Transformers III: ENDGAME

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Shadow25, Nov 15, 2009.

  1. PB379

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    I hope you had a good Christmas, we are all looking forward to the next Instalment.
     
  2. jgoss

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    awesomeness shadow and screamer!! but i have to tell ya magnus was cold i thought.
     
  3. Shadow25

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    Well, jgoss, I'm glad you got that vibe from him as that as how I'm aiming to characterize him. Just realize WHY he's cold- he's been completely drained due to his losses in the war.
     
  4. Hiraga

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    How tall are Runabout and Runamuck? Because I keep imagining them as Sideways' height.
     
  5. Shadow25

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    Well, I'd say they're a smidge shorter than Sideways and Barricade. I'm drawing up a design for them, which makes them brutish and stocky (similar to Stockade's basic shape), so they sacrifice height for bulk, but I'd say they're around 12ft. tall, a good deal taller than the Twins but not immensely so.
     
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    Exaclty how I imagined them, with that bulky look. In fact that's Jazz's height I think, the 12 ft, so that gives us more of an idea. And Jazz is about four feet taller than the Twins.
     
  7. PB379

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    When is the next update Shadow?
     
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    This thread feels dead... Update please?
     
  9. TrentGgrims

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    Hey this is REALLLY good, the only problems I have are Rodimus and Galvatron, I HATE them, I dont know why though, and Unicron blowing up neptune. It should have been Pluto because Plutos "officially not a planet"


    But still overall a really great ff and needs to be sent to Bay and Kruger NOW!!!!!!

    (first Fanfic and loving it all!!!!)

    Didnt I say that Before????? :) 
    Trent
     
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    What I do like is Prime seeing what their war is doing to the Earth and doesnt like it.VERY nice. Only other problem(s) i have are is that it is set up like ROTF and that Prime gets another jetpack.

    Oh and Galvatron.

    And Starscream should come back. Hes BADASS
     
  11. Shadow25

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    Thanks for the feedback, TrentGgrims. In response to your comments:

    -I chose Neptune instead of Pluto since Hiraga used Pluto as Unicron's victim in his fic. Just wanted to be a little more original in that regard.
    -Yeah, I'm glad you are picking up on the similar pacing to ROTF, even if you don't like it. I wanted it to have a similar feel (Just with a bit less goofyness) so it is structured in a similar way, with the placing of the action scenes and the exposition.
    -The jetpack part of Prime's armor is only minimal, it's not the most pronounced feature as in Jetfire's armor. Think a sleeker version of the trailer-armor concept that was shown a while back.

    I'm glad you like it so far. And sorry guys for the lack of updates, I've had tons to do lately. Gonna try to get one out tonight or tomorrow, and finish this week.
     
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    amazing, congratulations :D 
    and I'll keep waiting for more!!!!
     
  13. Shadow25

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    Thanks, I'm really glad you like it so far! Hope you enjoy the ending.
     
  14. jgoss

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    no problem shadow like i've said before when you have the time post it no rush.
     
  15. Sorrow Six Star

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    you are such a geewun fanboi... I love it!

    you should go back and add sunstreaker to the Ark.... please please please!
     
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    Oh, man, this is the first fan fic I've had the patience to sit through, and I must say, THIS WAS INCREDIBLE! I can't wait for the end. BTW, my moneys on Galvy, cause I'm a Geewunny bitch that way.
     
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    Again, I have to say that this is one of the few fanfics that I have had time and patience to sit through, and I love it. I can't wait to see more!
     
  18. Shadow25

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    Uh oh... that's not the way I wanted to come across in writing this. In fact, even though the character choices are G1 based, I hoped that the unique spin on certain characters might differentiate this from G1 and make it more plausible in the movieverse settng. And since I'mnot trying to make this feel like G1, I'm sticking with Skids and Mudflap as the Autobot Twins. This means no Sunstreaker, sorry. What specifically felt G1 here to you, besides the Dinobots?
     
  19. Sorrow Six Star

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    dinobots... wheeljack... prowl...
    Arcee with a pelvis. the ARK
    hot rod ultra magnus.

    I am not finished reading you may get away from that.
    (but I hope you don't)
    the lack of original transformer themes in the movies made them weak to me.

    and I am actually picturing "bayformers" versions of these characters so it's good...
    we need more detail on what movie wheeljack and springer LOOK like...

    good thing is you have this set up to go several ways and have me wondering which thing you will go for.
     
  20. PB379

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    I think the version of Springer he used was one of the unused V-22 Concepts from the second movie. I can't remember What his version of Wheel Jack looked like, but he had a Thread in the Movie Section of the Forum (I think?) that detailed them all. Do a Search of his Posts / Threads and you should find a description.