This. This is what you asked us to do, and you can't just say 'oh I hate it' without giving some real criticism.

 

 umm...ok, any reason why?

 

He doesn't like some of the more creative and new idea characters... like Bizarra, Chuckles, etc...

 

Character Name:Artic Aurora
Faction: Autobot
Position: Intelligence agent with minor ninja training
Alt-Mode: Cybertronian Jet (Earth mode: Harrier Jet... i like starscream)
Weapons & Equipment: Energon Scyth and Ice blasters
Special Abilities: Can fly at mach 4 and freeze anything with blasters
Bio: Is normally very sweet, has white plating with blue trim. Is a Femme, gets along well with mechs, is about the same size as Bumblebee, Wasp and Cliffjumper. Is freaked out by space barnacles, snickers behind authoritative figures backs. Loves to place paint bombs in Sentinal Prime's quarters doorway. Knew Blurr from Academy. Speaks formally to everyone.
Motto: Sorry, that's miss Ice Princess to you!

 

sorry 

 

I actually loved chuckles but bizzara just didn't work for me

 

the names a little weird but otherwise I like it

 

"There's no such thing as a flyin' autobot!"

 

there was a thread like this in general disscussion, i made a character named gravedigger in that thread. you could read about him if you are brave enough to digg it up.
but in the meantime,

name: mirage
faction: autobot
function: arch-bishop of the church of primus
altmode: hovercraft (although his robes conceal any kibble)

strg:5
aglty:7
endr: 6
skill:8
intl:9
frblst:0
other powers: 9

powers: has a cloaking device which lets him become unseen, although he dosn't have any weapons, he has mysterious light powers.

bio: once a military bot, he was shocked when he experienced battle. he made freinds with obsidian in the military. one night he had a dream that primus told him to escape and to preach to the population that was loosing faith. with is newly aquired light distortion powers, he was able to escape and join the church of primus. as a clergyman he tought gravedigger to be a peaceful being, trained thunderwave in the arts of lightbending, and forseen the prophecie of protoform X. we last recall protoform X to be enscribed in megs databanks, wich means it is somewhere on earth.

 

Name: MotoSythe

Faction: Autobot

Motto: "Hello, Decepticion. I'll be your reaper for the day..."

Alt Mode: Cybertron Mode: Cybertron car/ Earth Mode:Uno motorcycle

Weapons: Twin bladed energy sythe, laser pistols

Special Abilities: Has a self made "holo-guise", giving him the ability to
disguise himself as anyone or anything, also has jetpack in robot mode

Personality: Usually gentlemanly and kind, especially around fembots, almost
always focused on his missions, good under pressure. Also has good morality.

Bio: MotoScythe used to be a top recruit in the Autobot Camp, and was well
on his way to the Elite Guard, until he accidentally kills an Autobot during his pre-graduation mission. He was later stripped of his rank and was shot out into obscurity. During his exile, he trained himself into improving his fighting abilities and stealth, and lived on by doing odd jobs with the Decepticons under the alias "ScorgeCycle".

Milions of years later, during the new Autobot-Decepticon war, MotoScythe returns to the autobots with an offer to assist in hunting down and stealing intel from the Decepticon. Now, with redemption on the way, He secretly tracks down his enemies on Earth with occasional assistance from Optimus Prime and his team.

Strength - 7
Intelligence - 9
Speed - 8
Stealth - 10
Endurance - 5
Courage - 9
Firepower - 8
Skill - 10

 

Character Name: Honey

Faction: Bounty Hunter, Decepticon by Defult

Alt-Mode: Cybertronian Motor Bike (Think of the Light-cycles from Tron.)

Weapons & Equipment: Crossbow

Special Abilities: Knowlege of Alien Languages.

Bio: Honey at one point attended the Autobot Boot Camp. At one point, Honey was in need of a replacement crossbow, but was unable to find one of the same model. Honey was forced to buy one off the black market from Swindle. Swindle supplied her with a replacement, however Honey didn't have enough to pay him back. Swindle made a deal with her: she brings him whatever advaced wepons she could find and he gives her a new crossbow. Honey excepted his offer, so she went looking for any advanced wepondry in storage at the camp. Unfortunatly, one of the drill sargents caught her. Since Honey was caught stealing, she was kicked out of camp. Having been expeled from bootcamp, Honey was angry with Swindle. Honey decided to become a bounty hunter inorder to track down Swindle. So far, she hasn't caught up to Swindle yet, but is slowly becoming a well known dealer on the black market.

Notes & Errata: When she was still in bootcamp, she had planed on one day becoming an Elite Guard Intelegnce Agent.

