The Unofficial Transformers Fanfic Review! (TOTFR)

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by cybertron2006, Oct 3, 2009.

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  1. F*** YEAH!!!

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  2. Nah, it's not popular enough.

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  3. Ghost Rider (If you go to Allspark's Beast Mayhem, you should know what this is.)

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  1. Unicron the Pla

    Unicron the Pla Cybertronian Accountant

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    Oh thank Primus you guys have been on top of things. I have suffer a small accident and was indispose for some time. But I am back. Great job Tr3adst0ne. If you dont mind I will take care of Prime_Directive´s story.
     
  2. Tr3adst0ne

    Tr3adst0ne Well-Known Member

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    You sure about that? I can take care of it if you need me to.
     
  3. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Anything I can do maybe? Yes? No?


    I'll sit here twittling my thumbs patiently. :D 
     
  4. Tr3adst0ne

    Tr3adst0ne Well-Known Member

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    Interesting how there hasn't been a lot of requests as of late... ;|
     
  5. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Yeah, now that we have lots of reviewers to do them all!
     
  6. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    Well, I've got work for you guys, I just finished Supernova: Secret War (Part 2). If yousa guys could review that, that'd be awesome!
     
  7. Tr3adst0ne

    Tr3adst0ne Well-Known Member

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    Well, in that case I'll leave it to Delta since I'm working on Hellbound atm.
     
  8. Prime_Directive

    Prime_Directive less than meets the eye

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    Just a little curious, Tr3adst0ne, but how much of Hellbound do you read per day? Average is fine.
     
  9. cybertron2006

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    *Walks in, taking notice of the dust-covered desk in which he would do review after review.*

    I think it's time for a revival... Yessssssssss...
     
  10. cybertron2006

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    IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT'S TIME FOR A REVIEW!!! *Yay!*

    Transformers 5: Worlds at War
    Created by: My good friend Hiraga
    Date of First Chapter: December 11th, 2009

    Analysis: Wow, the last few chapters of this incredible story just sum up one thing: When there's a fight and there's sentient robots involved, no one's gonna get out unscathed. Especially if your name is Optimus. Yeah, he died, but Hiraga has made his death so awesome that... well... read for yourself. Thou shalt be amazed-eth.

    Pros: Epic ending as always, the Storm, Blitzwing.

    Cons: It ended.

    Wrap-Up: Holy donut in a hole, Batman! I have a feeling we have found the new writer for the TF Movie series, and his name is Hiraga! Memorize the name, guys, because his writing skill and aptitude for telling one hell of a story is certain to win many accolades in the near future.
     
  11. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    I'd like to cancel my request for Supernova Part 2 to be reviewed. I'm persuing a different FF idea.
     
  12. cybertron2006

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    For almost a year... a figurehead of the Fan-Fic section was inexplicably absent...

    But not for long... THE REVIEWER IS BACK... tomorrow. >.>

    I'll reveal what story I start reviewing soon. ;D
     
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    Ironhide1706 Elessar Telcontar

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    Please review my fanfic (Ironhide: Remembered) if you have the chance. I'd love to hear your thoughts! :) 
     
  16. cybertron2006

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    Nice to see people wanting reviews again. I'll start reading y'all's later today. :D 
     
  17. Jayhan

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    Hey there! My attention was directed to this thread when I was searching for a very popular thread, and I'm happy to say that I found this one here!
    I've read a little the beginnings of Cybertron2006 and Unicron The Pla's reviews, and I do say that I find them simple, understandable and up to the point. That is what's really cool.
    I'm VERY tempted to ask you to review my fanfiction, because I really, TRULY want to get better at writing, plotting and character development (and of course staying true to characters' personalities), especially when it comes to writing about Transformers. However, I can see you guys are a little busy at the moment with other reviews, and my fanfiction isn't complete just yet, so I'll just wait until I've completed my story.
    Anways, just to say I'm grateful that people like you are around to help out and give constructive critisism. Your work is greatly appreciated. Thanks, guys. ;D