2D Artwork: Predaking Park

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  1. PirateDragon

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    Okay so one should not watch both the premier of Predaking and Jurassic Park 3D in one setting because one mind tends to come up with ideas.

    So welcome to Predaking Park...

    I have two different on ones right now, the first has the extra yellow to help break it up from darker backgrounds and the second that might be suited for a white background.

    But it still feels like its missing something to me.

    What do you guys think?
     

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  2. JirwemTheGreat

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    I saw it in 3D this weekend! And the the day after, I bought my first non-cyberverse figure from the beast hunters line, so I know the feeling...:crazy: 

    Anyway, nice work! I'm especially happy that you made a version for darker backgrounds (as is the case with my iPod:tongue: ), so that's always a plus in my book.
     
  3. Constructor

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    I think it would be better if it
    was called Predacon park.
     
  4. PirateDragon

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    I whipped one up real quick that says Predacon Park. What do you think?
     

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    Ømnidrive Stop.....think......fart.....and keep on going

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    BETTER!!!........I mean the first one was cool but this one is....well.......BETTER!!! :D 
     
  6. strangeguy32000

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    It needs some Mecha-foliage in the large Red area under the Script. Also, Predaking need not be so big on the Logo so as to Leave the border of the Circle.
     
  7. moreprimeland

    moreprimeland Optimus told me to do it!

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    I think PK would POP more from the background if you add a nice glow to his eyes....highlight his facial features more. Just my :2c: 

    Otherwise, love the idea. :thumb 
     
  8. Ripclaw

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    **Waits for someone to turn this into a video**

    Nice idea and good job on the pic. :thumb 
     
  9. Ultrawave

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    shockwave as john hammond.
     
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    It looks pretty good!
     
  11. PirateDragon

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    Thanks for the input guys!

    And put it against a black background to show it off a bit better and I played a bit with his eye too. Don't know if I got the shade of yellow right for it yet...
     

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  12. kaindarkstar87

    kaindarkstar87 Decepticon Outcast

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    so, just checking, you are InsnePirateDrgn of RB, right? if not, some one stole your stuff.. lol
     
  13. PirateDragon

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    Yup that is me. Same person just different nickname spellings since theres character limits...
     
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    it feels like it should be predacon park
     
  15. SaberPrime

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    Should be Predacon Park. Calling it Predaking Park would be like a spoof on T-Rex Park. Only a single dinosaur inside rather than all dinosaurs.