Like Some you guys. who are donig their own re-writes of rotf, i Decided to make my own. So Yeah, i will Try to Incrase the Screentime or soem characters and i will add New bots to the story

so yeah. So For have Arcee to Have More Screentime. Do you Think She Should Join Sam and Others to Egypt? in my re-write?

EDIT: oh i forgot to mention she josisn them i tneh matrix search, and such before the whoel fight just i ncase u get confused

 

Arcee was in Egypt. All three Bike Sisters were. Remember, they found Sam when he was hiding.

 

What movie were you watching?

 

I think the guy means Arcee to accompany Sam and Bee and the others to Egypt, like the Twins and Leo did.

I'd say no, but have longer scenes where Arcee and the other Autobots appear; and more scenes for just the Autobots.

 

Personally, if I were rewriting it, I wouldn't just have Arcee accompany Sam and the others to Egypt, I'd have her there instead of the Twins. Otherwise you have too many robots for the type of mission they went on, which was basically avoiding contact with both humans and Decepticons.

But I would replace the twins with Sideswipe and Jolt, since I personally would like to see more of them. And a fight scene or two for them.   Arcee and Ironhide could have their job of finding Sam in Egypt played up so they have more screentime.

But in the end, it's your rewrite to do whatever you want.

 

Sure, modify it if you'd like, ROTF was a mess, as far as the script goes.

 

i think the twins should be cut, and in Egypt it should be Arcee OR Sideswipe instead of the twins. or both.


twins suck.

 

No, do something else.

 

I definately think Arcee should get a bigger part.

Which reminds me-sorry I haven't found the time to start on writing some of those dialogues and stuff you asked me too. I've been sort of focused on a lot of other story ideas.

 

Whatever you end up doing, for the love of heaven, check your spelling.

 

Honestly, instead of the Twins, I wish Sideswipe was with Sam, Bee Leo, Simmons, and the rest of the group, that could've been great!

 

This

 

Yeah Arcee, had Arcee been in TF1 she would of had some screen-time.

ROTF give her a minute of scenes and a line of dialogue.




Yes. but sideswipe as well needs some screen-time and dialogue. They had so much potiental for newcomers. however it is your script so you do what you want.

 

This I agree with.

 

Two lines.

 

replace the twins with Sideswipe and Jolt.

Nuff sed.