I think your work here looks really good. I would like to see a bit more tonality in those shadows, though. Also, I never tire of my buddy Beamer's work. Never
OK, I updated with it with a greater contrast between light and dark areas. I does look a lot better!
This is it. I REALLY like how your shadows are cast and such, it's just that I want to see more tones of shadows, as in there need to be some that are near black, and some that are simply a lighter shade of the colors they're cast on. As it was when you first started, the whole piece had just about the same tone to it, making your colors look a bit more flat rather than providing dimension to the piece. I can see! You're on your way