See below - StarFire_MK2 has found a good version... Now that is a great idea! Another one for the steal pile! Cheers! Brilliant! Love it. The idea steal pile keeps getting bigger and bigger...
Feel free. You inspired me a little to do my comics and sold me that awesome Unicron, so you can steal what you like. Eagerly awaiting your next update, as always.
Very nice stories here, the first one was a tiny bit rushed in parts, but it worked out nicely in the end. I like the use of Gobots in a story, and I liked your use of the not-so-commonly-featured characters as main ones, You have my subscription and I have downloaded your PdFs. I wonder what you will introduce next, will we see Jetfire II (skyfire? ) find the Swerve toy? if so, how might he react? where ever the story may go, I look forward to it.
Thank you - ideas now stolen! Yeah I know the feeling. I can't keep up with half the comics I want to. Maybe at Christmas... Thank you and glad you enjoyed it. There were a few rushed parts in the 1st story, which I'll try and improve on in this one. As for Swerve, well, watch this space! Right, update time finally! A second prologue only, with a couple of the new characters. And one old one making a comeback, of sorts. Sorry this is a bit short. There will be more soon (I hope!):
Wow. That is rather creepy and upsettin' for him. Also; Bonus points for ya showin' off Scalpel in his Alt mode! ^_^ (yeah, there's oughta be some kinda reward for showin' off an alt mode difficult to use in the context of the story.
lol, true...he was a little douche in the first part of the story so winding up stuck in that creepy form is the least he deserves
Interesting! The upgrade is a very Twilight Zone-ish sort of thing...and it would appear that the Alien's crew haven't quite finished with Jetfire yet...
The others are right, the body-swap is creepy. But, for me, it's the ease with which it happened that's creepy. That's a powerful force that can do that at will. Great stuff, need more!
Hi all - sorry for lack of updates. Hopefully now I've got a decent internet connection for the first time for months I'll be able to start posting again. There's a real-world development that will be worked into the story. Thank you for reading!
