hey

I read a portion of Broken just a few minutes ago.

I must say, as will be reflected on my review, it is very interesting.

What else would they say? :lol

What all was there? I don't remember.

Yeah. I have no idea how leaves became 'Vietnamese', but it's funny. :D

I see you sure enjoyed my autocorrect, huh? :lol

Thanks. I may check it out one day.

hey

Of course, dude, you deserve it. It's a great fanfic.

Sure thing, I ronhide. From one United writer to the other, gladly.

Hey, it's your turn to work on Episode 3:

Chapter 6 (800-1200 words):

"We spend some time with Shockwave, as he analyzes the fight and intercepts the transmission between Jetfire and Ironhide. He tells his drones to hurry on the energon.

He then proceeds to watch the fight between the four squadrons and the navy fleet. Terra commands the fleet in strategy, as Laura helps keep crew members safe. Jetfire and Thundercracker fight together with the air forces. Here, a focus is shown on Terra's skills as well as the military doing their best (but struggling) to adapt to the Decepticon threat."

Please post it in halves (when you feel you are about half way finished; post it; and then work on the other half)

Just to let you know, Shockwave in our series will turn into a jet. No object modes are going to be in it right now.

Don't bother finishing it, I will.

How close are you to finishing? You've been taking awhile to write the chapter.

You never told me what you thought of the Grimlock idea.

Sorry, we're sticking with characters who've had toys made; so it'll need to be something different.

A G1-style Cyclonus that is loyal to Megatron (and potentially later Galvatron if we ever go that route) would be okay with me though.

Which Cyclonus? Oh, and I've got a neat idea for Grimlock that I'll be PMing you about on the United forum sometime soon.

How's Chapter 2 coming? And have you decided if you're going to add any characters?

Hey, I've got a thread up on our site for character selection for Season 2, check it out.

C1-S2 is up; ready for an episode review from you.

Whether you approve it or not, you should go ahead and write. Instead of writing a section, you'll be writing a whole Chapter (Chapter 2):

"While that was being figured out, Shockwave landed deep in the forest of Maui. He sends drones to mine the energon, and decides to engage in a war game with the naval fleet surrounding the area, to test their effectiveness. He sends a squadron of jet drones out to attack the ships.

Ironhide lands his ship nearby, and begins to go through the forest. Shockwave notices him almost immediately and sends five drones after him."

(Stay in Shockwave's POV the whole time, just show one of his monitors pick up Ironhide landing, and watching him get off of the ship, and having him send drones after him)

It'll need to be 1000-1500 words; but feel free to go a little shorter if you need to (not too much though)