Good advice there. I recently started doing that for my comic and the shots have been much better. Reflector walking off mad at being replaced.
Um... I guess I could, but I'm not gonna. You bumped this all the way from last week just to say that? XD Oh well, I was ready to bump it myself anyway. I'm taking a shot at a more serious story now, hopefully it'll go over well. Episode 6: Seed I hope Arnval's stand doesn't detract from things too much. I decided a while back I'd leave the super-cool special effects to the masters like Chaos Incarnate, Polenicus, Coolhand, et al. I'm just telling a story with toys. I mean, even if I tried to edit out the stand, they're still standing on a TiVo.
That's a great start! Keep it up, and don't concern yourself with effects. Story comes first, and everything else is icing.
I didn't even notice the Tivo till you mentioned it!! great story or good laughs, who cares about the rest. And your story is off and running. Rickety Prime, cool.
I just LOVE the way that they're loading that Shinki onto Prime's trailer WITH A JCB BUCKET! Exactly. End of the day, effects are nice eye candy but it's the STORY that matters. Good jokes and/or good story are what keep me reading a strip and this one's looking good so far.
Umm... would it be bad if I admitted that I have no idea what that means? I just thought he looked like he turned into some kind of front-loader thing. H'ray for unintentional humor! Thanks everyone for the positive reinforcements! I'll try to keep 'em coming at a somewhat-regular pace so that the cliffhangers don't 'hang' for too long.
Uwa? This comic has taken a serious turn? But a nice start, and I agree with the everyone else here that substance > eye-candy. Juvisy makes such a great damsel in distress.
You ain't seen nothin' yet. The funny isn't gone for good or anything, though, I just came up with a story I wanted to try to tell too. Anyway, sorry this took so long. There were some personal issues. I won't say what the bad news was, but the good news was "at least I didn't die." (Heck, the way things are going, maybe that's the bad news.) But y'all don't need to worry about that, I don't suppose... So enough of that! On with the show! Episode 7: Loss So... all you people that were complaining a while back that the Shinkis never lose in these comics? I hope you're happy now.