http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25145015/ *finally some time to sketch again... been way too long...* Was supposed to be part of a transformation sequence, but I edited that part out of the image. May work on that later again though... C&C appreciated as always.
you should do a more forced perspective. looks a bit on the flat side. something like this view: http://www.tfw2005.com/gallery/Cybertron-Downshift/DSC00725 more dramatic that way.
not bad hans... if it was part of a transformation sequence, the forced perspective thing probably would been a bit awkward... so given what the drawing was intended for, i'd say the angle is alright... though on it's own, it is a little boring. you do draw nice looking vehicle modes though
Ta for C&C Attached the version where I didn't remove it (note: this is only half of the full page, was gonna do scenery and would try to add in speedlines - which I never really know to place well so far ) The plan was to add Cyb. Thundercracker in a dive firing at Hot Shot as reason to transform. But I dunno if I'll finish it, so... ^^" Looked a bit too stiff to me. :/
Bah, you worry too much. This is a sketch, I'm 100% sure than once you finish the result will be priceless.
This sketch exquisite! my only complaint is that you called it sketchy. I always seems to bug me when people say clicky or sketchy.
