Starfire22
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Starfire22

:D, Male, from The middle of America.

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    1. Fallout
      Fallout
      hey man, do you have aoe lockdown?
    2. nobleboivin
    3. nobleboivin
      nobleboivin
      Saw what Chaos Incarnate said and he shouldn't have said it. I think he's just overreacting.
    4. nobleboivin
      nobleboivin
      Oh okay. Thanks.
    5. nobleboivin
      nobleboivin
      Do I need to ask anyone's permission if I want to make a character that's from the MMS? I have an idea for a plot line but I didn't want anyone to get mad at me either.
    6. Hadlen_Weltall
      Hadlen_Weltall
      Hard to pick just one except for the television series part of the Cosmic Era.
    7. Hadlen_Weltall
      Hadlen_Weltall
      Thanks for keeping the humor alive in the Gundam model thread! happy building!
    8. LegoTFGuy
      LegoTFGuy
      I understand completely- I have SO MANY plot threads that have gone unresolved and I've forgotten about (such as Sharkticomics Soundwave and Swindle). I've actually toyed with the idea of a fan fiction that chronicles their attempts to return to Sharkticomics.
    9. LegoTFGuy
      LegoTFGuy
      [part 2]Another example is that, in my first appearance, there is nothing in the comic that says that Crosshairs is LegoTFGuy, just a side note after the comic. As such, the humor of my line about Scoop wanting to ban Bronies is lost on the audience the first time they read it.

      Also with this is the fact that you haven't established anything about the MMS or who is a part of it, despite that being the main concept that the comic is based on. A better intro comic would have you talking to me and Warpshard about something to do with the MMS, including plenty of name drops so we know who's who.
    10. LegoTFGuy
      LegoTFGuy
      [part 1]I think it's biggest flaw at this point is that you don't introduce the character's personalities, but rather just have them in some random situation. Some personalities parts are implied- such as your cracks at Kup for being an old fart. But beyond that his personality needs to be developed. The most important thing to remember when story writing is that the audience doesn't know everything about the characters- you need to explain it to them. (Also, unless Kup being old plays a major part in the comic, I would have suggested making a different first comic that establishes the setting and using the Kup gag later.)
    11. LegoTFGuy
      LegoTFGuy
      I think two updates per day is about the most frequent that update should be released, so your pace is just fine.
    12. LegoTFGuy
      LegoTFGuy
      Year of combiners next year! (I'm going to need more money...) Also Brainstorm.

      No idea.
    13. LegoTFGuy
      LegoTFGuy
      Nothing really. You?
    14. Moy
      Moy
      You're sig!!!! LMAO!
    15. Haloid1177
      Haloid1177
      Because they don't know you didn't, you didn't handle the situation maturely and there around a bunch of curse words at her, and threatened to call the cops when she said she would. You don't look good in this regardless of what you know.
    16. WhiteMocha
      WhiteMocha
      Thanks, that's fair. Apologies for being overly negative and sarcastic, I think I just get rubbed the wrong way when people generalize about entire states/cities/whatever (and particularly when people casually throw around death wishes... I know it's not serious, it's just obnoxious). Honestly you had the most reasonable opinion in the thread, an opinion that I share (that I wouldn't remove any particular city or state from the country). I guess that's why I was puzzled about your reasons for starting the thread. I should have either stated my opinions more diplomatically or just stayed out of it altogether though. Just hit a few triggers for me, I guess. Sorry!
    17. Starfire22
      Starfire22
      That's a shame. Breakfast is my favorite meal of the day.

      Anywho, how are you?
    18. EnergonWaffles
      EnergonWaffles
      IHOP has great Belgian waffles.
      In a college town atm so almost everything here is geared towards wings and pizza haha. Not too many breakfast food places
    19. EnergonWaffles
      EnergonWaffles
      Waffle House is like the McDonalds of waffle cuisine! Except I don't have to guess whats the food. :D
    20. Haloid1177
      Haloid1177
      Nah everyone should see that fanfic.
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