Early Ron Friedman Draft of TFTM Available for Download

Discussion in 'Transformers News and Rumors' started by Anguirus, Dec 10, 2010.

  1. StarSaber

    StarSaber Well-Known Member

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    In all fairness, he's probably just used to writing Joe miniseries where they do exactly that.

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    thats a pretty big gaping hole, the earth is going to die if they continue.............they continue but nothing else happens ? LOL

    I would have liked to have seen that whole sublot not only animated but continued to be honest though.
     
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    Precisely, he just recycled the same story structure over and over and over:

    • Start a battle with minimal setup and no real motivation
    • Introdump the new characters through the fight
    • Have the battle be resolved with the villains retreating
    • Only then introduce the actual main villain and establish them as a threat
    • Have a second battle, usually with the good guys taking a beating
    • Split the heroes off into three or more groups, usually to find and assemble pieces of the MacGuffin
    • Have two members of one group end up trapped "behind enemy lines" and have to make their way back, aided by a mysterious new friend they meet along the way
    • Spend most of the runtime bouncing erratically between these various plots until the heroes are finally back together
    • Then, having had 100 minutes to play with, cram the final battle into the last 6 or 7.
    • End on a goofy comedy beat.
    Have I missed anything?
     
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  4. StarSaber

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    Nope!

    That sounds about right!

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