posted.

    Anyway, it's interesting to see Cheetor ACTUALLY leaving. Although I can't help but wonder if something might make him turn around. Like, some kind of flashy, lighty effect that can be seen from space? We'll have to see...
     
  17. Rodimus_2316

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    Yeah, I've got a gut-feeling Cheetor WILL return to Cybertron.
     
  18. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    He hasn't actually left yet...

    I'll be out of town on Friday, so instead of the usual Tuesday/Friday updates, I'll post Monday/Thursday this week.

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  19. deathsheadx

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    i'm am not liking where this seems to be going.
     
  20. Anodythe

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    Oh crud...