Beta Reader Battle

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by GingaMagnus, Jul 7, 2014.

  1. bookwormdalek

    bookwormdalek Gotta get a grip

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    Bookworm set up a tripod, which then implanted itself into the ground. It then embedded itself using spikes. A cable shot out of it, and embedded itself in the other side. Bookworm and Robo-Takei then zip-lined across.
     
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    Jetting across the chasm at high speeds, Nemesis readied the combination of crystal and transwarp technology he had created in order to neutralize the Heart by reversing it's subspacial polarities along the axis of transwarp aperture. In truth, he had no idea what the previous sentence meant beyond a vague understanding of "holes" in subspace that contained a object's subspacial shadow.

    Therefore, the device would reverse the polarity of the shadow and change the structure of the Heart in realspace as well. Thus, there would be no potential of use by Book or danger.
     
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    The next puzzle was a door, just a simple door. Bookworm walked up to it and attempted to open it. It would not open however. He tried shooting it, it still would not open. He then backed up as he stood in thought. He then smirked as he went to the wall to the left and punched it. Nothing happened. He went to the wall on the right and punched it. The wall fell apart, which revealed a cooridoor leading to the next section.
     
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    Continuing to attempt to catch to Book, Nemesis felt strained.
     
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    Bookworm and Robo-Takei now stood in front of multiple large columns in a large room.
    "The Heart is here...inside one of these columns..." Bookworm said.
    "Oh myyy..." Robo Takei replied. "How do you know which oneee?"
    Bookworm merely smiled, not sinisterly, or evilly, but a truly happy smile. He punched the column in the center of the room as all the other columns disappeared, merely holograms. In the center, the marble of the column cracked away to reveal a medium sized crystal with a purple glow surrounding it. It was levitating in some sort of force field.