Fafireguy's Adventures

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by fafireguy, Feb 12, 2012.

  1. fafireguy

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    Comic 10
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    The mini fig in the middle is suppose to be Diana and the legless person is my character's son wearing a shirt of my character.
     
  2. King Waspinator

    King Waspinator Well-Known Member

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    great comic
     
  3. fafireguy

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    Thanks man.
     
  4. fafireguy

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    The First Task part 1
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    Also I am planning on replacing the three Gurren Lagann copies with you readers.
    There will be at the most 5 readers for now, so comment for one of these colors (red, blue, green/silver, yellow/grey, or white) and first come first serve.
     
  5. Merchhounds

    Merchhounds Well-Known Member

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    Amm Green/Silver.
     
  6. Mr. Chaos

    Mr. Chaos Head of Illuminati Chapter 517

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    My only suggestion, which you seem to be already moving towards, is to be careful with panel counts. You get too many panels and you end up bogging the readers down. Sometimes it is better to split strips up into two shorter ones than to have one long one.

    Otherwise, a good start.
     
  7. fafireguy

    fafireguy Leader

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    Is it OK if it is for a fight scene?
     
  8. Mr. Chaos

    Mr. Chaos Head of Illuminati Chapter 517

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    Of course. The rule of thumb, for me personally, is 4 panels for your standard strip, no more than 10, and even then it NEEDS to be worth it. Every panel should be trim and without fat...that is how you ensure your comic can be read with ease.

    Of course, that is purely my opinion...feel free to ignore or pay attention to it.
     
  9. Ranger Silver 6

    Ranger Silver 6 Bang Bang

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    blue...blue would be nice
     
  10. Datbotwithaface

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    Primus sure has good taste in team grouping.
     
  11. fafireguy

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    bios for most of the guys so far
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  12. maku098

    maku098 indeed a wise choice

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    Red!
     
  13. King Waspinator

    King Waspinator Well-Known Member

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    neat bios, they quite good
     
  14. fafireguy

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    Sorry for this one being a little late.
    The First Task Part 2
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    Also I am trying out the eye glow effect for only the Unicons and any bionicle/herofactory built character
     
  15. King Waspinator

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    looks great
     
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    You know what double comic today.
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  17. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Hot Shot as Kamina. That is gloriously epic. :rock 
     
  18. fafireguy

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    Yeah, I had a feeling that you would get that idea from Hot Shot.
     
  19. fafireguy

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    comic 11
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    PS. on panel 6 it should be Experimental Exosuit
    Oh and guys don't forget that there are still 2 more reader spots left for you guys to be (yellow/grey and white)
     
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    Comic 12
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    and let the suspense begin.