this still belongs in creative...lol but im not going to knock you because you did put some time and effort into this. the main thing that catches my eye are the gapped out floating shoulders and everything that goes with that. if there was a way to clean that up some you could be onto something. have you tried reaching out to the guys on weibo to see if anyone wants your design in some shape or fashion. it will either go one of 2 ways and the 2nd is not that favorable but it is still worth a shot. that is better odds than vegas my man.