this has been sitting in my portfolio for a bout 3 months now. i started it and just couldn't find the time or drive to work on it anymore. basically, i tried to include as many fancharacters as i could and kinda lost focus of telling a good story. i really didn't even have the dialogue set yet. i do plan on working on a new one eventually with a much smaller group and a better story. ^^ anyways... hope you guys enjoy it. page 1 page 2 page 3 page 4
I just don't understand it. Your art is great (especially the first page with cybertron). All you need to do is letter the story and finish a few more pages. Why stop? I could understand if you were disappointed with the art, but when its good, why stop now?
thats the thing abt pin up artist and sequential artist. while pin up guys tend to be more perfectionist and focus on details, sequential guys are equally admirable in their consistency, pacing and layout flow. some guys excel at both. if you ask me, doing sequential is much harder since you rely more on technique and organization.
well... as i stated above and in the deviant art posts... bad/barely existant story plus not enough time. lol especially since i've moved to this new base (where i am currently). i've not posted much art up in the past 4 months. and once i got 4 pages into this, the story just turned into a big "jam-as-many-fancharacters-as-i-can-into-a-page-to-make-other-people-happy" thing... if i do my own fancomic, i want it to be story driven(and actually, i'm already working on that). in the end, this wasn't what i wanted... so it had nothing to do with not being pleased with the art. sequential art isn't a problem for the most part. i can handle that. ^_^
i think you should like do a 5th page with X-Warlock shooting Beamer and then say. "THE END?" i kid, i kid. anyhoo i'm sure your next one will be cool and looking forward to it.
shum> lol i give steve's character enough of my time as is. XD brave> yeah! i posted a colored design sketch of him awhile back. here's that pic http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12529733/ and another shot of him. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12490768/ i've also started a kitbash of him that i posted in the kitbash forum a couple of weeks ago of the guy. http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/thread89718.html still need to paint the guy. >.<