 

a little confused about him but it's nice that someone made a character that is part of the church of primus though his rank would actually be going by church vernacular Administrator

pretty good character he adds some extra grey to the autobots

 

pretty good

 

Character Name: Havok
Faction: Autobot
Rank/Purpose: Black-ops Commander
Motto: "Sometimes you have to get your hands dirty to do the right things,"
Alt-Mode: Alien Hover-Tank, similar to this
Weapons & Equipment: Twin cyber katanas that can connect to form a dual-bladed spear. Wrist mounted blasters on each hand which can combine to form a powerful cannon. Jump Pack.
Special Abilities: Cloaking abilities; his armor is created from a special synthetic substance that reflects and refracts light, giving him to blend in with the environment for short periods of time.
Bio: Havok is the quiet but highly skilled leader of Team Ghost, a special elite black-ops team whose rile is simple; get into or behind enemy lines and cause as much chaos and mayhem as possible before letting the main guns roll in and finish the job. They are masters of keeping themselves concealed and unknown, secretly sabotaging Deception supplies and such and manipulating them against one another.
Due to their secretive and lethal nature, only the Autobot High Council and Ultra Magnus himself know of their existence.
Havok is a rather quiet and distant bot, due to the dangers of his job and some of the things he has done. He fought in the Great War, where he formed Team Ghost. He used to be a very friendly and nice bot, but his job and some of the questionable things he has had to do have drained such traits from hi,
Havok believes that how he accomplishes a mission doesn't matter, as long as he accomplishes it. He is not afraid to get his fists dirty and some of his methods are rather harsh and questionable. In fact, some say that he is now more Decepticon than Autobot, but he ignores such comments, knowing that what he does he does for Cybertron and the survival of his species.
Havok is a master at servo-to-servo combat, and proficient in cyber ninja skills. There is no one better than Havok in the delicate art of spying and infiltration, except for maybe the Decepticon Shockwave.


More Team Ghost and their enemies later 

 

a very good one

 

Character Name: Transmutate
Faction: technically Autobot
Role: Herald Of Primus
Alt-Mode: Allspark Wave Cannon
Weapons & Equipment: 2x Arm Mounted Sonic Cannons 2x Kusarigama
Special Abilities: General Allspark Energy Manipulation, Allspark Scream generated from mouth capable of either great destructive power or empowering every piece of technology in a 10 mile radius with Allspark given life
Bio: Transmutate was born directly of Primus' will and is one of the first of Primus' agents to arrive on this plane of reality and is following a prophecy from The Covenant Of Primus to find two other Heralds Of Primus: An Autobot whose destiny has yet to be truly realized and, A Decepticon who wields The Heavens Fire who shall together take the Vacant Thirteenth Throne Of The Traitor and signal the approach of The Darkest Hour
Motto: can't think of one 
Notes & Errata: in many ways my version of Transmutate is the exact opposite of the original Beast Wars version for example while the BW version was ungainly and hideous my version is beautiful and graceful

 

Character Name: Cloudburst/Daniel Witwickey
Faction: Autobot Sub-Group: Pretenders
Role: Autobot Pretender Sub-Commander
Alt-Mode: Techno-Organic Combat Mode
Weapons & Equipment: 1x Thunderbolt Pistol 1x Lightning Whip Jetpack
Special Abilities: Low Level Allspark Energy Manipulation, Strength Equivalent to Bulkhead, Enhanced Speed, Shared ability with other Pretenders to Change Size once Transformed
Bio: Daniel Witwickey used to be a normal child despite several mildly traumatic experiences involving the Autobots until several months after the "Omega Incident" he was kidnapped by Lockdown and taken to a hidden research base belonging to Meltdown who planned on using him and several other Detroit youths for his second wave of Pretenders for the Decepticons after the first wave proved to be powerful enough that even Autobot Elite Guard members couldn't stop them. By the time that the Autobots discovered the location of Meltdown's base and raided it he had already altered Daniel and the other children but he didn't have the time to finish it and because of that the only way that they were able to keep them from dying was for Sari to infuse them with Allspark energy which caused them to reformat into a Techno-Organic state closer to Sari's than Meltdown's monstrous Pretenders. After Daniel and the others recovered and were told what had happened to them they unanimously decided to help the Autobots stop the Decepticons and bring Meltdown to justice. Daniel got the chance to act on his promise sooner than he thought he would when the Decepticon Pretender Bomb-Burst attacked Detroit and he became the first Autobot Pretender to activate his abilities and managed to defeat Bomb-Burst. Now Daniel is the Sub-Commander for the Autobot Pretenders and has become a more mature and courageous person and a valiant warrior, now if only he could get a certain red haired girl out of his thoughts...
Motto: CLOUDBURST, PRETENDIZE (transformation code)
Notes & Errata: basically my intent for most of the Autobot Pretenders is to have an opportunity to redeem the reputation of some of the human kids that have popped up over the years in TF meda and as a reference most Autobot Pretenders transform and look similar to Sari while most Decepticon Pretenders look while transformed similar to Meltdown's canon experiments and while untransformed look disfigured an mutated and transform rather violently with a couple exceptions

 

Character Name: porkimus
Faction: autobot
Role: eating trash
Alt-Mode: a walker animatronic pig
Weapons & Equipment:fork,spoon,knife,jAam, energon goodies
Special Abilities: eats anything
Bio nce a simple animatronic pig he became a sentient robot when wreck gar dropped an allspark fragment at the sumdac amusement park. his digestive system has a allspark enhanced acid that can eat through anything but porkimus's allspark enhanced armor. now he helps detroit by eating trash and decepticons even though he is as small as a human.
Motto:are you gonna eat that?
Notes & Errata: do not feed him cheese or else he will eat everything in his path

 

how silly    

 

thinking about pokimus makes me hungry for some porkchops.