Thanks Tr3adst0ne. Oh I just read it from here. Oh well seams like I have a lot of catching up to do. Not to worry when it is a good story to read.

 

Let us continue with some reviews.

Title: DREAM MACHINE
Creator:Tuxedo Mark
Date Created: 04-22-2010
Review: Very interesting fan fiction AN honestly I have to say it is very well written. This should be made into a freaking episode of G1. Maybe to replace the B.O.T.episode. (I am a fan of Swindle and I still dont like that episode) The story mainly focuses on the interaction between Carly and Arcee as they try to stop another evil Decepticon plot. I dont want to spoil the story but you even get a outlook on Arcee´s origin. Overall a great story.

Pros: Makes a lot of references to the old G1 show, Great writing

Cons: None really, could use more Ratbat.

Rating: 10/10

Final Words: Great story, good concept and very imaginative. Bask in the glory of your perfect score you deserve it.

 

Would someone please do Transformers: DBA Forever now? I think we have enough story going now that it's reviewable.

http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/transformers-fan-fiction/306707-transformers-dba-forever.html

 

Thanks for the kind review.  

 

Transformers: Hellbound is almost finished. Once it is, I'd like you guys to review it. (Again.)

 

Sorry for the delay in reviews lately I have had a bad couple of weeks but I have to get back on the horse, so later today or early tomorrow I will post a review.

 

Hey, whoever is reviewing my story Transformers: Supernova: Secret War (Part 1), I gave it my final update, and it looks much cleaner and nicer,  

 

The reviews are cool, but could you place a link for the fics in your reviews so that we can go straight to them.

 

A promised here is my latest review We will being with a review for my friend Delta and the rest of the Dewbot/Bacontronian Alliance.And since my loyal followers asked for it here is the link to the story for quick access.
http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/transformers-fan-fiction/306707-transformers-dba-forever.html

Title: Transformers: DBA Forever
Creator: DeltaPrime
Date Created: 05-30-2010
Review: If I had to pick two words to describe this fan fiction it would be the same words utter by my leader class Bulkhead with the Headmaster attachment. 0wnag3! , pure and simple. The concept is really quite simple but at the same time so innovative and fresh. Basicly this fan fiction is a collaboration of most members of the Dewbot/Bacontronian Alliance with the writing talent of Delta as their editor. Though Delta remains the head writer every update or so he receives help from the other members of the Dewbot/Bacontronian Alliance, thus creating a truly unique story with many great characters and different points of view in short words; this story doesn't get stale easily. (unlike mine) Kind of makes me want join the all mighty DB alliance.

Pros: So many diffrent points of view and voices helping, Good amount of action, lots of laughs, breaks the fourth wall

Cons: None really. Maybe needs a handsome young fan fiction reviewer (lol)

Score: My higest score is 10/10 but if it was up to me I would give it 11^123/10 (Eleventh to the 123 power over ten)

Final Words: An amazing fan fiction and one I recommend everyone to read.

 

Wow, thanks man! I think I speak for the whole team when I say we really appreciate it.  

 

You do, and we do.

 

Ah thanks guys, and once again sorry for the delay. Up next is Transformers: Supernova: Secret War (Part 1) your review will be tomorrow.

 

Hey guys, it turns out that this old thread has a new reviewer! Would the newbie please raise his hand for us?

*raises hand*

Oh would you look at that, it's me! That's right, if you want me to review one of your fanfics, PM me and I'll do it as soon as possible. And, in a shameless plug, I also have the TF Tribune open to anyone looking to update as well. It's fun to do, and we already have quite a nice following. So in summary:
1. I'm the new reviewer
2. PM me with your requests.
3. I'm shamelessly advertising my own Transformers Tribune.  

 

Transformers Supernova: Secret War Part 1
Author: Galvanitro
Date: 05-18-10

Review: I'm very, very sorry for the long wait, guys. School's get awfully busy over here in San Diego. Regardless, on to the first review...

In the first of a multipart series, set in AU universe where the Autobots defeated the Decepticons, we are introduced into a conflict that's been re-ignited. The first part of the saga spans nine chapters, and follows the exploits of the Autobot Nitro and Cryonix, the new leader of the Decepticons.

There's a whole plethora of other characters from the Beast Wars continuity that makes an appearance into the story. The absence of Megatron and Optimus in this universe is an interesting change of pace from the norm of other series. It offers a degree of latitude that leaves room to expand upon something new.

Pros: From the first paragraph, The action is fast-paced and frenetic from the intro onwards. It keeps the readers engaged enough to stay involved in the comings and goings of the new civil war.

Cons: While I can read through the paragraphs just fine, I couldn't help but notice that you switch between past and present tense. You want to speak as if it's already happening. Also, the things that some of the characters say doesn't make them 'themselves' (essentially slight OOC). Keep at it, it's starting to get interesting.

Score: 7.5/10

 

Okay, Transformers: Hellbound is done! If it's not too much trouble, I'd love a review now, please.

 

I'll give it a whirl.

 

Thanks!

 

Thanks so much for the kind words!

 

Thanks so much for the kind words, and criticsm!

 

You're welcome, Galvanitro.