Fan Art: Feedback on my transformer toy design?

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  1. griffn29

    griffn29 Well-Known Member

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    I decided to make an update to an old idea that I had for a toy of Bozo from Robo-Capers:

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    I decided to first re-update the design and have him transform instead of a cinclair c5 into an electric motorbike like this one:

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    I thought about how to give him a transformation unique to a motorcycle transformer and here is where I'm at now:

    Transformation:
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    Parts layout:
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    I have a little bit of an idea how transformers work because I've dissasembled a few, but I don't really have a ton of experience with 3d modeling so that's where I'm stuck right now.

    I'm also thinking of changing the design a little bit too...

    Anyway, feedback is appreciated! :) 
     
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    griffn29 Well-Known Member

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    After seeing the reference image again, I did a rough update to the design a little bit. Is this better?

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    Omega495 Mostly Harmless, aspiring Mistake Not

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    Maybe you can start by customizing an existing bike transformer instead of building from scratch. your last sketch reminds me of ROTF knockout

    Knock Out (ROTF) - Transformers Wiki
     
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    Yeah. thanks for the advice :)