The Unofficial Transformers Fanfic Review! (TOTFR)

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by cybertron2006, Oct 3, 2009.

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Should This Thread Be A Sticky?

  1. F*** YEAH!!!

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  2. Nah, it's not popular enough.

    2 vote(s)
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  3. Ghost Rider (If you go to Allspark's Beast Mayhem, you should know what this is.)

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  1. Autobot_Wall-E, Dec 7, 2009
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    Ok, I started a new fan fic. I am once again going to ask that you please don't review For the Sake of All until I post back here saying to do so. I want to introduce the whole main cast and get the story off the ground beforehand. Thanks for understanding.
     
  2. cybertron2006, Dec 9, 2009
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    Yeah and guess what? They disconnected my internet until I give them the weed. Weed that doesn't exist. Weed that I don't HAVE.

    Looks like I'll only be here when I'm at school... :( 
     
  3. Unicron the Pla, Dec 10, 2009
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    Hey sorry to here that boss man, I know what it feels like to be wrongly accused. As for me finals and homework is impeding me from reviewing, but I promise ext Tuesday will be free to work once again.
     
  4. Autobot_Wall-E, Dec 10, 2009
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    Thats gotta be theworst to be falsely accused and thrown in jail/ getting your stuff shut off.

    Are they even going to investigate? :/
     
  5. cybertron2006, Dec 10, 2009
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    Guess what? They found out the fingerprints on the drug bags weren't mine! I'm home FREE!!!

    And I have $50 to boot for my troubles!
     
  6. Lock Cade, Dec 10, 2009
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    That's good to hear.
     
  7. Tr3adst0ne, Dec 10, 2009
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    Cool beans.
     
  8. Hiraga, Dec 10, 2009
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    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    So could someone do the final review for Legends of Cybertron?
     
  9. cybertron2006, Dec 10, 2009
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    I will, since I started the review series for the fanfic.

    It also was the first fanfic I reviewed! :) 
     
  10. Crazymadman, Dec 10, 2009
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    And could you also review my friends and my fanfic?
     
  11. Unicron the Pla, Dec 11, 2009
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    Hey guys I am finally done with all my work and to celebrate I am finally free to due a review.
    Lets us begin.

    Name: Ace convoy: Beyond the Divide
    Creator: Ace Convoy
    Created: 08-26-2009

    Analysis: A very interesting story, short really wished it could continue. Basically set in a different universe outside of conventional Hasbro universes, called Aceverse. The story begins with the Autobots and the Decepticons each getting a human that has been given tremendous Allspark power. Great fight scene.

    Pros: It has Sari, new interpretations of characters
    Cons: It is way to short

    Rating: So far I wold give it an 8/10 but like i said it is to short.
     
  12. Ace Convoy, Dec 11, 2009
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    The story is not over yet I've just been too busy to continue I'll try to get it going next month.
     
  13. cybertron2006, Dec 11, 2009
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    FINAL REVIEW IN A SERIES!!!

    NAME: Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron
    CREATOR: Hiraga [is god]
    FINISHED: uh... this week? :redface2: 

    ANALYSIS: The long awaited end to quite possibly the best TF Movie-based fanfics. Optimus Vs. Unicron? Win. Simmons and Waylan? Win. A devastated Las Vegas? WIN. Let's just say Hiraga is actually God and give him the rating He deserves (I'm a proud Baptist Christian).

    RATING:11.0/10.0

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  14. Hiraga, Dec 11, 2009
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    Thanks man. That means a lot. :D 
     
  15. Tr3adst0ne, Dec 11, 2009
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    Looks like someone had a massive dose of milk and cookies. X3
     
  16. cybertron2006, Dec 11, 2009
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    Well actually it's eggnog and Colby cheese.
     
  17. Tr3adst0ne, Dec 11, 2009
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    lol Still got the link I sent you?
     
  18. cybertron2006, Dec 11, 2009
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    ...?

    Heh, I'm done with reviews this week.
     
  19. Tr3adst0ne, Dec 11, 2009
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    The link you requested for Duality Complex a while back before your... troubles.
     
  20. cybertron2006, Dec 11, 2009
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    Can you please post it again?
     
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