It should also be assumed that anyone who had gone the rite of autobrand would have signed up knowing who was who in the war. If he has "just woken up" then you needed to make that clear. Have someone else find the stasis-pod than just having Sundor fly up to Optimus without giving any context off the bat. Or let him put on an act to show how "surprised" he is to have awoken from a stasis pod in the distant future. Otherwise it gives the impression that this guy is supposed to be an Autobot that doesn't know who Optimus and Ratchet are which would make no sense from any present Autobot's perspective. I guess just keep it clear with them that he's "new" to this despite being from the past, and try not to make his status too obvious.
He's a spy, though. He should at the very least know the name of the faction hes's spying for's leader. If I was born in the 1800s and was brought to the future to be a spy for the enemy, I'd at least do my homework before the fact.
Faf left. Ranger is still in. The story is that it's 2000 years since cybertron fells, both the autobots abd decepticons are very different from what they once were. The autobots a large force with multiple sub factions, with the leadership composed of the leaders of said factions. The decepticons however have fallen apart, slithering into multiple sub groups that fight eachother sometimes with megatron no longer around. Only OC's.
Yep! He tries to make the best out of a bad situation, only to make the situation worst (such as raising Gears' Energon pressure to the point he was left brain dead for a week). You know what, I need to make a short of that.
http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/transformers-video-discussion/1039431-transformers-evolution-webseries-17.html#post12800075
Thanks. I'm working on the second episode's script now. I'm going to be shooting most of tonight after about 5:30. Episode 1 and 2 are going to be shot at the same time.