Looks great. The plot dumping happened at the same time as action. I like seeing all the generics and cybertronian modes. The large scenes in the city have a lot of interesting things going on. Cybertron definintly is NOT deserted like in SIEGE and such. The transformations and movements are fluid too. You might actually be able to adit your photos to darken lines and increase contrast but that is totally up to you. I am getting a marvel g1 feel from this exposition.
Quick little aside: I've seen on this site that the Allspark is a fairly unpopular concept, and I was honestly a bit surprised no one brought it up when I posted any of the story. But anyways, I figured I might as well drop a little info about my future plans for the series: Without spoiling anything, there is going to be a twist about the nature of the Allspark. One that is completely my idea, and not used in any official fiction. I hope it'll provide some variety towards its other appearances. But it'll be a long while before the truth is revealed.
For whatever it's worth, don't concern yourself too much with the opinions of other people in other threads. This is your universe-- you've got free reign! Do what you will with it. That being said, you have my interest!
Yeah, I had this planned for a while, so this wasn't a reaction to anything. It was mainly just to stir up some more interest.
I've gotta start focusing on this more. Here's the next two pages I've finished: Keywords: Transformers: Unlimited, issue 1, Robots in Disguise Part 1, pages 5, 6
I read ironhide's speach bubble before looking at the picture and I already knew who was talking. ARNHIDE The battle scenes are good.
Caught up and loving what I see so far. I can't wait to see more of this series as it goes on. Keep going on and keep telling the story YOU want to tell.
