My own comic series, Part Two

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  1. Starscreamer217

    Starscreamer217 Banned

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    Now, where was I? Ah, yes...

    Here are the
    SECONDARY CHARACTERS

    Enjoy! Or, as most you will, hate! :) 

    More characters and epsode synopsises coming soon!


    Senior Queso

    The hated twin of Mr. Cheese, he shares his family's genetic traits by living for the heat of battle. His expeiences crossing the US/Mexico border have granted him great skills in stealth, a vital asset in the many mishaps he and his brother face.

    Ravage

    Wolfgang's second-in-command, Ravage is a mutated alligator found on the street one day. Seeing how destructive and useful Ravage is, Wolfgang accepted him into his group with open arms... well, figuratively, anyway. His animal strength and carnivorous nature often give him the upper hand in many situations.

    Baxter

    Psychotic, unstable, and homicidal, Baxter is Wolfgang's spy. Frozen with a permanent sharp-toothed grin on his face, Baxter uses his insanity in battle to great effect.

    Private

    What you see on the outside is a cute, chubby little penguin with an innocent face. On the inside is a savage, sadistic megalomaniac who would love nothing more than to overthrow Wolfgang. Nuff said.

    Sergeant Epps

    A survivor of many battles, Sergeant Epps is one to talk to when you need backup. His love for the battlefield and inextinguishable honor have cost him all parts of his body besides his head, and, as such, frequently changes his Cyborg body.

    General Goose

    This tough trash talking general has seen many strange things in his time, and many more during his entire time fighting alongside the main cast. As gruff as he can be, General Goose is at heart the kindest and most respectable person in the entire army.

    Prowl

    There are some people who just aren't team players, but Prowl isn't one of them. A trained master in the arts of Metallikato and Circuit-Su, Prowl usually lets his actions do the talking for him. Ever since coming to Earth from Cybertron, he has become one of Jim and Mr. Cheese's greatest allies and a reliable reinforcement.

    Quarry

    Once human, Quarry is forced to exist as a mutated creature called a Euparkeiria. He's changed a lot ever since he was freed from his underground prison, and has since become a valuable ally to his human friends.

    Stonebiter

    A hulking rock monster, Stonebiter was another victim of the mutation experiments so long ago. Despite his fearsome appearance, he is at heart a gentle giant who only wishes to help his friends as much as possible.

    Razorfist

    Razorfist was the last completed experiment in the mutation efforts. His insect-arachnid form grants him much speed and strength.

    Sniffs

    Sniffs knows that the fight Jim and the others fight is worth it, and as such has become a valuable ally in the short time he's known them. He is also good friends with Prowl, and the two will usually pair up on adventures.

    Alien and Predator

    Whilst the Alien is merely fighting the villains for thrill, Predator is considered a genuine ally to the main cast. Both will occasionally battle Jim and friends, but they will usually never kill any civillians.

    The Dark Knight

    Bruce Wayne moonlights as the Caped Crusader, the Dark Knight... the Batman. He has sworn an oath to protect the weak, no matter where they may be.

    Raping Rex

    Despite being introduced as a demonic fire-breathing snake, Raping Rex has seen the errors of his ways after fighting in the Battle of Russia. His size and supernatural powers make him a dangerous opponent to any who oppose him.

    The Lingering Sentiment

    Before the Russian War, this enigmatic soilder tested the main group, seeing if they'd be ready. Now he's a solo agent, after leaving his underground friends at the army base.
     
  2. Jetcols

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    Not this again...
     
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    Starscreamer217 Banned

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    Yes, this again. XD Lovin the Swindle icon! XD
     
  4. Sharktibolt

    Sharktibolt Well-Known Member

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    No one is interested in a list of characters and plot/episode synopsis. Without pics or a video this isn't a comic. It's nothing more than an idea pitch.

    Besides, just telling everyone the plot/episode synopsis kinda ruins the whole point of getting people to read such a comic.
     
  5. BenPrince

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    This didn't go well for you last time did it, Son?
     
  6. Starscreamer217

    Starscreamer217 Banned

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    Ah, my friend, if I had the cash or space, I'd get a printer, or something. And I don't know how to draw worth a crap on Paint. I also don't know how to transfer a photo from a camera to a laptop. Go figure, my friend.
     
  7. BenPrince

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    Perhaps you could come back and showcase it when you finally do have those things and gain some artistic talent?
     
  8. Wreckgar

    Wreckgar Anthony Stark Moderator

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    I clicked this topic just hoping it would be worthwhile.

    I was wrong.
     
  9. FreshDebesh

    FreshDebesh <b><font color=brickred>oye chak de phatte!</font> Veteran

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    We know whats gonna happen. This is spam at this point. Post this in a blog or something and link it to your sig. It's not gonna work here otherwise.
     
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