I finally found a use for a broken KO Bonecrusher I had in the junk drawer. The story is that Drift is "interrogating" Bonecrusher for information on an upcoming Decepticon raid on a new energy source discovered by scientists.
not so good a start.... Im not saying give up, it's just all you did was post one picture, there's no text, and you had to tell us the storyline. That's a bad sign. the comic is supposed to tell it, not the forum post. All I'm saying is no one will want to read this if it's just going to be these one shot things and you just describe what happens.
Well, in this guy's defense, he did originally post this in Fan Art, so his "start" is very much just that. I'd say give him some time to develop things a lot more as well as offer up any encouragement to help make his story all the best
DS: Broken toys make great casualties,don't they? Obviously, Bonecrusher's alibi hasn't got a <sunglasses> leg to stand on.