The Unofficial Transformers Fanfic Review! (TOTFR)

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by cybertron2006, Oct 3, 2009.

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  1. jetfire4321

    jetfire4321 Banned

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    c2006 you should review transformers 3 script by jazzmatic prime
     
  2. Lock Cade

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    Cybertron2006 and other fanfic reviewers only do reviews if they have the permission of the fanfic authors to do so, and that's only when the fanfic authors request their works be reviewed. Readers of fanfics cannot request a review of a fanfic they've read, because it's not their work and they don't have the permission from the fanfic authors to have their work be reviewed.

    If Jazzmatic Prime wants his TF3 script reviewed, then he will request it. Otherwise, don't expect his work to be reviewed unless he gives the fanfic reviewers permission to do so.

    That's how these review threads -- for fanfics as well as one for the funnies -- work.
     
  3. Tuxedo Mark

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  4. Unicron the Pla

    Unicron the Pla Cybertronian Accountant

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    Please be patient Friends me and Cybertron2006 have been very busy. I promise you it will be done soon.
     
  5. Unicron the Pla

    Unicron the Pla Cybertronian Accountant

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    Hey long time no see fan fiction lovers. I am back to continue the review thread. Sorry for the delay but here we go.
    Title: Beast Wars Future
    Creator: Robcbh
    Date Created:11-07-2009
    Analysis: An interesting tale and story, accompanied by its own art thread. Please correct me if I am wrong but it happens to be a retailing of the Beast Wars Story but with a new light. For starters as evident from the art thread ( check it out, I am no artist but i can sure tell you it is one amazing art thread) new designing, new characterization and new names. You see instead of the ship crash landing on prehistoric earth it crashes into the distant future where our heroes take forms of modern new Animals. Very entertaining.
    Pros: Cool art thread, great writing, innovative idea
    Cons: None really
    Score: 10/10
    Final thoughts: A great story with a great and innovative twist, I find it fascinating and I am only at part 4. You have to read this all the way through. Great Story.
     
  6. cybertron2006

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    Thanks, Trans+Crazy.

    Follow these rules and yours will be reviewed.
     
  7. Robcbh

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    Thanks for the Positive Review!
     
  8. Unicron the Pla

    Unicron the Pla Cybertronian Accountant

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    You are more than welcome it was a pleasure to read your story, RIDUltraMagnus your fan fiction is next.
     
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    Your too generous, Unicronthepla.
     
  10. Furious Rodimus

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    I would like to submit my fanfic for your consideration

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    http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/transformers-fan-fiction/305995-transformers-3-rise-predacons.html
     
  11. cybertron2006

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    Methinks we need more reviewers.
     
  12. Unicron the Pla

    Unicron the Pla Cybertronian Accountant

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    Me thinks you are right boss man, oh and I apoligize for the delay my computer has been a little buggy lately.
     
  13. Tr3adst0ne

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    I suppose I can volunteer myself to assist since nobody else is willing to step up.
     
  14. Unicron the Pla

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    Thanks Tr3adst0ne your Hired! That is if Cybertron2006 dosent mind.
    Anyway patience friends I will have the latest review up soon. Just work is sometimes a cruel mistress.
     
  15. Galvanitro

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    I would like to submit my story, Transformers Supernova: Secret War (Part 1) for review by you guys. Thanks in advance!
     
  16. Unicron the Pla

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    Back form work, I have a few hours to kill and decided I should catch up on the reviews. Here we go.
    Title:Second Sun
    Creator: RIDUltraMagnus
    Date Created: 05-26-2010
    Review: A rather short tale but I imagine it is still in progress. Set in the movie verse some times into the future with Sam working for the Honda company. And do to some new threat from outer space Bumblebee is force to leave Sam. But as luck would have it our hero will not be left alone to fend of evil hordes of Decepticons. Optimus issues him a new powerful guardian Ultra Magnus.

    Pros: Interesting idea, would like to see where this is going.

    Cons: Rather short but mainly do to the fact that it is still a work in progress.

    Overall: Nice concept would like to see where the story keeps going.
     
  17. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Just rebooted the DBA fanfic aka Transformers: DBA Forever. Feel free to review when ready.
     
  18. John_Force

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    Just dumped another section. I have it posted on another forum, because I deleted the old version because it wasn't getting any replies.
     
  19. Unicron the Pla

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    I apologize for the delay in the review had to get a darn generator fixed. And since it appears I have nothing to do for the next couple of days I decided to maybe catch up on the reviews. So here we go with a marathon of reviews. First stop is Tr3adst0ne who has been very patient for a really long time.

    Title: Duality Complex - A Transformers/Code Geass crossover
    Creator: Tr3adst0ne
    Date Created: 06-21-2009
    Review: What can I say about this fan fiction. To begin I had never seen Code Geass before but after reading this fan fiction I actually started to look for a couple of episodes to see it. Not a bad show at all. And most certainly this fan fiction is proof of it. This story is written with great care and precision, I like the way Tr3adst0ne first gives us a brief outline of the events prior to the story as well as the list of mayor characters and the roles they play. To continue the chapters are written with great care and greater dialog, action and details. This was truly a marvelous story to read. After watching a few episodes of the show and going back to read the story i was able to appreciate even more the fan fiction. Specialty the feel of the Britannian Empire and the Decepticon alliance they formed. Great story. Worth checking out.

    Pros: Very innovative idea, great detail.
    Con: Not really a con but it might be a little bit to long in each post. Might think of separating them into more post. Just a minor thought dough.

    Score: 8.6/10

    Fianl Thoughts: Not bad at all, definitely made me check out a cool show.
     
  20. Tr3adst0ne

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    Thanks for the review. Leave Supernova to me, I got that one covered for now.

    Just outta curiosity, Unicron: did you read the story via the boards or FF.net? The reason I'm asking is because I haven't updated over here in a very long time, but FF.net's up to chapter 26 as of... this month I believe.